First, let me say this. I know she doesn't want her identity known so I will put it like this. Thank you so much for the great job editing my work. You really have no idea how much you've taught me about the English language. Professor, you turned my girl into a woman...thank you.
Second, let me know what you think so far. I can only get better with help and suggestions. Please enjoy, part 4 will be out soon.
Chad and Susan walked across the street to the coffee shop. It was empty and Chad thought that was odd, until he saw Monica come out. "Good evening, Monica," Chad said.
"Hello Sir. How was the boat trip today?" she asked him.
"Monica, I would like to thank you for the great tip. That was the most fun I've had in a long time," he told her.
Monica turned to Susan. "You must be Susan. I have heard some nice things about you," she said.
"It's nice to meet you, Monica. I must say, the people here are very nice," she said, as she shook her hand.
"Most people come to the island to relax and enjoy life. Others come to find someone or something," Monica said.
Chad's stomach started to rumble as he interrupted her. "Speaking of finding something Monica, can you point out a nice place to have dinner?" he asked.
"I know just the place and it's just down the street from the club that you went to the other night," she said. "It has a little bit of everything and its pretty quiet, if you need some alone time." Susan blushed and looked away. "It's ok, Susan, we all must enjoy life as it comes to us - just as you and Chad have enjoyed your time here," Monica said, reassuring her.
Monica gave them the directions and they said their goodbyes. Walking hand in hand with Susan seemed to be so natural. He could get used to this. "I'm sorry if she embarrassed you back there," he said.
"No, not really, It's just that, ever since we met, it seems everyone knows what we've been doing," she replied.
"Does that bother you, about what other people are thinking?" he asked.
"Not at all. It's just that sometimes I think I have 'I just got laid' written on my forehead," she told him. "I mean, I've loved the time we've spent together. I don't think I've ever been this comfortable with a man before," Susan said, looking into his eyes.
"I have to agree with you. I'm very happy to have bumped into you. Pun intended," Chad said. They found the place Monica told them to try. It was indeed quiet and pleasant looking, so they went inside. It had enough room to have a decent crowd during the tourist season. As they waited for the host, Chad moved behind her and wrapped his arms around her.
"So tell me, Mr. Franklin, where have you been all my life?" Susan asked playfully.
"Oh you could say I've just been around here and there," Chad replied.
"Really? Does that mean we should go to the hospital and have you checked out?" she shot back.
"I've got to start watching what I say to you," he said, as he started to tickle her.
"Two for dinner, Sir?" the host asked, breaking the two of them up.
"Yes, that would be fine. Thank you." The host escorted them to a table, off in the back. It was out of the way, but they had the most spectacular view of the ocean Chad had ever seen. "Wow, can you believe this view?" Chad said.
"I do believe this is what Monica had in mind. She sure seems to know where all the romantic spots are," Susan replied. Chad looked over at Susan as she gazed out to the water.
"Can I bring you something to drink from the bar?" The sudden voice of their waiter startled him, interrupting of his thoughts.
"Oh, yes. Thank you. How is your wine here?" Chad asked.
"May I suggest the Coteaux du Layon? It is a French wine with a sweet, soft texture. I believe you will find it most agreeable," the waiter offered.
"That would be fine. Thank you," Chad replied.
"My name is Patrick. If there is anything I can do for you, please don't hesitate to call on me." He turned around and returned towards the bar.
"I hope you don't mind that I took the liberty of ordering drinks for the both of us?" Chad asked Susan.
"No. That's fine. The wine sounds lovely. You really know how to treat a lady when you're out with her," she said.
"I did come here to enjoy myself."
"Are you enjoying yourself Mr. Franklin?" she asked, looking into his eyes. Chad took her hand in his and leaned over the table.
"Susan, I think you're the most incredible, energetic and passionate woman I have ever met in my life. The last few days have been so wonderful. I wouldn't know where to begin to tell you how fabulous it's been."
Susan squeezed his hand, starting to blush a little. "Thank you. I have to say I kind of feel the same way about you," she said shyly. The waiter arrived with the wine. After Chad decided on it, Patrick poured two glasses for them.
"When you're ready to order, just let me know and I'll be right over." He left Chad and Susan to enjoy the wine and decide what to eat.
"Everything looks so good. I can't make up my mind," she said, looking over the menu.
"Since you're so amazing Susan, you can order anything you want."
"What I want to eat is not on the menu," she told him. Susan looked over the menu at him, giving him a mischievous grin.
"Oh, I guess I'm a little slow."
"That's ok Chad. I like it slow; sometimes," she said.
"You're really going to make me watch what I say tonight!" he replied. Susan decided on lobster and he chose steak. While they waited for Patrick to come back, they enjoyed the wine and each other's company. They passed the time with small talk about their lives in the real world.
Patrick returned and took their order. "If you would like, Sir, I can put another bottle of wine out for you, in case you are planning on staying after dinner."
"Let's play it by ear and see what the lady would like to do tonight," he told him. Patrick smiled and went to place the order.
"So what would you like to do this evening, Miss Ross?" Chad asked.
"I do owe you for a wonderful afternoon. I also need to pay you back for the shower earlier," she replied. "Maybe after dinner we could go to that club again? I wouldn't mind drinks and dancing. Then we can go to your room, so I can return the favor," she added.
"When do you fly out tomorrow?" Chad asked.
"I'm on the 12:45 pm flight, so I have to get up early," she said.