This is my first story so any opinions would be great please.
As the evening drew to a close and the embers in the fire grate were dying I lay reminiscing over the nights events. The fire was ablaze casting shadows around the room, which darted playfully seemingly following the motions of your tongue and the fur rug was soft and smooth with almost a silk like feeling and how I wanted to touch your silky soft skin although I knew it was against the rules.
I could feel your heat your passion you knew just how to please me and although I could not tell you it seemed that you knew exactly what my body craved. Your kisses from my lips down my chest on my nipples to my stomach slowly going lower leaving me begging for you to go faster but you were in no hurry you had your needs as well. I lifted you up and laid you on your back and began to mirror what you had done to me and hoped that I gave you the same pleasure.
Your lips oh how I loved those cherry red lips, soft sensuous plump and oh so edible I licked them teasingly with my tongue slowly parting them kissing you deeply and then sucking them. A shiver runs down you knowing I am making you tingle with anticipation only spurs me on further. I follow the line of your jaw slowly planting kisses on your neck, as I know the delights that soon will come.
I was not disappointed as I moved slowly down not forgetting to kiss one single inch of you I came to the most beautiful set of breasts I had ever laid eyes on. Smooth curvy with nipples that were as hard as I had ever seen and I couldn't wait to reach them. I lovingly kissed them and my desires over came me I took your nipple in my mouth and sucked I sucked you hard and the moan that escaped your lips only served to make me do it harder. Circling your nipples with my tongue gently tugging them and then sucking I could not help but reach down and touch my self gently stroking myself in time to the rhythm of my tongue.