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Under the El

Under the El

by Pentopaper
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Nathaniel walked in the semi-darkness through the busy downtown. Cars passed him but he didn't take much notice. Late night stores with their neon "open" signs in their windows lit the wet sidewalk as he passed the other homeless, tweakers and prostitutes. They knew better than to ask him for money, though, because he didn't have any.

That's why he was in this mess.

He felt fortunate, however. The ground was wet but at least the rain had stopped.

He rubbed at his runny nose with the back of his hand, finally breaking down and just using his red flannel sleeve. He was cold but he couldn't figure out if his nose was running because of the cold temperatures, or if he actually had a cold.

Either way, his predicament sucked.

His wife - it was the nicest four letter word he could use to describe her - had decided to move her brand new boyfriend into their two story suburban house. So they both had ganged up on Nate and had kicked him out. Currently he was living in his car with absolutely no money, as she'd - of course - cleaned out their joint bank accounts right before they had evicted him.

Thank God he had his car. Otherwise he'd be sleeping on the wet ground like some of the poor bastards he was walking past.

The liquor store he was headed to was just up ahead and around the corner. He wasn't really a drinker, but what else was there for him to do? He'd drink himself silly until he'd fall asleep, just like he'd done for the last week. At least then he'd feel warm so he could sleep comfortably once the temperature began to really drop.

The El train roared above his head as a huge black Cadillac Escalade slowed down and caught his eye. It pulled up beside him at the curb and it stopped.

Curiously he stopped and looked, but the passenger window was too dark for him to see inside. As he stood looking, the window slowly slid down.

There were two women inside, he noticed. A brunette was driving and a blonde was in the passenger seat closest to him. It looked like they were arguing but he couldn't hear anything from the clacking and the roar of the train above him.

Suddenly the blonde turned her head and looked at him. Her mouth moved but, of course, he couldn't hear her.

He cupped his hand behind his ear and pointed skyward towards the train as he shook his head, noting that he couldn't hear.

She nodded.

They stared at each other for a few seconds until the train moved a little farther down the track and the noise settled down a bit.

"What?" Nate then called out.

"How much?" She yelled.

Nate blinked. He figured he was going to be asked directions. Getting propositioned was the last thing on his mind.

"I'm n-not a p-prostitute!" He stuttered. But...he might as well be. He had no money. Payday wouldn't come for another week and a half. What was left for him to sell but himself?

The women began arguing in the SUV again. Finally the blonde turned back towards him. He could see her determined blue eyes as they looked at him.

"I'll give you a thousand dollars," she blurted out.

Nate gawked in shock at the woman. A thousand dollars?! He wasn't sure what the going rate was, but that was far above it, he was sure.

"Not enough?" She quickly said. "Two thousand then," she amended.

Nate closed his mouth. What he could do with two thousand dollars! He could at least stay in a shitty hotel for a week or more instead of sleeping in his cramped car. He could get a daily shower. He could have food on the regular.

He paused, imagining what his life would be like for a hot second. Then, numbly he nodded. "Okay. Sure," he croaked out.

"Get in," the blonde said, motioning her head towards the back seat.

Like an automatron he opened the back door to the black Escalade and climbed in.

"You are a fucking idiot, Madison!" The brunette said as she squealed her tires on the wet pavement and pulled away from the curb back into traffic. "You're going to get yourself killed! I can't believe we've just picked up a homeless man!" She wailed.

"It's fucking nice to meet you too," Nate grumbled from the back seat.

The brunette glanced at him through the rear view mirror. The blonde looked behind at him and then back at the brunette. "It's fine. He's safe. I'm sure of it," she said with confidence that her quavering voice belied.

"Do you have any weapons? Are you on meth?" The driver asked him, her eyes narrowing.

"No. And no," he grumbled. He did have a pistol, but it was safely locked in his car with his handful of bullets in the Dollar General parking lot. It wasn't on his person at the moment, anyway.

This conversation was doing its best to rile him up. "You're so concerned about me...but how do I know that you two women are safe?" He countered. "You could be picking up men to murder," he mumbled.

The brunette scoffed. "Right. As if," she said with an eye roll that Nathaniel could see in the rear view mirror.

