This is my first effort to try my hand at writing. I've been a member for a while and decided to post a story. I'd like to thank Blackrandi1958 for being so patient with me and providing helpful guidance and for the work she did editing. Kudo's and lots of them to her.
I've listed this as a first time story but it's not a first sex story. It's a first from the point of view that it's the first time between two people who become best friends and then lovers.
Like most here this is fiction and it's my world, it can be whatever I want it to be.
I've tried my best to be as grammatically correct and spell checked etc. but I'm sure I missed some.
Lastly constructive criticism is acceptable. Degrading comments will be deleted.
Dana: A First
Sitting at the El Paso airport after a short flight, my phone rang. Looking at the number, I didn't recognize it and it wasn't programmed into my phone. I almost didn't answer, but being out of town I figured I needed to see who it was. If it was a telemarketer, I could just hang up like I always do. When I answered, it was a woman looking for an apartment. I own several apartment complexes back home and I had a pretty good reputation for having some of the best in the area. They were fairly quiet and a good neighborhood, so they were somewhat in demand. I'd also gotten picky over the years of experience, and I could tell by talking to most people, listening to their tone of voice, how they came across, whether they would be a good tenant. I screened people, checked references and backgrounds and did credit checks so I could get a better quality of tenant. Consequently, my places are quiet, no loud parties, no police all hours of the day and night etc. etc.
She had a really nice tone of voice and spoke like she was above the norm for someone looking for a place to rent. She told me that she was recently separated and needed a place for her and her son, something secure and low noise with decent neighbors. Talking with her, she really made a good impression, and sounded like she would be someone who would take care of the apartment. I told her that I was out of town for a few days, but I'd call her when I got back and we could talk.
When I returned, I called her and we met at the apartments. Now, in my mind, first impressions are everything. When she stepped out of her car, I was really surprised: she was dressed nicely, her hair was cute with some red highlights and she had a cute face with little make-up. Now I was REALLY impressed. Between the conversations a few days before and now seeing her in person, I had to check to make sure I wasn't staring with my mouth open. She was a cutie, about 5'2", maybe 100 pounds soaking wet, had a nice figure, was dressed for business and seemed to have her act together. She introduced herself as Dana, we talked a bit and I showed her the apartment I had available. We also went over a few things that I knew had to be fixed and I gave her an application to fill out. I already had in my mind, based on conversation and then meeting her, she'd be a good tenant, as long as she had the means to take care of the rent. It worked out like I thought. I found out that I knew her ex (or soon to be ex, and he was a total jerk). He was a city councilman I'd crossed paths with, and I didn't care for him at all. When I got the application back, she had the means to take care of the rent and stuff, so she got the lease.
I started working on the things that needed fixing, coming up with some other stuff I hadn't noticed before and getting the few items done. She came by a day or two later.
"Paul," she asked, "would it be okay if I brought some of my things over? I'll put them in boxes so they are not in your way"
"Sure, Dana", I said, "If I'm here I'll help you get things unloaded"
The next day, I was cleaning the A/C unit when she came in.
"Good morning," I said.
"I just have a few boxes and loose clothes." Dana said. "I'll just put them here to the side."
Looking closer, she was dressed down: t-shirt and shorts with sneakers, and she looked like she'd been thru a wringer. I didn't say anything right away, but I went to her car and picked up one of the boxes.
"These are dishes and kitchen stuff?" I said. "I can put them on the counter in the kitchen"
"That'd be great," Dana said,
"The loose clothes on hangers I can put up in the closet," I said
"You really don't have to do all that, Paul," Dana said.
"I know, just looks like you could use some help. I'm at a break point anyway," I said.
With all her stuff unloaded and put up, I turned to her. "So how are things going today, Dana?" I asked.
She just turned and met me with a stare.
"What?" I asked. "I'm sorry, (holding my hands out) I'm not trying to interfere, I was just making conversation. Look, I'll just go finish what I was doing"
She didn't say anything, just continued picking up, looking around trying to gauge where she was going to put stuff. I went back to doing what I had been before.
As she was about to leave, she stopped, came over and said, "Paul, look I'm sorry. It's just a really bad day. My ex is being an ass, giving me a hard time. I haven't told him where I'm moving, so please don't say anything to anyone."
Not a problem," I replied. "I understand. I've been there, done that and got the t-shirt. BUT, if he does find out, I do want you to tell him that I don't want any trouble here. If he comes over and starts an argument or anything, you need to tell him I'll have him put in jail for disturbing the peace.
Thinking a second. I said, "Look, if you need to talk, I'll listen; I can even multitask, work and listen at the same time..."
That got a smile and a little laugh. "Okay, I'll see you later," she said.
"I was at least happy I got her to smile," I thought to myself.
I went back to the list I'd made of things that I wanted to make sure worked before I let someone move in. I also did some cleaning. It must have been two or three days later that I was fixing a closet door and checking the bathroom fixtures. I had the A/C running hard, I had the temp down to about 65 and was pleased that it was all running like I wanted for the most part.
The door opened and Dana walked in with an armload of boxes. When I looked up, all I could see was her legs and the top of her head. She put the boxes down and I saw she had on a pair of shorts and cute little top with her hair pulled back, but, WOW, did she have nice legs, and I think my eyes bugged out. I had to do a jaw check to make sure my mouth wasn't wide open, but I got caught.
"What are you looking at?? She asked.
"I guess I..." I was stuttering, and she smiled. I finally had to fess up.
"Well, I was looking at those beautiful legs," I said
Looking down at herself, she said, "Yeah right."
"'Yeah right' is right," I said. "Sorry, but I just had to say that," I said with a grin.
Smiling, she went outside, brought in some kitchen stuff and I stopped to help her unload her car again.
I have some friends to help move furniture, beds and tables the next day, and hopefully that would be all of it, she said.