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Disclaimer:
All characters in this story are 18 years old acting in their free will. The names of all characters have been altered to protect identities.
Story Background
Mike has written dozens of erotic stories and published them online. Over about a year, he has built a respectable reader base who are honest in their ratings and comments. Reader comments have helped Mike to improve his writing. The same comments have driven him to improve his writing by writing more chapters and further developing his characters.
As Mike continues to write new stories and chapters, he receives an interesting comment from one of his readers that was sent to him as a feedback email.
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It was a warm autumn Sunday morning, and I sat down with a cup of coffee at my office desk. I popped open my private email account and did a quick visual triage of my new messages.
"Literotica: Feedback for SmirkingBinky" caught my eye, so I opened it and read the short body of the message.
"I wanted you to know that your stories have a deep impact on me. Please keep writing, I enjoy it so much."
I enjoyed getting these messages (especially the positive ones). But feedback messages all came in anonymously, unless the reader explicitly added their name or contact information.
I typed up a quick response, "Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the story. May I ask, what was it that caused you to write your note?"
I hit the "send" button and headed back to my text editor to continue working on one of my chapters. A few minutes later, I heard the familiar sound indicating I had a new email.
First Email with a Name
The email was from someone named KrisM from Gmail. I opened the email and started to read the body of the message:
"Mike,
Thanks for your quick response. I particularly liked the risky public nature of "Blowjobs by Bicycle." I also enjoyed how the lead character fell deeper and deeper into the depths of his lewd desires. Your descriptions were so vivid and accurate, it almost seemed like you were writing from recall. Did you, by chance, have an experience like this?"
Kris"
I paused after, I read the message somewhat amazed that the reader had accurately suspected that I was indeed writing from my own experience. In the case of "Blowjobs by Bicycle", the first two chapters were written from experience. The rest of the story embellished on my actual experiences.
After a few seconds, I decided how to reply:
"Kris,
You are very perceptive indeed. The first two chapters happened as I described them, and I was the guy on the bike. The rest of the story was embellished based on what I wished would have happened.
The same is true with some of my other stories as well. The first (and sometimes second) chapter(s) are true, but the rest of the story continues as fiction.
I hope this answers your question,
Mike"
I sent the email and returned to my other work at my computer. Within a few minutes, another email hit my inbox. It was another email from KrisM:
"Mike,
It's very exciting to me that you have had these experiences. It sounds to me like you have a strong urge for cock that must be satisfied on a regular basis. I don't know what state you call home, but I wish I was nearby to help you satisfy your urges on a regular basis. I think you would enjoy what I have to offer.
Kris"
After the text of the message, there were three pictures of a nice sized cock with a full pair of balls. The first pic was Kris's cock hanging between his legs. It looked long and thick. It was fully shaved, with two big balls hanging as ornaments.
The second pic was Kris's cock at full attention. He was holding it in hand, I estimated the length at about seven and a half inches. The final pic was a pic of his erect cock with a huge puddle of cum that was sprayed across his stomach and chest. It was a very hot picture that demonstrated how much cum his big balls could produce. My cock was instantly hard.
My hands shook as I typed out my reply:
"Kris,
That is a beautiful cock! I would enjoy having it on a regular basis to satisfy the urge I get for cock. As you know from my stories, I love to be an enthusiastic bottom for masculine men who know what they want and enjoy taking it. It is not very likely we are close by, but just in case, I am sending you my zip code to see if meeting face to face is a possibility.
Best,
Mike"
I attached three pictures to see if Kris was interested. All three were nude body pics that were nearly full length but didn't disclose my face. It would allow Kris to see the front and back of my naked body and help him decide if I was attractive to him. I pressed send and waited for a response.
The response was almost immediate:
"I'm 40 miles away. You should visit."
I couldn't believe that Kris was so close. I wondered what he would do if I did visit. Would he expect that I act like the hyperbolic character in my stories? I didn't know if I could live up to that expectation.
I decided to ask him directly:
"Kris,
If I did visit, what would you like to do together?"