This story is told from Katie's point of view. It is being adapted from an on going roleplay that we have been wring now for over 3 months. For the other side of this experience--told through Jacky's eyes--check out "Angel's Landing (Jacky's POV)" by Jackhawk. We're writing from opposite ends of the same story, so be sure to follow both to experience it all!
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Stepping lightly down the hallway, the robe swishes softly against my thighs, my skin still tingling from where his breath last touched me. The heat of him lingers, his scent clinging to me, the taste of him still fresh in my mouth. Beneath the robe, my own slickness is drying on my skin like a secret only I know, something raw and unfinished.
I slow as I pass one of the doors and freeze when I hear it, and I swear I hear my name and it is coming from Antonio, his voice, low, rough and unmistakable.
He's fucking someone, hard.
The sharp rhythm of bodies colliding, the breathy cries of the woman beneath him, his voice a guttural growl of pleasure. My breath catches, and my fingers clutch at the belt of the robe like it's the only thing holding me together.
He was just with me, touching me and now he's in there, finishing what he didn't finish with me, inside someone else.
Instead, I let myself imagine it's me in that room with him. That it's my voice echoing back, not hers.
I press my hands against the tile and tilt my face up to the spray, letting it rinse away the mess he made of me. I watch it swirl down the drain, a silent goodbye to whatever that just was.
And yet, I already miss it.
I soap my body quickly, efficiently, scrubbing away the evidence but not the memory. My nipples stay hard under the hot water, my body humming even as I rinse clean. He didn't even fuck me--but somehow he woke something up inside me.
I towel off and reach for the robe, finding a fresh one in its place. Looking up, I see Jill, over her shoulder is a hanger in that plastic like from the dry cleaners. Smiling, she holds the hanger for me to see, my freshly cleaned jean shorts and mens shirt, nicely starched and pressed. Her soft low voice, smooth as silk.
"I was thinking you might want to save this for...you know...'old times sake'..."
Her eyes are taking all of me in, her other hand softly caresses the outline of her blouse, her fingers dragging slowly in an arch around and over her breast. The corner of her lower lip between her teeth, a look of hungry desire on her face.
Staring at the hanger like it might burn me. The shirt is crisp now, the collar perfectly pressed, the shorts folded just so beneath it. It looks like something someone cared about. Like it matters.
But I remember the man who gave it to me, his breath sour, his eyes hungry. I remember how cold I was that night. What I had to say. What I had to do, the way he handed it over like it was a trade and he'd gotten the better deal. Now here it is, washed, pressed, and presented like a gift.
My stomach flips. I've been trying to become someone new. Trying to leave her behind, the girl who wore that shirt like armor. Who smiled because she had to. Who let men think they were saving her when really, she was just buying time.
"Thanks," I murmur, my voice soft. Almost steady.
Jill's voice cuts through my thoughts. Smooth and casual, too casual.
"I watched you in Antonio's room... that was really incredible."
I freeze, her words echo in the quiet like a whisper shouted through a megaphone
.
She watched? Did they all watch?
There are cameras, of course there are. This place is too perfect, too choreographed, too controlled not to be watching.
She saw everything, my thighs clench, god help me, the thought of them watching makes me wetter.
"Oh...I didn't mean to embarrass you...my god...it was beautiful! I...ummm...was hoping it would have gone a bit further...but you know how it is around here!"
Jill shifts from one foot to the other, then... "You know, I've been here for 2 months.
I'm waiting for a break. Obviously, they have big plans for you. I can tell, I mean, the way Julia looks at you and the way she made sure Antonio didn't"
She trails off, her voice dying realizing she said too much.
"Ummm...maybe you and I could chat some time, maybe go get a coffee...maybe?"
Her intent is half a statement and the other half a question.
"Oh...I almost forgot"
She reaches in her shirt, pulling something out that was tucked inside her bra, next to her breast.
"Your panties...nice and clean...still warm."
Her smile is warm, her intent is well meant.
"Well, I have to get back...it has been nice to chat with you...Katie."
Jill turns and leaves just as Julia is coming through the door.
"Antonio's room needs a good cleaning Jill!" Julia half snaps...
Her gaze then lands on me, her smile soft.
"How do you feel, gorgeous! Did I not tell you how fabulous Antonio is?"
"Oh yes he is" I pause, swallowing "Very talented."
Julia's smile is soft, but her eyes are knowing, too knowing. Like she's seen it all.
I pull in a breath, the shirt slides over my shoulders easily, the fabric familiar in a way that makes my throat tighten. I don't think about the past when I button it, I just move, quick and quiet, smoothing it down over the shorts like I can somehow make myself look composed, but I don't feel composed, I feel watched.
As I adjust the collar, I glance back at Julia, trying to read her. She's not saying anything, just standing there, arms crossed, waiting.
I clear my throat, tucking a strand of damp hair behind my ear. "I'll hurry," I murmur, almost more to myself than to her.
Trying to sound light, casual, "So... about the massage," I start, eyes flicking toward hers, "I didn't mean for it to get that... intense. I just hope..." I pause, biting the inside of my cheek before adding, "Do you think Jacky will be upset with me?"
Julia smiles, "Oh I think you did just fine and if I know Jacky, and I do, I'm pretty sure he is very pleased. Actually, it could have been quite a bit more intense, but that's not the way our evaluation program is designed. I'd say you passed that with flying colors! Now we are going to have some fun at the salon. Time to get you ready for dinner tonight"
Julia curls her finger for me to come and follow. She walks me down through the mall again and into the Salon. The manager, Andrea, greets us.