A Quick BJ: The Collar
A straight gym stud submits to his Dom Daddy.
Thanks for your time, attention and all the feedback, I truly appreciate it. I had set myself a personal challenge to pen a one-shot stand-alone short story, which resulted in two versions of "A Quick BJ" each told from the Dom's or the sub's perspective. Those stories seemed to have spoken to a lot of readers, but many felt like I left them hanging with an unresolved ending. So here is the conclusion.
FAIR WARNING!!! - This is a MUCH darker tale than my usual stories since it involves a Dom/sub relationship with about as happy an ending as that dynamic allows. I recommend reading the previous story A Quick BJ: View from the Bottom before reading this dark tale.
As always, comments and suggestions are always welcome.
I would also love to hear from female readers for their thoughts.
Everyone is OVER 18 in this twisted tale. This is a work of fiction with some unsafe practices. Please be careful in real life encounters.
With my heart pounding in my chest, I knocked quietly on the door and heard Daddy's sexy gruff voice call out.
"Crawl in here cocksucker!"
My head screamed at me that this was a bad idea, but I surrendered to "the urge" just like I always have, and always will, stepping through a door, getting down on my knees like a good cocksucker. Daddy was sitting in his recliner waiting for me with legs spread, casually drinking a beer.
I paused when I spotted a bottle of lube on the coffee table...
My head now screamed at me that this was a really bad idea, but I swallowed what little pride I had left and crawled on all fours into his living room to serve my new Daddy...
"Stop," the man ordered, and I froze in my tracks. "Lose the sneakers."
Not wanting to move from my spot, I used my toes to pry my sneakers off by the heels and let them fall where they may. That seemed to please Daddy and he beckoned me forward with a finger. I took another couple of strides forward until Daddy stopped me with a palm out gesture, "Shirt."
I froze with one "paw" in the air. The man was not only exerting his dominance over me, but underlining my submission to him by treating me like I was a house pet that needed training. He was using my "urge" for cock against me, making me humiliate myself by crawling across his living room carpet while doing a striptease...and I was loving every second of it. I used my free paw to wrestle my pullover shirt off my torso, giving my Daddy a nice little show. I guess he liked it since he pulled his own shirt off, giving me my first view of his bare torso. A fan of dark hair covered his solid chest before descending in a treasure trail to the bulge in his sweats. I wanted nothing more than to crawl forward and bury my face in Daddy's bulge, but I waited patiently like a good obedient cocksucking pet for the man to decide when I could move.
The man beckoned me forward and I eagerly crawled closer on my hands and knees until he signaled for me to stop again. I waited a few seconds until he said, "Jeans." I knew better than to sit up to get my jeans off, so I lowered my chest to the floor with my butt up in the air to undo my belt and jeans before sliding them over my boxer briefs, giving Daddy a glimpse of my cotton clad buns. I saucily wagged my moneymaker a little as I pulled my jeans down my thighs before rising back up to all fours. I waited again, my eyes going back and forth between Daddy's eyes and cock. The man beckoned again, and I crawled out of my jeans as I moved forward. My eyes were locked on Daddy's bulge as I crawled closer, getting a whiff of his hard earned manscent...
The man placed his sneakered left foot in my path, "Untie it...with your teeth."
Seriously? I had only met the man less than an hour ago and now I was in his living room in just my undies on all fours, ready to suck him off again but he wanted to demean me even further. The man idly stroked the bulge in his sweats with his thumb... and I totally caved.
I bent down and as I struggled to get the end of his shoelace between my teeth, I got a healthy whiff of his well-worn gym sneakers that reeked of the familiar stale scent of a men's locker room. My mind flashed back to my college days and images of my teammates' swinging dicks and smooth perky buns joking and jostling each other after a game. If only they could see me now on all fours as I latched onto the lace with my teeth and pulled on it like a pup with an old slipper.
The knot came loose, and I looked up at the man above me as I pulled the lace free. I felt a surge of excitement in my core at the connection between Dom and sub as we held each other's gaze. I surprisingly found myself getting into it and attacked his laces with my teeth, trying to free his foot from its aromatic prison.
The man lifted his foot. "Take it off," he ordered. I paused a moment, trying to figure out how. Inspiration struck and I opened wide and latched onto the sneaker behind his heel, pulling it off his heel and sliding it off. He kept his foot there and I did the same move with his sock. The man then moved his feet so the heel of his bare foot rested on the toe of his sneakered foot. He looked down at me, "Worship."
I had never done anything like this before, never even considered it before, but Daddy was into it. He was still idly stroking his now tented sweats with his thumb. I maintained eye contact as I smooched his big toe, which drew a satisfied grunt from Daddy. That did it for me. I looked him in the eye as I slavishly licked, kissed and worshiped his sweaty foot, sucking his toes, running my tongue between them, nibbling his arch, relishing the masculine scent and sweaty tang of his naked foot. Soon, Daddy had me free his other foot and worship it with abandon.
I dropped to my belly and totally debased myself, humping the carpet as I lapped at Daddy's strong hairy feet like a puppy worshipping his owner. While I worshipped one foot, Daddy would rub the other spit-soaked foot over my face and through my hair, causing me to moan with submissive delight.
Then my phone rang...
I sat up and silently mouthed, FUUUUUUUUUUUCK! The man looked annoyed as I dug my phone out of my jeans and explained, "Sorry. I have to take this. It's my girlfriend..." Daddy patted his left thigh, his meaning clear. I rolled my eyes but there was no time to argue, so I sat on Daddy's knee in just my socks and underwear as I answered the call, "Hey, babe..."
"Hi, honey... I miiiiiss youuuu..." She sounded more than a little tipsy.
"Have you been drinking?" I teased her.