It was late in the afternoon by the time I checked into my hotel room for a short stay in Tampa. Since it had been a long day I headed down to the bar for a good stiff drink to relax and cool off. It was too early for the business crowd and there was only one other person there, a young woman who appeared to be in her late teens or early twenties. The bartender was busy getting set up and told us she would be with us shortly.
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There was something strangely interesting about the young woman sitting a few tables away. She was very plainly dressed in rather ill fitting, homemade cotton dress and smock, oxford type shoes with white socks folded down to her ankles. She looked like a country girl who just came to town. Her hair was braided and the braids were wrapped around the top of her head. She wore no make-up or jewelry. At first I thought she might be Amish but she did not wear the little white cap Amish women usually wear.
She looked my way several times and when I looked back and smiled she would lower her head as if embarrassed without smiling. I thought how silly it was to sit at separate tables since we were the only two people in the place so I moved over to her table.
I started to introduce myself in my usual friendly way but for some strange reason without so much as a smile I almost demand, "What's your name?"
She looked up briefly then lowered her head submissively saying, "Gretchen".
Without asking I pulled out a chair and sat down. That wasn't like me at all. A waitress came over and asked what we wanted to drink and again without asking Gretchen I told her that we would have two bourbons with water. Gretchen did not show any sign of approval or disapproval.
The waitress asked Gretchen for an ID and she produced a driver's license from the pocket of her smock. She gave it a quick look and handed it back. As soon as the waitress left our table I took the ID out of her pocket and gave it a close look, Then name on the driver's license was Gretchen and that she was twenty-one but it was clearly not the girl I was sitting beside. I slipped it back into the pocket of she smock and did not question her.
Our conversation, if you can call it that, was mostly my asking questions and Gretchen looking down and giving short, specific answers. For some strange reason I was becoming very comfortable being in control of the very submissive young girl and almost demanded information from her; she responded to my demands in a very submissive manner.
Soon the bar was bustling with businessmen and women and Gretchen seemed to be relaxing a bit from the bourbon. My questions became more personal but she continued to respond. If she hesitated I would use a more demanding tone then she would respond.
She hesitated and showed embarrassment when I asked if she was a virgin but she answered any way, "No."
I asked her who took her virginity and she told me it was a neighbor who owned the farm beside her families' farm.
When I asked how old she had been she responded, "I had just turned 18."
I became more emboldened by her submissiveness and pushed the limits to see how far she would go. I asked, "Did you like it?"
Her answer was, "Sorta."
I moved my hand to her thigh and demanded, "Tell me about losing your virginity." She breathed deeply and sat quietly for several minutes then she began.
"My friend Ruben and I sneaked off from a community barn raising and went to a neighbor's barn. We were playing around in the hay, making out, and touching each other through our clothes. Ruben told me to unbutton his britches and touch him. After a few minutes of touching him I wanted to see what "it" looked like so I took "it" out and looked it over carefully before putting it back in his britches. Then he wanted to see up my dress so I let him lift it up and look between my legs. He moved the bottom of my panties aside so he could see everything then he started touching me with his fingers. His fingers felt so good touching me that I did not stop him.
All of a sudden a deep voice hollered out, 'Boy what are you doing to that child?'
It was Elder Dirkenmier, the owner of the barn. Ruben jumped up trying to button his britches as Elder Dirkenmier took a stick to him and chased him out of the barn. I quickly adjusted my panties and pulled my dress down by the time he turned back to me.
His eyes were wild when he told me, 'Your daddy will be giving you a thrashing tonight.' I began crying.
He moved closer to me and asked if that boy had damaged me. He was close enough to me that I could smell his saw dust and sweat covered clothes as I shook my head, no, even though I did not know what he meant by 'damaged'.
He looked me over as I begged him not to tell my father. I assured him that I had learned my lesson.
He shook his head as he continued to look me over then said, 'My child I will have to make sure that boy did not damage you. Lift your dress up.' I didn't really want to but I had been taught to obey the church elders.
I lifted my dress up to my waist and the elder looked me over before putting his hand low on the front of my panties and asked, 'Did that boy put his hand here child?'
I nodded my head, yes.
Then his fingers moved between my legs and he asked again, 'Did the boy touch you here child?'
Again I nodded, yes.
His hand moved into the waist band of my panties and pulled them down to my knees. He moved his fingers into my thick hair and opened my lips, asking, 'Did he touch you here child?'