I am trying something different with these stories. Instead of writing a single narrative, I have written 10 vignettes from a relationship. Each chapter alternates between the point of view of the two main characters and is written as if talking to the other person.
In addition, I have written each chapter as a quickie; all of the stories are 1,000 words or less, which is something of a challenge for me. They take place in chronological order, although there may be days, weeks or months between chapters.
Please let me know what you think of this style by leaving a comment or send me feedback via email.
Enjoy!
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She said
You stand in the doorway, silhouetted by the light from the hallway.
I see your eyes wide open. I lay nearly naked on my bed, my head towards you, hanging off the edge.
My hands clutch my breasts. You watch me tickle my areolae until the nipples are sharp little points. My legs are clad in your favourite red stockings attached to the matching garter belt.
It only takes a moment for you to cross the distance between the door and the bed.
You kneel beside me. Your breath is warm against my skin. I hear you manipulate your belt and zipper.
We kiss. You brush my cheek with your hand, tracing your way down my body.
When you stand, your cock hangs out. You lean forward and I take you in my mouth eagerly.
With very little effort you harden between my lips.
My tongue swirls around your engorged head. You shed the rest of your clothes as you work back and forth, going deeper and deeper into my throat with every thrust.
Your hands replace mine on my tits.
I reach around behind you, grasping you by your firm, cute butt.
Pulling you to me.
With my neck craned back, you use my face as a cunt for your cock.
Your sex is the perfect size for my oral ministrations, despite the unfounded insecurity you have about your size.
You're big enough to make me gag, but not so big that you choke me. You stretch my little pussy and reach all the right spots.
And
goddam
do you know how to use that thing!
From the moment I first lay eyes on you, I knew I was going to have you.