"Well...you still could be," Nate grumbled, though in all likelihood he knew the odds of that were hovering around zero. Brunette lady was slightly chubby and looked like a soccer mom. Blonde lady was thinner, yet still screamed suburbia.

The driver turned to the other woman in desperation. "Madison, tell me you're not going to go through with this?" She said. "Please!"

"Caroline. Take us to the Ritz Hotel," Madison said instead with a quick glance back at Nate.

Caroline pursed her lips together but did as she was asked.

The short ride to the Ritz was in silence.

"You call me immediately if things go south," the brunette yelled as they both got out of the Escalade. "I'll be waiting in a parking garage nearby in my SUV for you!! And I promise not to tell Mom about this if you decide to change your mind!" She called just before both doors slammed shut.

Nate watched the blonde woman raise her hand in a short wave to the driver.

They both turned towards the entrance to the Ritz. Nathaniel had to squint as they walked under the bright lights that ran around the hotel awning. When his surroundings were all lit up, he got his first good look at this woman he was going to...what...sleep with? Fuck?

He frowned. Well. She was alright looking, he guessed. She was slightly built and was just a bit shorter than he was. Then he noticed her heels. So she'd be even shorter in her bare feet. He studied her. He wasn't crazy about her huge head of long, blonde hair, but she otherwise looked almost kind of alright. She wore a fancy-looking skirt and suit jacket combo. She looked like she'd just come from church.

He held the door to the Ritz for her and motioned for her to go in first. He watched her small ass swing back and forth as he walked behind her while they made their way to the front desk.

Nate balled up his fists. Shit. He had done some crazy shit in his time. But he'd never done anything like this before. He'd only ever slept with three women in his life - his high school girlfriend, then a brief relationship in his twenties, and then, of course, his wife. But, God, two thousand dollars for a nut! How could he turn that down?

He waited as the woman gave the man behind the desk her credit card. Shit - this hotel room by itself was nearly a thousand dollars. Who was she that she had that kind of money to throw around on just sex?

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They rode up in the elevator in silence, each standing in a corner, the farthest away that they could get from each other. Nathaniel leaned against the side of the elevator and felt his stomach drop as the elevator took off, and headed up to the fourteenth floor.

With nothing else to do, his eyes roamed around the elevator, and he noticed that the gold elevator walls were highly polished so that they were mirrored. He made the mistake of looking at the woman's reflection and, at the same time, she was looking right at his reflection too.

He immediately tore his eyes away from her large blue ones, and he quickly looked down at his scuffed athletic shoes. Hell. Honestly this would be simple. Right? He could just pretend he was wanking. He even supposed he didn't have to look at her. He'd make sure the lights were off and he'd fuck her in the dark. Then he wouldn't have to look at that big blonde hair or at her inquisitive eyes.

When they arrived on the fourteenth floor and found the room, Nathaniel waited for the woman to unlock the door with the key card. He then followed her inside.

But it wasn't just a normal hotel room. No, it was a suite.

Why had she gotten a suite?!

There was a big king sized bed with white sheets and a white duvet and blanket. A light gray bolster pillow was at the bottom of the white sleeping pillows. Colorful, modern art hung on the walls - probably from local artists, Nate thought. Made with furious, almost angry paint strokes, the art looked hideous to him. One framed canvas showed a bicycle that had been left on a beach. The other painting was of a lighthouse with a boat off in the distance.

He walked around, curiously taking everything in. There was a nook where there was a desk, and an interesting modern-looking, yellow and black swirled frosted glass light hung down over the desk from the ceiling.

The black leather couch was in a separate room with its own TV, microwave, and small refrigerator.

He next made his way to the bathroom. It was large with a glass-walled shower with a big rain shower head and a separate jacuzzi tub.

"Can you...please take a shower for me before we get started?" Nate suddenly heard her say from behind him.

He spun around in surprise at her words. There stood the woman looking up at him. He flushed. It was true that he hadn't showered for maybe a week. But he used deodorant. And he took spot sponge baths wherever he could.

Then he felt the anger rise up within him. Who was this rich bitch who could pay two thousand dollars for a fuck, rent a swanky hotel suite at one of the best hotels in the city, and then think she was going to boss him around?

He laughed derisively. "Yeah, sure, lady, I'll shower. But you need to wash that pussy," he countered. "I'm not dipping my dick into anything that's not squeaky clean," he said.

