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A Night At Womans Paradise

A Night At Womans Paradise

by svethryth
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It's louder than I expected.

Not the kind of loud that hurts, but the kind that wraps around you--bass like a second heartbeat, low and sensual, thrumming through the floor and into your spine. I hesitate for a moment just inside the entrance, clutching my purse a little too tightly, trying to play it cool while my stomach does nervous flips.

This is not my usual Friday night.

I'm not even sure why I came. Maybe it was the prosecco. Maybe it was the way Chloe's eyes lit up when she said, "You have to see this place at least once." Or maybe it was that quiet voice in me--curious, restless, hungry for something I can't name.

I follow the hostess through the haze of perfume and pink light. The air smells like coconut oil, champagne, and something darker--like anticipation bottled and sprayed across the room. She leads us past velvet-lined booths and low, glowing tables, where women lean in close over glasses of gold-flecked liquor. There are no men in sight. Just women. Watching. Laughing. Drinking. Wanting.

I take a breath. Try to relax my shoulders.

It's... beautiful here. Sensual without being sleazy. The stage curves like a smile in the center of the room, sunk slightly lower than the rest, surrounded by deep velvet benches and glowing drinks. Everything gleams. Everything pulses. And yet, it doesn't feel tacky. It feels--controlled. Intentional.

Like a secret that only the right women are allowed to know.

Chloe grabs my hand as we settle into a seat in the second row. She's glowing already, grinning like she know what's to come. She hands me a glass of prosecco, leans in, and whispers, "Wait till you see him."

I raise an eyebrow, teasing. "Who?"

"The one. You'll know."

I laugh, shake my head, and sip. The bubbles tickle the roof of my mouth.

I'm not drunk. Not even tipsy.

But there's a warmth spreading in me. Not from the drink. From the room. From the energy of it. The way everyone leans forward just a little, the way every woman here is tuned to the same frequency. It's like foreplay in the form of lighting and sound.

The DJ fades the background music out.

The lights dim.

"Ladies, the moment you've all waited for, please put your hand together for Brian." Echoes through the speakers.

Chloe grabs my knee, excitement pulsing through her fingers.

And then-- Then he steps into the light. The entire room exhales

He's tall. Not bodybuilder-big, but strong--built like someone who knows exactly what his body can do. Bare chest gleaming, black blazer loose around his shoulders, tie hanging like an invitation. His trousers ride low, belt undone just enough to tease. His skin glows under the lights, all muscle and sweat and impossible confidence.

It's like I'm under his spell. It's not just his body. It's the way he moves.

Like he owns the room. Like he's not performing. Like he's offering himself. To all of us.

Our eyes don't meet--yet. But I feel the pull already. My breath catches as he stands still In the center of the stage, just letting us look. Letting us want him.

And God, do I want him.

I feel strange. This feeling. The raw, electric charge building in my veins. The sense that something is about to happen--and I won't be the same afterward.

Chloe leans over again, her voice low and breathless.

"Told you."

And all I can do is nod.

Because she's right.

He's the one.

I can't look away. My eyes are fixated on his body.

He hasn't even moved yet--not really--but the air around him has shifted. There's tension now, the kind that stretches the silence, pulls the room tighter around him. He stands at the center of the stage like a secret we're all desperate to know. One foot forward. Hands loose at his sides. Tie swaying slightly as he breathes.

And then--

He rolls his shoulders.

It's a slow, deliberate motion, but it feels like a declaration. My lips part without meaning to. I catch myself before I exhale too loudly. Around me, I hear the rustle of silk, the sound of glasses pausing mid-air. One woman near the front moans softly, but still to loud.

He hasn't even taken anything off.

My thighs press together instinctively. It's warm in here. Too warm. Or maybe that's just me. My top clings a little tighter across my chest. I can feel my own heartbeat in the tips of my fingers.

He moves again.

This time his hips sway in a lazy, looping rhythm that draws my gaze down, down, until I'm staring at the narrow line of bare skin beneath the undone waistband. My mind fills in what's just out of sight. My breath hitches. Cloe told me the man go all the way, I can barely wait. I want to see him naked.

He crouches to remove his shoes.

I shouldn't find that hot. It's just shoes. But the way he bends, the tension in his arms, the way his muscles flex--it's deliberate. Every gesture is slow, smooth, choreographed but somehow... real. Like he's unwrapping himself for us, piece by careful piece.

When he stands again, barefoot now, he looks taller. More grounded. And somehow more dangerous.

