Notes on Spring Break: Chapter 3 is mostly background story. If you're interested in learning more about the characters read on. If you're just looking for sex, you can skip this chapter.
VIOLENCE WARNING!!! Explanation of a flashback for one of the gals. Violence happens in my stories. Should've had a warning on Chapter 1. I'll have to go back and edit the beginning of that chapter. Another noob mistake. Sorry.
I write primarily for myself. If you like it great, if its not your cup of tea, my sincerest apologies and please look elsewhere. I build up slowly through many chapters and there is some drama and doubt with most of my characters. I have a total of 15 chapters, so far, most of which I need to read through a few more times and edit. If you're looking for a quick Daddy/Daughter fuck session this will be pointless for you.
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Sunshine's Point of View
Miles, Sunshine, Avery, Gabbie and McKenna
I love my daddy... well... step-daddy I guess. I just found out that last part.
I needed to get a passport and I needed my birth certificate. Mostly because I've never had one and we were talking about taking a semester off and travelling abroad. Even though we had just arrived, My friends were already out in the pool splashing each other and giggling like idiots. I had on my bikini and was about to join them. However, I didn't want to waste time this weekend looking for it and figured I would ask Daddy quick to see if we could just get it out the way. I wanted to take time on Monday or Tuesday to get the ball rolling.
We were in the kitchen when I brought it up. Daddy was washing dishes. "Hi Daddy," I smiled sweetly and batted my eyes not really sure why I did that or thought it was necessary. "Can I get my birth certificate? I need it to get my passport going early next week."
He dropped a glass he was washing and it splashed water all over the counter. He stared blankly out the window for a moment. He had a sad look on his face. "I knew this day would come." He said softly in a far away voice. "Sit down my sweet. We need to talk." I sat as he left the room.
I was puzzled. "Daddy? You're scaring me." I said, my voice following him down the hallway.
He returned with an old manila folder. With a sigh he opened it and rifled through a number of official looking papers. He found what he was looking for and laid it in front of me. It was my birth certificate.
I had a puzzled look on my face and said "Thank you Daddy?" Not sure what the drama was about and then I started reading it. There was a name I didn't recognize written where Daddy's name should've been. I looked up at him. He was looking down at the tabletop eyes welling with tears. "Daddy? What the hell is this?"
He looked me in the eyes, "I'm your father Sunshine, just not your biological father."
I stood up in shock. I was not expecting this revelation. I turned and walked towards the pool.
"Sunshine?!?!" Daddy called after me.
"Not now Daddy," I looked over my shoulder, with hurt on my face and tears streaming down my cheeks. "Or should I say Step Daddy?"
That hurt him. He hung his head and cried deep powerful sobs.
I walked outside, hugging myself while still holding the birth certificate. My friends stopped horsing around and looked at me. They could see something was terribly wrong and quickly exited the pool.
After drying quickly, Gabbie was the first to reach me. "Sunshine, Honey, what's wrong?" she inquired gently, leading me to a lounge chair. I sat down and handed her the birth certificate. Gabbie scanned the document and handed it to McKenna. Gabbie was sweet and whip smart but not too observant.
"Oh my Sunshine," Mckenna gasped and handed it to Avery and sat next to me putting her arms around me.
Avery was majoring in law, specifically family law with a psychology minor. "I see," coolly she put the document aside. She pulled up a regular lawn chair and sat down facing me. She cupped her hand under my chin and gently pulled me to her gaze. "Sweetheart, we're going to talk. I may sound cold but it's to get you to realize something. I'm not trying to hurt you at all. I'm trying to help you through this situation."
"Geez, would you guys tell me what's going on?" Gabbie said scared and confused.
"Gabbie Honey, " Avery said, exasperated, "Right now, you need to sit, be quiet and listen for Sunshine's sake." Gabbie did as she was told and pulled up a lounge chair next to the rest of us and held my hand.