This is our first attempt at writing a story, so honest feedback would be appreciated.
It was Saturday night and we were getting ready to go out. Generally once a week we go out for a romantic dinner. Maya had just been out shopping and she told me that she had a surprise for me. Her surprises always excite me and sometimes others too (if I may add). I had worn a nice shirt and trousers and was waiting to see what Maya had gotten. Now let me describe Maya. She has a cute face with a dusky complexion is of average built, but with larger than average boobs, slim waist and a nice round shaped ass which I just can't keep my hands off. Very fashionable and knows how to dress, so she looks stunning in almost everything. Me, well I have a handsome face, very fair, of a good built (I like to work out regularly) and a good height. Anyways let's get back to the story.
When I saw her coming towards me, I had a big smile on my face. She was wearing a white dress (mid thigh length) which had a plunging neckline, so a great deal of cleavage could be seen (she wasn't wearing a bra). It was a form fitting dress which accentuated her curves, but past her hips it was loose and flowing. As the dress was of a thin material, the areolas of her nipples and her black thong, were clearly visible though the dress. Coupled with the high heels, well what more can I say. I must mention that when she walks the natural sway of her hips is mind blowingly sexy (far more than the put on sway in our bollywood movies).
The drive was initially uneventful, and she was trying to act as if she had not planned any of this and it was just a normal day out for her, but whenever we looked at each other I could see the devilish smile on her. I had a hard time focusing on the road and was lucky not to hit someone. We had to stop at a red light and there was a motorist next to our car who noticed Maya and he just kept on driving beside us and looking in, trying to get a better look at her. Also with the traffic jams we were in, they didn't have to try too hard to stay beside us. Now Maya is an exhibitionist and when she saw the 2 of them, trying to get a better look, she crossed her legs and uncrossed them, which cause her dress to ride up even further till it was just about covering her ass. By coincidence on the radio, the song "Sheila ki Jawani" was playing and she turned on the music to a level 'very loud'. She also switched on the light in the car and pulled her hair back and started to apply some makeup.
I asked,"why do you need to put on makeup now? We just left home sometime ago"
"I didn't have time cause we were getting late", was the reply
Now she first started rubbing some cream all over her neck, and exposed parts of her chest and even slipped her hand inside her dress to rub her boobs. You could see their eyes go wide. Then she started to powder her neck. She also bent forward to put on some eyeliner, which allowed these 2 to see all of her cleavage. By now the traffic has started moving slowly and these two were so engrossed by the SHOW being put on for them that they didn't notice the car ahead of them brake and they went and hit the car from behind. I could see the owner get out and start shouting obscenities at these two. Luckily the traffic cleared and we moved on. The moment we cleared the traffic and the voyeurism ended, the light was switched off and the makeup was done.
"Nice show" I remarked.
"I don't know what you are talking about, darling"
"Of course darling, you just needed to put on some makeup"