Then the blazer.

He peels it off with the kind of grace that should belong to a dancer or a lover. One hand sliding along the opposite arm, then down his back, then--gone. The crowd shifts. I feel it like a wave, passing through bodies like a shared breath. There's a whistle behind me. A gasp. A low murmur of "fuck."

My stomach clenches.

The belt is next.

He undoes it with one hand.

The buckle clicks.

My nails dig into my thighs.

He pops the button, then the zipper--slowly--and that motion alone sends a flicker of heat through me so sharp it feels like lightning. His hips move again, just slightly, as he pushes the trousers down, revealing long, strong legs and--

God.

The slip.

It's black. Tight. Shiny. Barely covering it. Every inch of him is visible through the fabric, every line, every curve, every promise. The room reacts in sound--shouts, applause, laughter--but I stay quiet. Still.

I don't need to scream. I'm too focused. Too caught.

He is... breathtaking.

He doesn't just perform.

He hunts and I would give up anything to become his prey.

After that slow, deliberate strip that left the entire room panting, he leaves the stage. He steps down--off the platform and straight into the crowd--like a panther slinking into the jungle.

And the jungle?

It wants him. Every single one of us...

Hands reach out instantly. Fingers skim his arms, his waist, his thighs. I press my legs together, trying not to squirm in my seat. The bass rolls through the floor, and I feel it in places that make me blush.

He makes his way to the first woman.

She's sitting close to the stage, dressed like she owns the building. Black strapless dress, dark lipstick, high bun. Her body language screams take me seriously, then take me apart. She doesn't wait for an invitation. The second he's in range, she grabs him--both hands full of his ass, fingers digging in like she paid extra for it.

He laughs. Loud and raw.

Even I laugh a little, despite the heat curling in my stomach.

He says something against her, but I can't understand what.

The crowd loses it. Applause. Cheers. It's hot, chaotic and electric--and he feeds off it. He leans into her body for a slow, teasing grind, just once, just enough to make her bite her lip. I watch her eyes flutter.

And then he's gone.

He steps toward a woman in emerald green. She's standing now, bold and ready, one heel cocked out like she's about to give a TED talk on seduction. Her lips are moving, but the crowd is too loud--I can't make out what she says.

But I see his response.

He grins--wide and wicked--and then he reaches down... and pulls the waistband of his slip forward.

My breath catches.

Did he just--?

My eyes widen. My mouth opens, useless.

Did he just show her his cock?

I blink, trying to catch the angle, but I see nothing. The fabric snaps back before I can even lean forward. Whatever she saw--it was fast. Secret. Just for her.

She gasps. Laughs. Her eyes shine like she just got away with something forbidden.

God, I wish I had been closer.

Wish I'd seen what she saw.

He says something against her.

She doesn't hesitate. With a wicked smile, she grabs her dress at the top and yanks it down to her waist. No bra. Just perfect, perky breasts, bare in the glow of the stage light. They bounce slightly as she throws her shoulders back like she's proud to offer them.

He circles her like a predator who's just been given permission.

His hand trails along her waist as he walks behind her. The crowd is loving it. The woman practically radiates confidence.

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And still--my eyes drift back to that one moment.

To his hand.

That one second he opened his slip.

I feel my cheeks burn. My mouth's gone dry.

I want to be in her place. I want to closer to him.

Then he moves to another woman.

She's different.

Younger. Short, curly red hair. Glasses fogging slightly from the heat. Her boots peek out from under a burgundy dress with a thigh-high slit, and her hands fidget in her lap like she's not sure she belongs here.

He kneels beside her. Says something I can't hear--but I see her nod. Slowly. Nervously.

He takes her hand and brings it to his hip.

Then higher.

Until she's touching him--there.

She gasps, her whole body flinching with surprise, but she doesn't pull away. Her palm stays flat, exploring. His hips roll just once into her touch. Controlled. Powerful.

Then, gently, he lifts the slit of her dress.

Lace panties. A garter. The room erupts again. She covers her mouth, but she's smiling--glowing. Her friends scream. Someone spills a drink nearby. None of it touches her. In that moment, she's a star.

And I'm still in my seat.

Watching.

Burning.

God, I wished I could be her.

I try to tell myself I'm happy to observe. That I'm not one of those girls who he'd pick.

But when he turns... when his eyes scan the crowd again... they land on me--

Everything inside me stops.

He doesn't look away. Doesn't smile. Just holds my gaze.

