Author's comment:
Hey there! I wrote this story in a phase when I was still trying to figure out whether I preferred to write "full" stories, with an introduction to the characters, some back story that lets you meet the players before getting to the action, or a more "direct" approach, like the one you're about to read. This one was a little experiment I wrote some months back, and I figured I'd share it here anyways. Please let me know what are your thoughts! Do you prefer more complete stories, or would you rather dive right in the intimacy?
Either way, here's the story of a young man on his first trip abroad all alone, where he'll be making a very interesting encounter and learn a thing or two in bed; his innocence will give in to the harsh ways of the more experienced folk he will meet.
I don't yet know if this story will have a continuation, I guess I'll decide once I get some feedback on it, so be sure to let me know what you think!
cayde7
All the characters of this story are fictional and over 18 years old.
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As the hot water was running through my hair, the soothing sound of the drops hitting the shower tray was getting to my head, I was melting under the moist warmth. I heard the sound of the common bathroom door, and saw the shadow of someone entering the other shower, which was right in front of mine; then, after a few moments, I heard the water start to run, but never heard the curtain closing. In fact, as soon as I peeked, I saw the figure of a tall and muscular man as he was getting his hands soapy, then started to wash his arms, chest, abs, then he brushed his crotch, giving a few tugs to his dick -- which was definitely longer than mine.
As I watched his hands running on his skin, I started to absentmindedly mimic the same movements on the same body parts, even though my shower was done already; he was now facing the shower head, washing his back, his buttocks, his ass crack and legs. He turned around once again, and it was then that I noticed: it was the same big guy that I saw before, out of my room; short brown hair, very broad and defined jaw, and the same eyes -- oh shit, he was looking straight at me. I couldn't stop staring though, I was almost hypnotized, I'd stopped moving, but he was still touching his body, rinsing his skin.
After some moments that felt like an eternity, he turned around to shut off the water: I was finally able to look away, and decided to hide back fully behind the curtain. I must have seemed a creep, staring at him through a crevice as he was taking a shower -- what was I thinking...
And then, as I was facing the wall behind, I heard the sound of my curtain open, and my heart skipped a beat; I turned around slowly, speechless and with a stunned look on my face, as the same man from before was now standing right in front of me, towering over me, fully naked in his glorious body.
"If you're going to enjoy a good show, at least you should invite me too" he said, with a deep voice, staring right into my eyes.
I didn't know what to say. "I -- I'm sorry, I didn't mean to... ehm, disturb your shower, I wasn't really looking, I was just" I started saying, as he noticed my growing erection, and, with a tough look on his face, he covered my mouth with his hand, turned me around, pushed me against the wall with his body, and started to brush his skin against mine. I was shocked, I felt his muscles pressing against my back, my cock was now hard and pressing against the wall; with his other hand, he spread my legs apart, got some soap and started to scrub it between my cheeks, right on my puckering hole.
He whispered to my ear: "This is what you get for being a bad boy; now you'll need to be cleaned up a bit, so that we can have some fun later, alright?"
I felt a shiver running though my body, I nodded with my head, as my mouth was still covered; it was all happening so fast, and I was so aroused that I would have obliged to anything, letting his hands touch my weak spots, letting myself be defenseless. After soaping my hole for good, I felt his fingers start to push, but I was still tense, so I couldn't really relax my ass: he pushed with more force, as I let out a moan, then he started to pull apart his fingers, prying my hole open, forcing more of his knuckles in, as long whimpers were escaping my mouth, even if covered.
"You like that boy, don't you? Is that what you wanted all along?" he growled to my ear, as I was incoherently nodding and moaning more and more loudly.
His fingers were pushing farther in, as I felt their cold touch deeper inside my ass, forcing my hole open, until his hand was right between my ass cheeks, the last knuckles fully inside: I felt his fingers beginning to move in a circular way, then bending and poking around my insides. I closed my eyes, whimpering and moaning, as he opened up my ass as I'd never felt before, in such an experienced and meticulous manner I would later be still shocked by.
"Mhhh that's right, your little hole needs a stretch for later, but I think I know what you'll like" he whispered huskily, as his fingers started brushing and then pushing right onto my prostate, making me jolt up and almost scream through his fingers in pleasure, as he started chuckling
"Ohh I guess we found the magic button, didn't we? Do you like it boy? Huh?" he groaned, as he turned my head to face his: he was sporting a wide grin, his hair soaked, as water was still running on our bodies, the sound of the shower hopefully covering that of my screams.