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It's kind of late on this cold winters evening; a gentle three knocks are heard on your front door which make you wonder who it could be this late on Christmas Eve. Since you had recently just gotten home yourself you were still in your dress. You decide not to bother with covering up as it most likely wouldn't take long of standing at the door if anything. As I'm standing outside, gift in hand and rocking back and forth slightly trying not to stand still in the cold air, slightly nervous I wondered if it was such a good idea showing up this late at your house.
Even more nervous as it was taking you a bit longer than expected for you to answer as it crossed my mind that you had mentioned going out that day and that you might not be home. Suddenly, the door sounds a light click and you open it. Seeing you at the door removes all nervousness of before and a smile appears on my face, yet a clear expression of pleasant surprise shows on your face as you stand there lightly smiling and slightly frozen in place.
You hadn't expected anyone to visit, least of all me at this time of night. After a moment I whisper your name with a questioning tone followed by "Surprise luv" with a gentle smile on my face. My eyes moving up and down you, taking in the image of you standing there in a black dress top, short frilled skirt; I notice your bright red lips before meeting your eyes with mine and sighing lightly to myself in awe at your beauty as we stand there.
"Hey there.." you whisper, still slightly in surprise "What brings you here this late sweetie?", replying in just as much a whisper yet quietly sensual "You" as I take a step forward and stand almost directly in front of you. Still smiling, I hold the gift in my right hand while placing both my hands on your hips.
My fingers gently caressing your sides as I feel your hands move up between us and rest against either sides of my face, a clear smile on your face as I lean in a little and your arms wrap around my neck as well as my hands pulling you closer to me. We look deeply into each other's eyes as you feel my warm breath on your lips; a gentle kiss is placed on your lips as our eyes close before moving back slightly, your arms pulling me back in as we kiss again and deeper; my tongue sliding teasingly over yours before moving back before gently gliding over yours again as I feel you try to push your tongue against mine.
Your arms loosen their grip around my neck and your hands take hold of my coat. We break the kiss for a moment; we look deeply into each other's eyes as our eyes slowly open. I lick my lips softly, craving for another taste of your sweet lips as we see the lust in each other's eyes. Insistently you tug at my coat, pulling me to move inside. As we step inside, I move the door shut with foot before my hands on your hips pull you closer again, pressing you against me. Your hands impatient as I feel them pushing the coat back for me to remove it. Leaning in we kiss again gently at the same time I drop my coat to the floor as it slides off my arms as well as I drop my gift for you on top of it, leaving me in a long sleeved, yet thin gray shirt.
My hands quick to return to your sides, our lips pressing more on each other's as we kiss deeply; our tongues sliding over one another, pushing and pressing against the other. I feel your hips gyrate slightly in a grinding motion as you rub teasingly against me, breaking the kiss a moment to look into my eyes and let out a teasing moan as well as sensually saying my name while your right hand passes through my hair and your fingers from your left hand gently press into my shoulder as you teasingly moan it out longer.
In turn making me moan gently "Yes beautiful..?" making you grin lightly as you feel the effects of the sensual kissing combined with the teasing moan against your lower stomach through your dress, a warm pressing area felt against your skin even through the clothing between us. You tilt your head slightly to the side and a very sexy smile appears on your face as you gently push me back and move further down the hall before going around a corner and disappearing into the dimly lit living room, seemingly only lit by the Christmas lights and possibly a few candles.
Turning around the corner, pressed up against the wall you wait for me knowing that my curiosity as well as lust would make me follow. Slowly I follow down the hall where you went, wondering where it is you had gone. Slightly confused I enter the living room as I don't see you immediately, yet moments after standing still I feel your familiar presence as you slide your arms around my waist against my sides from behind.
You slide your hands slowly under my shirt, moving your right hand and lightly scraping your fingernails against my chest at the same time I feel your fingertips rubbing teasingly against my lower stomach, sending shivers along my skin as well as a gentle gasp from my lips. I stretch my arms over my head as I swiftly remove my shirt and dropping it aside; I feel you rest your head gently against my back as your hands continue moving along my chest and lower stomach.
You take in a gentle breath through your nose; a light scent of sweet hazel and caramel filling your lungs before you exhale lightly. Teasingly, you curl and uncurl your fingers lightly on my lower stomach, making me gasp lightly and my hands reaching around behind me. My hands rest on your sides, fingers lightly curling and uncurling over your back as they move lower, slower. I give you a gentle teasing spank on your right butt cheek, making you gasp in pleasant surprise. I feel your fingers curl lightly against my chest and lower stomach in response, making me tense up and inhale sharply before sighing softly as I relax.