Then he points.

I blink.

Me?

Chloe squeals next to me. "OMG, he wants you!"

I'm frozen. Shaking my head. Laughing. This can't be happening.

But it is. He reaches down, palm open.

And something in me lets go.

I rise. Take his hand.

And as he leads me up the steps toward the stage, toward the heat...

All I can think is: Please don't let this end too fast.

The stage lights swallow me whole.

It's warmer than I imagined. Not just from the bulbs overhead, but from the weight of all those eyes. The crowd roars behind me--cheers, whistles, clinking glasses--and yet somehow, none of it matters. Because his hand is still in mine. Firm. Assured. Grounding.

Brian leads me to the chair in the center of the stage.

I feel like I'm floating, like my legs aren't quite touching the floor. My body moves, but my mind is splintering in every direction: What am I doing? What are they seeing? What's about to happen?

And still, I sit.

The chair is smooth beneath my thighs. Cool, hard, real. I try to cross my legs--habit--but he places a single fingertip on my knee. Just enough pressure to part them again. His touch is so light, but it travels through me like a current.

Then he kneels.

In front of me.

And I forget how to breathe.

He reaches for a large champagne bottle like it's some sacred object. The glass glistens, beads of moisture dripping down its neck, catching the colored lights like they're diamonds. I can feel my heartbeat between my thighs.

He pops the cork.

It's a soft sound. Intimate. Like a secret whispered between lovers. I flinch just slightly, and he notices--his lips curling into the faintest smile.

He pours slowly.

The flute fills with bubbles like rising heat. I'm transfixed. Then--he holds it out to me, one hand extended, the other resting gently on my knee.

His voice is low but gentle. "Drink."

I do.

I lift the glass, careful not to spill, and take a small sip. The cold tingles against my tongue. One stray bubble clings to the corner of my mouth--and before I can wipe it away, his thumb is there. Slow. Deliberate. Warm.

He touches my lip like it's a privilege.

I shiver.

And then he takes my hand.

He doesn't ask. He guides.

Lower.

Down his stomach.

Past his waistband.

Until my palm rests directly over his cock.

The heat stuns me. What I feel stuns me....

He's hard. So hard. And the only thing between us is that thin, damp fabric of his slip. I freeze for half a second, wide-eyed, my fingers instinctively tensing against him.

But he doesn't move. He lets me feel. He let my hand go, but I don't want to pull it away. So I keep my hand there. Curious. Exploring. Terrified. And Thrilled at the same time. My fingers shift slightly. The texture. The weight. The power of it. All for me.

My breath trembles out of me.

He exhales too--low, hot, right against my cheek. Then his hand moves.

He touches me like I'm breakable.

Fingertips brushing my jawline. Down my neck. Over my collarbones. I close my eyes and melt into it. His touch is neither rushed nor hesitant--it's intentional. Like he's memorizing the map of me.

Then he reaches my breasts.

His fingers trail along the fabric of my camisole, featherlight, until he finds the curve of one nipple. He presses just enough to make me feel it. And I do. It tightens instantly. My breath stutters. My thighs shift.

I'm losing control.

And it feels amazing.

But he's not done.

His hands move lower--over my ribs, my waist, my thighs--and finally, he stops at my ankles. He studies me. Really looks. I want to hide. I want to be devoured.

Then he murmurs, "You have tiny feet."

I laugh. A nervous, breathy thing. Is he serious? No one's ever said that to me in a tone like that. Like it's... sensual. Like it's something worthy of desire.

He reaches down.

My left foot is lifted gently, like it's precious. He unbuckles my shoe--slowly, achingly--and slides it off. The air hits my damp skin, and I feel exposed in the strangest, most delicious way. His finger runs along the arch of my foot. I flinch. Not from discomfort--from need.

His eyes flicker up.

I'm watching him. Of course I am.

He smiles, and it's the kind of smile that says, You're not even close to ready for what I'm about to do.

The second shoe follows. Even slower.

Then his fingers find the edge of my sock.

My throat tightens.

He peels it down, inch by inch. The fabric clings slightly to my skin. Heel. Arch. Toes. Each part of me revealed like an unveiling. When he drops the sock to the floor, my bare foot tingles.

The second sock is worse.

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Worse because I know what's coming. And I want it. My foot twitches in his hand. I see him notice.

Then--

He lifts my foot.

Nestles it in his palm.

Reaches for the champagne.

I gasp, "Wait--" but it's too late.