The woman drew her head back quickly in shock at his coarse words. "Um...alright," she finally said after a long pause.

Nate nodded once. "And are you ever going to ask me my name?" He said in irritation.

Now it was the woman's turn to flush. "Oh. I'm sorry. I haven't asked you that, have I?" She said.

"No. No, you have not," he replied.

"Okay. I'm...I'm Madison. What's your name?" She said, holding out her hand to shake.

"Nate," he said, putting his hands on his hips and pointedly ignoring her hand. "Now if you'll excuse me I guess I need a thorough shower," he said, a mocking lilt present in his tone.

He turned and walked into the bathroom. He shut the bathroom door softly but still he shut it in her face as she looked at him.

Nate sighed and looked around one of the prettiest hotel bathrooms he'd ever seen. The walls were painted a soft white and there was a red, abstract painting on one wall. This one made the shape of a naked woman on a bed. This painting wasn't hideous, at least.

The inside of the shower had three bottles with pump tops on them. Each one was separately labeled: shampoo, conditioner, and body wash. Nate was glad because he, of course, didn't have any soap on him.

He began to strip off his clothes. Just for kicks he smelled the armpits of his shirt. Nothing. He didn't smell anything. Although, he did remember hearing once that a person was immune to their own smell. But who was he kidding. He was thrilled to be taking a shower in here. He really needed one anyway. He turned on the water so it would warm to a temperature he liked.

He peed in the toilet, then grabbed a white washcloth and stepped under the spray. The rainwater shower head was nice. The warm water ran down his body and pooled down at his feet. He scrubbed his body down with the washcloth and the body wash, taking care to wash everything.

Ten minutes later he was done, and he walked out dripping into the bedroom area of the suite with a white towel wrapped around his waist. Movement in the office nook caught his eye and he did a double take before staring full on at what was happening.

What the hell?!

This lady was...taking off her hair!

She laid it carefully down on the desk and jumped in surprise when she realized he was standing there watching her.

His jaw dropped clear down to his chest.

She had a skullcap on under the wig and when she took it off too it confirmed what Nate had already just figured out - this woman was bald.

She took in his shocked expression. "Sorry," she mumbled.

He knew there was something odd about her when he'd seen her in the Escalade when the lights had come on when he had climbed in. He now looked her face over very carefully.

Aha.

She had no eyebrows. That's what had struck him. And her eyelashes were so light...no, wait. No eyelashes, either.

"What is all this?" He breathed, motioning towards the wig.

She rolled her eyes. "I take it you've never seen anyone with cancer before?" She said sourly. "We do tend to lose our hair," she said.

He closed his mouth. "Yeah," was all he could say. He smoothed his fingers through his too-long, shaggy, wet brown hair and glanced around.

She scurried past him and ducked into the bathroom, leaving him to wonder: What kind of fucked up situation was this?

He heard the shower turn on. Right then he wanted to flee. But dumbly he'd left his clothes in a heap on the bathroom floor. He couldn't leave in just a hotel bath towel or one of the white robes that he assumed was probably hanging in the closet.

He sat on the edge of the bed in his towel. He couldn't go through with this! This was way more than he'd bargained for.

He sat in silence just thinking. Fifteen minutes passed and he heard the shower water turn off.

She came out of the bathroom looking vulnerable and frail and far too skinny with a white towel wrapped around her just under her armpits. Yes. Now it all made sense. She was too frail and skinny. Clearly she'd been sick.

Even worse, she had a port implanted on her chest just underneath her clavicle. Nate knew it was an alternative to getting continually pricked with needles when she needed her cancer treatments.

Suddenly he felt sick. He wasn't sure exactly why, possibly it was for a myriad of reasons. "I don't think I...can do this," he abruptly said, standing.

She just looked at him. "But I gave you two thousand dollars!" She said.

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He nodded, wincing. That money meant the world to him, but he couldn't take that kind of cash from a cancer patient.

"Please," she said. Then she somewhat brightened. "You know...I'm not exactly contagious," she said with a lopsided grin.

He scoffed, flushing. "Yeah, I know that. But..."

"It's bad, but it's ovarian, see? You definitely can't catch it because you don't even have the same parts," she said with a smirk.

He didn't laugh at her joke. He just shook his head emphatically.

She licked her lips. "Please," she said again.

