ALL CHARACTERS ARE OVER THE AGE OF 18!!!
Notes on Spring Break: Chapter 7 Fucking Avery in the pool house. Seems to be a common fuck room.
I write primarily for myself. If you like it great, if its not your cup of tea, my sincerest apologies and please look elsewhere. I build up slowly through many chapters and there is some drama and doubt with most of my characters. I have a total of 15 chapters, so far, most of which I need to read through a few more times and edit. If you're looking for a quick Daddy/Daughter fuck session this will be pointless for you.
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Miles's Point of View
Miles and Avery
I awoke to Avery kissing me and gently squeezing my balls. "Are you ready for the pool house Daddy?"
"What time is it.?" I checked my watch and it was 8:13 pm.
"What does it matter?" she kissed me again, hard and deep.
She stood up and reached for my hands. She pulled me to a standing position and led me to the pool house. Once inside she turned and gave me another kiss before falling to her knees. She pulled my board shorts down and my hard cock sprang to life. She gripped it tightly with her right hand cupping my balls with her left. "You have a truly beautiful cock Miles," she gushed as she swallowed me whole as she had done before. After pumping my cock with her throat a few times, she released me and stood up quickly.