This story is told from Katie's point of view. It is being adapted from an on going roleplay that we have been wring now for over 3 months. For the other side of this experience--told through Jacky's eyes--check out "Angel's Landing (Jacky's POV)" by Jackhawk. We're writing from opposite ends of the same story, so be sure to follow both to experience it all!
I introduce a new character, giving him a voice via his name in parentheses (Antonio). Many more characters will be introduced throughout this series...
Chapter 2 KATIE'S FIRST EVALUATION (Katie's POV)
Jacky kisses my cheek like he already owns me. Like he's staking his claim.
"I'll see you both this evening," he murmurs, low and warm, his lips brushing just beneath my temple. "Good luck, Lil Katie."
God. The way he says it—like I belong to him. Then he turns to Julia—cool, commanding Julia—and kisses her cheek too.
"I'm counting on you to get this right, sugar... This one has promise. Test her hard." And just like that, he's gone.
I'm left standing in his wake, the echo of his footsteps still ringing in my ears, his scent clinging to my skin like heat after a kiss.
Julia breathes in slowly, like she needs a moment. Then she smiles—tight-lipped, amused, assessing.
"How about we stroll a bit, Katie? This is the headquarters of Angel's Landing," she begins as we walk, her voice smooth and practiced. "An international company with diverse holdings. We specialize in adult entertainment... in many forms."
Her eyes flick to mine, just enough to let the word adult hang there, heavy and deliberate.
I swallow. "Okay."
"To our left," she says, gesturing, "you'll find our mall. You can get anything you need in the shops. Behind those double doors is the executive suite—Jacky's office, mine, the studios. But first, we've got a little indulgence planned for you."
Her gaze slides down the length of me like a slow touch.
"Have you ever had a real massage?"
"Once,"
I lie. The one time, in a strip mall—cheap oil, scratchy towels, a guy who didn't meet my eye.
As we walk, I catch my reflection in a glass panel. My hair still wild from the ocean breeze.
"I've never been in a place like this," I whispered, just to fill the silence.
The marble beneath my sandals looks impossibly expensive. Glass walls reach for the sky like ambition made solid. Everything gleams. Everything smells rich. Every inch of Angel's Landing is polished, perfect. and a dream. You know you shouldn't trust but can't look away from and they're watching me.
Whispers trail in my wake like smoke. Eyes linger—men and women both. I feel them skimming over my skin, pausing on my lips, my legs. I try to keep my posture tall, my face calm, but my body betrays me. I'm buzzing, flush and alive in a way that feels dangerous.
I'm the new girl, fresh meat.
Julia walks beside me like a queen touring her kingdom, every inch of her wrapped in designer silk and effortless confidence.
Men practically trip over themselves to say hello to her—some with reverence, others with hunger. And the women? They eye her with a cocktail of envy and desire. She acknowledges them all with subtle nods and slow smiles, holding court with a grace that borders on lethal.
I watch her. I study her. I want to know how it feels to be that powerful.
Then the spa doors open, and all thoughts dissolve.
It's like stepping into Eden—humid, green, and pulsing with soft sounds: birdsong, the hush of water, some melodic music that melts over your skin. The air is thick with citrus and something deeper, something heady and sweet.
The gorgeous female attendant, her name tag reads "Jill", is more than just polite, guiding us into the locker room, assigning me a locker...which contains a robe and the white slip on sandals.
Julia smiles and nods...the attendant leaves...but not before locking eyes with me and offering a saucy smirk!
"Drop your clothes on the floor. You won't be needing those anymore."
Then Julia undresses...Holy fuck.
She peels her skirt off, revealing legs that go on forever. Her blouse slips from her shoulders revealing the most perfect breasts I've ever seen. Round and high, a full C at least, glistening just slightly under the spa lights. Her body is a study in symmetry and sin, toned stomach, hips that sway like sex itself, and an ass that makes my mouth go dry.
I've never thought of women that way before, but Julia isn't a woman, she's an experience.
Julia glances back once, a grin tugging at her lips as she walks toward the steam. The door to the showers swings open, swallowing her in mist.
Kicking off my sandals, dropping my jean shorts to the floor, the oversized men's dress shirt I've worn for days hesitates in my grip—my last bit of armor, but I let it go.
Now it's just me and my plain white panties, sliding them down slowly. There's something ceremonial about it, intimate and exposing.
Naked, flushed and trembling, I haven't put the robe on, I'm too filthy for it. I can feel the beach still clinging to me—salt crusted on my skin, sand caught in places I don't want to think about.
The robe is soft, pristine, white, it doesn't belong on me. Not until I'm clean. I walk slowly, my breath loud in my ears. Reaching the edge of the showers, hanging the robe on a hook.
Walking into the shower, I see her.
Julia stands beneath a rainfall shower, head tilted back, water cascading over her. Her skin gleams. Droplets trail between her breasts, snake over her hips. Her lips are parted slightly, breath slow and even, like she's letting the heat seduce her.
Julia turns slightly, head tilted, lips curled. "Where did Jacky find you?"
I shrug, suddenly feeling a little exposed in more ways than one. "He found me on the beach." I said, vague on purpose. "Just saw me stumbling on the beach. I mean sitting on the beach, I like to just hang out there and think. It is really peaceful."
Not sleeping there. Not hiding from everything I ran from.
"He's...nice," I add, softening my voice. Watching her eyes. I try to read her as much as she is reading me. Trying to take the focus off me I ask " Where did you guys meet?"
She purrs, "I've known Jacky for five years. We met the first time while I was a senior in college. I was a sponsored contestant in a spring break wet T-shirt contest...which I actually won"
She laughs at the memory, then leans back into the water.
"I was offered a scholarship to stay in school and complete a masters degree...but Jacky made me an offer I couldn't refuse. I've been here hard at work ever since."