Nate closed his eyes. He sighed heavily.

Jesus.

"Please. I've...God, you probably won't believe me when I say this, but I've never ever once had an orgasm," she said.

His eyes flew open and he blinked at her. What the hell?!

"You've never...?" He said.

She shook her head adamantly. "No."

"So that's where I'm supposed to come in?" He said.

She nodded. "Yes."

He glanced away, then back at her. "Not even...you know...not even when you were alone?" He asked her, feeling his scalp prickle uncomfortably.

She shook her head. "Never."

Hell, how was he supposed to help her if she hadn't ever had an orgasm all by herself?! Like he'd know what got her going!

He sighed and ran his fingers through his wet hair again, but this time he did it carelessly and in frustration and it stood up in all directions because he badly needed a haircut. "Well. I can't promise you that you'll have one," he said.

She nodded. "I know. But can we at least try?" She asked.

He paused for a beat. "Why in the hell did you choose me for this?" He finally asked.

She shrugged. "I don't know. You looked depressed, I guess, but...mostly you seemed pretty trustworthy," she said.

He chuckled. "Well, I'm...okay, I'm both of those things. At least I think I'm trustworthy," he said, thinking. "But..."

She looked at him so earnestly and expectantly that Nate had to look away.

"I know I'll be safe with you. I'm a good judge of character," she said.

Nate sighed and closed his eyes again. He couldn't help but wonder for the second time: What in the hell had he gotten himself into?

He watched her as she rounded the bed. He usually liked the side she was by but he didn't say anything.

Together they pulled back the bedsheets, placed the extra pillows they didn't need onto the floor, and took off their towels. It was then that Nate got his first good look at her. She was so pale her body was almost colorless, except for her small breasts just barely jutting out from her chest that were topped with little, ripe, strawberry-red nipples. But despite her frailty, her blue eyes seemed determined as she crawled between the sheets.

Nate turned off the lights, ditched his towel, and climbed into bed right next to her. He lay on his side just looking at her shining blue eyes in the darkness.

"I guess I can try going down on you," he mumbled.

She nodded. "Alright," she said.

Nate figured touching her wherever he liked would be okay by now, and so he reached out his hand and touched her breast, caressed it, then palmed the other one. She shivered and her nipples hardened at his touch. Nate felt his cock respond to those strawberry nipples. Then he climbed between her legs and she spread them for him. She smelled good and fresh all over, flowery - like the gel bath soap that he himself had just used.

And besides, who was he kidding?

Her pussy smelled fantastic.

He'd eaten pussy plenty of times when it wasn't all that clean. Especially back in high school. And his wife refused to regularly shave hers, so he always ended up getting stray hairs in his mouth or between his teeth when he'd gone down on her. He had figured if this woman was bald on her head she'd be bald everywhere...and he was right.

He caressed her bare thighs and heard her sigh contentedly. He touched her mound and was shocked at how soft it was. After his wife did sometimes shave her pubic hair for him, he almost got beard burn from her rough-feeling mound. But this woman was smooth there and oh-so-soft.

Nate had never shied away from eating pussy and his mouth was watering over knowing that he was going to get to eat this one.

He gently kissed all over her mound and her inner thighs before he rooted around in her pussy with his nose and his lips. He then opened his mouth and took her clit onto his tongue.

"Oh!" She gasped at the feel of his mouth on such a sensitive place.

He tonged her clit so very slowly, taking time to lick her inner labia as well. He tongued her opening and pretty soon tasted her unique flavor.

She tasted absolutely delicious.

He figured for two thousand dollars he'd better bring along his A game. Judging from the sighs and little gasps she was making he must be doing something right.

"Oh...oh God!" She groaned. He noticed when her arms went up and she grabbed the pillow behind her head and hung on tight.

"Feel good?" He asked her from down below.

"Wha-yes! Yes! Oh, oh, wow!" she breathed.

He paused, curious. "You act like this is new?" He ventured, then licked up her entire pussy.

She shuddered on the bed. "It is," she confirmed. "My ex-husband refused to do it," she said.

Jesus. No orgasms and no oral either?

Suddenly Nate felt ill will towards a man he had never even met. Besides. What kind of dude called himself a man that didn't go down on a woman? He probably expected blow jobs from her all the time too, Nate figured.

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