The icy liquid pours.

First over my ankle. Then down the top of my foot. The stream glides between my toes, trails along the arch. It's freezing. It's euphoric. It's filthy.

I moan.

Soft. Embarrassed. But I don't stop him.

And then he leans in.

And licks.

From heel to toe, slow and purposeful. His tongue is hot against my cold, dripping skin. My hands the chair. My spine arches.

I've never in my life felt so owned by someone's mouth.

The crowd screams. I barely hear them.

Because all I can feel is this:

My foot in his hand.

His tongue on my skin.

And heat, everywhere, swelling between my legs.

And I know--

We've only just begun.

He lowers my foot to the stage floor like it's something fragile, something sacred.

And for a moment, I just... breathe.

I can't think. Can't speak. My foot still tingles where his tongue touched me, nerves vibrating like plucked strings. My whole body is caught in this quiet, shaking place between shock and craving.

He straightens.

And then his hands slide up my calves.

Slow. Steady. Confident.

Over my knees. Higher.

The denim clings to my skin, suddenly too tight, too hot. His thumbs press gently against the inside of my thighs. I feel the fabric stretch where my legs want to press together. I know what's coming, and still, I don't move.

I want this.

I want him to see.

His fingers find the button of my jeans.

I can barely swallow.

Click.

The sound is barely audible over the music, but it feels like thunder in my chest. He lowers the zipper--inch by inch--his knuckles grazing my lower belly as the teeth open, one after another. I exhale in little pulses. My core tightens.

He's watching me.

Not just what I'm wearing, not just how I look--but how I feel. Like he's reading my breath, the way my body shifts, the heat flushing my skin.

He hooks his fingers into the waistband and starts to pull.

And I lift my hips.

Just slightly.

Just enough to say yes. I realize that if I don't stop him, he will take all my clothes, but do I want him to stop....?

The fabric slides down my hips.

His hands follow.

He's not rushing. It's not utilitarian. It's ritual. His fingers trace the curve of my thighs through the opening denim. I feel every stitch, every nerve ending, every vulnerable centimeter he exposes.

And when the top of my panties appears--simple, black, damp with heat--I see his gaze flicker.

Not just desire.

Approval.

He keeps going.

The jeans slide past my knees. My calves. My ankles. He eases them off my feet and lets them crumple to the floor in a quiet heap.

I am half-naked on a stage.

Under lights.

In front of fifty strangers. Forty-nine if I count Cloe.

And yet, I've never felt more... wanted.

He steps back, just a little.

Looking.

And I let him.

My legs are parted, toes curling slightly on the cool stage. My panties cling to me like they were painted on. I know what he sees: soft, flushed thighs, my stomach rising and falling, the slight tremble in my knees.

But I don't close them.

I don't hide.

He kneels again.

And this time, he lifts my leg onto his knee--claiming it like it's his.

The bottle appears once more.

I brace myself.

The champagne spills in a thin stream against my inner thigh.

Fuck.

It's colder than before. And higher. It rolls down my skin like an ice kiss, sliding toward the edge of my panties. I jerk. My fingers dig into the chair. My breath comes in shallow waves.

Then his fingers follow the trail.

Not wiping. Tracing.

He doesn't press. He glides. Over goosebumps and shivers. Over skin that's now burning from within.

I bite my lip.

He looks up. Our eyes lock.

He knows exactly what he's doing.

And I'm starting to wonder how I'll manage the rest of this act.

He's standing in front of me again. His chest gleaming under the stage lights, droplets of sweat sliding in thin rivulets over his abs. He's already seen so much off me. He touched me. He licked me.

And yet--I want more.

He places both hands gently on my hips, fingers just barely slipping under the hem of my camisole. I stop breathing.

Not out of fear.

Out of awareness.

His thumbs brush the warm skin just above my belly. It's the softest touch, but it sets every nerve in my body alight. I feel completely present--every inch of me tuned to his rhythm.

I lift my arms.

It's a quiet surrender. No performance. No crowd. Just me saying: go ahead. Take it off.

He draws the top upward. First over my belly, my ribs--then higher. As he lifts, I feel the air lick at my skin, already damp from heat and nerves and champagne. The sensation sends shivers straight to my spine.

My black lace bra comes into view.

He doesn't rush.

As he pulls the fabric higher, his knuckles graze the side of my breasts--accidentally or not, I don't know. My nipples are already hard beneath the lace, reacting to the cold, to the friction, to the anticipation.

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