Okay, so I got a message from someone telling me that I needed to write something that really turned me on. I'm hoping that it has made my writing better and please let me know what you think, thanks all x x
I slammed the glass down on to the table after having yet another shot. My mouth was burning and my eyes watering and I had just about had enough tonight. Normally I was the quiet girl, the one who wouldn't drink anything so she could take all her friends home. Not tonight. My friends had already left, leaving me on my own but I didn't care. I was drinking away my sorrows tonight and I would do that whether my friends were here or not. I was just about to order more alcohol when someone put a hand on my shoulder. I spun round to look at the tall man stood behind me. He was grinning in a seductive way, showing off his white teeth. His eyes were sparkling and I couldn't stop staring. I noticed his mouth was moving but I my mind wasn't registering what he was saying.
"Sorry, what?" I asked, slurring my words. He chuckled sexily.
"I said: I think you've had enough" he whispered as he smiled at me. I didn't have a witty reply so he just walked back over to where he had been sitting before.
I glanced around the room to see that there were very few people here and the few people that were here were otherwise occupied. I turned back to the handsome man and he winked. I bit my lip and I let my eyes wander. He had a tight top on which showed off his muscular body. His jeans were also tight but not so much so that you could see everything. His hand was gently resting on his crotch and I wondered if that was just a coincidence or whether he meant to put it there. I looked back up at his face and wondered how old he was. Me being only 18, I didn't want someone too old but he only looked around 25 at the most. Which suited me well, I liked experience. I blushed when I saw his eyes looking over my body and I felt naked under his gaze. I shivered lightly and turned back to the bar.
I was just tracing the pattern of the wood with my finger when I decided I wanted to have to some fun. Fortunately, I was wearing the clothes for it. I had on a tight vest top which showed off my cleavage of my 36C breasts nicely. I had on a short skirt that made its way half way down my thigh and underneath a very skimpy thong.
I twisted my body round so I was facing him completely and saw he was still looking at me. I took in a deep breath and slowly, and what I hoped was seductively opened my legs. I saw his eyes move down and a hot grin spread slowly across his face. I saw his hand that had been resting on his crotch move a little and I felt my cheeks blush. I couldn't believe I was doing this, and I also couldn't believe how much it was turning me on. I felt my pussy slowly getting wetter and I longed to touch it. I slowly started to move my hips against the chair to give me little spasms of pleasure. I looked over to the man to see him chuckle and get up. He walked over to the bar and called the bartender over.