Hello, this is my very first story. I am a long-time reader and lurker here but have only recently gathered enough courage to write and submit my first story. If you like it, please let me know, but also any feedback or ideas for improvements would be appreciated, so please comment and be kind, thank you.
P.S. The story is a work of fiction, the characters involved are 18 or older.
My heart was pounding very fast, it almost felt like it was jumping in and out of my chest. I was sitting on my living room couch, nervously fidgeting, waiting for the guy I had been chatting with online for a while now to come over. I was going to get fucked for the first time today.
I leaped to my feet as soon as I heard the doorbell and rushed to open the door.
- Hi, I'm Jack, nice to finally meet you in person, Mark, he said.
I was too stunned to speak, he was even more handsome in person, his jet-black hair, dark eyes, broad shoulders, toned body, and muscled biceps - he was everything I had been dreaming about. Even the way he was standing with his arms crossed across his chest exuded confidence and dominance. He turned me on so much that I wanted him to bend me over and fuck me right then and there on my doorstep for the whole neighborhood to see.
- Mark?
His voice woke me up from my trance and I realized I had just spent way too long staring at his muscled arms, transfixed.
- Nice to meet you, too, I murmured, my face blushing hot red.
He gently pushed my chest and pushed me into the house, stepped in, and locked the door. As soon as the door was locked, we both went in for a passionate kiss. We were still kissing, our hands exploring each other's bodies while we made our way to the living room.
As we got to the couch, he pulled away, looked me right in the eyes, and told me to take my clothes off and kneel. I hurriedly took everything off and knelt down while still maintaining eye contact, I could not look away from his magnetic black eyes.
- Pull down my shorts and get to work, boy.
I reached out and pulled his shorts down. His bulge was magnificent. The tight, white boxer briefs could barely hold the rock-hard Asian monster cock inside. I started kissing his dick gently over the fabric while looking up to him. I could see the look of restless, horny anticipation in his eyes. I slowly pulled off the boxer briefs, and his dick popped out. I swear I could feel my mouth watering. He must've been at least 6 inches long, completely hard, uncircumcised, and veiny, surrounded by a small, well-kept bush of black hair.
- Stick out your tongue, he said.
I did as I was told and he put one hand on my hair, while he tapped his dick across my tongue with his other hand. He then gently slapped me with it across my cheeks and face, several times.
-Good boy, you're a very good boy.
-Thank you, sir.
-Lick it.
I started licking his dick, from the bottom, across the shaft, then over the head, and back down again. The look of immense pleasure on his face and in his eyes motivated me to give him the best possible blowjob I could.
He gently pushed his dick past my lips. He pushed in almost half his tool inside while holding my hair. He went back out again, then in again, every time feeding me more of his glorious Asian dick.
I was running my tongue up and down the shaft and the head while trying to cover my teeth with my lips. Every sigh and every moan motivated me to do even better. Then suddenly I felt my face being buried in his pubes, and his dick reaching the back of my throat, he was in all the way. He held it there for a few seconds.
-Look up, boy.
My brown eyes met his black eyes, I felt totally dominated by this handsome Asian man and I was totally at his mercy. He started picking up the pace, practically face-fucking me at this point.
-You were born to this. Your ass looks really fuckable, too. Can't wait to bury myself in it balls deep.