This is my first attempt at writing an erotic story, feedback would be appreciated!
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I almost didn't see you, leaning up against the sign topped by a huge pumpkin with a mischievous grin. I shivered in the cold air as I walked towards you, admiring the way you filled out the tight black jeans that showed just enough of the outline of your cock to make me curious.
"You're late." I tried my best to look serious about you showing up an hour after our friends and I arrived.
Your playful smile was enough to make me quicken my pace to where you stood. Just the quick kiss you gave me was enough to ignite the smoldering need inside me.
"You know I had work. I got off and came straight here!"
I gave you a hug just long enough to whisper "You will be punished later, don't think you can get away with being late again..."
A slight tilt of your hips pressing against my crotch revealed exactly how your body reacted to my presence. I saw hunger in your eyes as you quickly looked from me to our friends standing a few feet away. You pulled your green and black flannel down, preparing for the night.
We walked towards our friends, and after a round of hello's started walking towards one of the theme park's dozen Halloween-themed mazes with the other hordes of excited groups, giddy with anticipation and ready to be scared by one of the monsters roaming around the park.
I was clad in thin black leggings and a low-cut blue sweater, trying to stay warm as the night turned increasingly chilly. My D cup breasts were barely contained in the sweater, and I could feel your eyes taking in their glory.
I moved a little closer to you as a ghoul dressed in full ghostly makeup eyed us, watching us walk to the first maze.
We settled into a long line to get into the horror-movie themed maze as our friends chattered around us. You pulled me closer as a huge gust of wind breezed past us.
I felt my nipples harden as you wrapped your arms around me and nestled your head on my shoulder so we both faced our friends, still chatting and laughing.
The line took over an hour, while we stole secret kisses when our friends looked away. Occasionally you would taunt me, pushing your growing cock up against the small of my back while planting lingering kisses on my neck.
Finally, it was our turn to travel through the dark maze. Monsters came at us from all corners, walking just close enough to us to make us wonder where they would come from next.