This is my first story on here. Please tell me what you think and what I can do to make it better. I like honesty. It's not very long, but it was written for a friend's birthday.
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Today was Jessica's 23rd birthday. Just another day she felt. She had not cared much about birthdays in a while. They just meant she was getting older. She wasn't too happy with that thought or the way her love life had been going. She seemed to just attract assholes. But she had met this guy online who she had high hopes for. Anthony lived in Germany and she lived in Pahrump, NV, a small town outside Las Vegas. She wanted him to be there for her birthday so bad.
Jessica was short (5'3) with beautiful dark brown hair, 40D breasts, an ass to die for and quite a few tattoos. She was amazingly gorgeous. Anthony was somewhat tall (5'11) with brown hair and an athletic build he had gained from 7 years in the military. He wasn't a model but he wasn't bad either.
Unbeknownst to Jessica, Anthony had secretly planned to fly out to the U.S. to surprise her for her birthday. He got on a flight the night before and flew all night to ensure he would be able to be there in the morning. He landed in Vegas at about 7 in the morning and after getting a rental car he headed out to make the hour and a half drive to Pahrump.
Anthony arrived at her house at about 9:30 AM. He had a bouquet of flowers and walked up to her door. He was nervous. He hadn't told Jessica he was coming and had never actually met her. How would she react? Would she freak out that he was a creeper or would she accept him with open arms? "Only one way to find out," he thought to himself. He rang the doorbell.
Jessica walked to the door hearing the doorbell. Who would be coming by this early in the morning? She was in her pajamas still, wearing a matching Hogwarts pajama shirt and lounge pants. She wasn't even wearing a bra and you could just make out the outline of her breasts against her shirt. She slowly opened the door to look out. She couldn't believe her eyes. Was she dreaming? Here was the man of her dreams standing right in front of her. But he was supposed to be in Germany. "Anthony!?!?!" she exclaimed excitedly but with some bewilderment.
"Happy Birthday Jessica," he said, "I couldn't think of what to get you so I thought I'd just come out myself." He handed her the bouquet and smiled. She wrapped her arms around him and he returned her hug. She just melted into his arms. She couldn't believe that he was here at last.
"Come in come in," she said. "I was just getting ready to make breakfast and start some coffee, are you hungry?"
"I can definitely eat, but I won't let you cook on your birthday," he said. "Just show me where everything is and relax." After showing him where everything was, she sat back and watched him cook. She admired his features. He was strong but not to the point of distorting his features. He had a very homely look to him. And he could apparently cook too as he whipped up a breakfast scramble with eggs, ham, cheese and potatoes. She was getting wet just thinking about him.