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She takes a deep breath and stands before room 1226. The sounds of a television coming from the room across the hall. She straightens her shirt, and gives her skirt another smooth down. Then she knocks firmly on the door. After what seemed like an eternity, she can hear the door latch being pulled back and the door slowly opens. An eye behind tinted glasses appears around the corner, looking her over. Then door opens wider and a husky young man in his late to mid twenties stands before her. He pushes his glasses up on his nose and steps back, letting her in the room.
Why can't she ever get somebody who looks like George Clooney she thinks to herself as she smiles politely and walks into the room. He smells like he's just had a shower and has redressed. His hair still damp and combed over to one side.
The room is fairly decent with a king size bed, armoire that holds the TV, and a desk with a mirror above it. At least the sheets will be clean she thinks to herself, as she puts her bag down on the desk.
The young man follows behind her, kinda of shuffling his feet as if they hurt to walk on them.
She turns to face him. "I don't do any kinky shit, no drugs, no alcohol. I'd prefer you not cum on my face, or crap on it... AND if you hit me, I'm out the door. Do you understand?"
He nods his head.
"Its five hundred up front for two hours."
He takes his wallet out of his back pants pocket and counts out five one hundred dollar bills. She notices his hands are a bit shaky. He folds the money and hands it to her. She takes it and puts it in her bag.
"Would you like a soda or something?" he quietly asks her.
"No thanks." She looks around the room, wanting to get this over with.
"Hmm..." The young man pushes his glasses up, "how about a back rub?"
She nods her head and approaches him, her hands coming up, but he backs away. "Hmm, no...I meant for you."
"Ohh..." This was different, she puts her hands down and stands still, now herself not sure what to do, her clients, seldom, if ever offered to do anything like this.
The young man walks up behind her and puts his hands gently on her shoulders. She can feel his clammy palms as he starts to gently massage her shoulders, his hands rubbing her shoulders and back. She can hear his labored breathing and feel his hot breath on her hair. Then suddenly he stops and steps away.
"Take your clothes off." He tells her as he goes to the hallway near the bathroom, flicking the main light switch off. He then turns on the bathroom light and partially closes the door. The curtains to the window are open and the moonlight shines through, illuminating the room. Not sure if he is trying to make the room romantic or if he is embarrassed by his size. Either way it was a nice, thoughtful touch. He pauses near the corner edge of the wall, his hand up to steady himself as he slips his shoes off. Then he pulls his shirt up over his head, his glasses getting caught in the material. He fumbles around trying to keep his glasses on and get his shirt off at the same time.
Was he a virgin she wondered, or maybe it was his first time with a call girl. She remembered her dispatchers voice on the phone, 'he's asking for somebody who ain't gonna talk a lot.'
She unbuttons her shirt, taking it off and folding it up, laying it on top of her bag. Then she unzips her skirt and lets it drop to the floor. She glances at him as he unzips his pants and pulls them off, leaning against the wall so he doesn't fall over. She kicks her heel up, lifting her skirt with the edge of her high heel shoe, grabbing the material mid air. She neatly folds her skirt and places it on top of her shirt.
She goes to unhook her bra, but the young man says, "Stop...stay like that."
He is standing there in his shorts, his belly hanging over the top. He is not hairy at all, hell maybe he's not even twenty yet, she thinks. He has a baby face look to him, his cheeks puffy, his jaw freshly shaven, a button nose and pouty pink lips.
He sits down on the edge of the bed. "Turn around."
She does as she is told, turning around, her back to him. She is in front of the desk mirror and can see him behind her.
"Spread your legs and bend over."
She spreads her legs and slowly bending over, her back straight, her hands on her knees to steady herself. She grabs her hair and pulls it over to one side, letting it fall loose, she looks over her shoulder at him.
The young man sits there on the edge of the bed, his breathing getting heavier, as he looks at her ass. He nervously licks his lips, his fingers twitching on top of his knees. Then he stands up and comes up behind her, his hand touching her rump. Slowly caressing her skin and the thin nylon of her panties. He presses his thumb down the center, sliding it slowly down along the material.