The story is set in the imaginary town of Carndene, Mississippi, USA. All the characters are aged 18+. I would love to hear from you and will reply to all emails.
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Samuel stepped out of the clapboard church in the town of Carndene, somewhere near Utica. halfway and then some between Raymond and Vicksburg, The hot Mississippi sun beat down on his back as he straightened his tie after Church. His blue eyes scanned the dusty parking lot, squinting through the glare. The congregation of God's Redeemed Flock had dispersed, leaving behind a trail of fading chatter and the occasional crunch of gravel beneath retreating tires. The air was thick with the scent of sweat and fried chicken, the remnants of the post-service potluck.
Today, Pawpaw had preached on 1 Peter 5:8-9 "Be alert and of sober mind. Your enemy the devil prowls around like a roaring lion looking for someone to devour". Samuel was now free of the sermon and took a deep breath, savoring the sweetness of freedom that came with the Sunday afternoon silence. Samuel locked the doors of the Church firmly. Pawpaw's sermons had once been his lifeblood, but now they were merely a cage of words that strangled Samuel's soul.
Walking the short distance home, the oppressive heat of the asphalt rose to meet his soles. The town of Carndene lay sprawled around the church and the houses all had their screens against bugs and the sun. The sidewalks were cracked and weeds grew up through the concrete, whispering secrets of rebellion against the unyielding grip of civilization. Near the Church, a stray dog lazed in the shade of a magnolia tree, its eyes following Samuel with lazy curiosity as he passed. The young man's thoughts wandered, a silent and internal rebellion against the strictures of his upbringing. Samuel's heart was a caged bird, fluttering against the bars of Pawpaw's faith desperate to soar into the world beyond.
Samuel's home was a bastion of righteousness, a fortress built in the 1950's from Pawpaw's religious convictions. Even now Pawpaw wasn't in his own home, he was with a family singing the Lord's praises along with Samuel's mother who had to help him get around now he was so much older. The white picket fence around the house was as unblemished as their family's reputation and the garden was a witness to his mother's tireless efforts to bring order to the unruly wilderness of the world. Samuel approached the gate with a heavy step, the weight of his secret pressing down upon him like an invisible yolk laid across his shoulders. Inside, the house was cool and dark, the drapes drawn against the relentless glare of the day. The empty house provided a brief, silent, respite from the constant scrutiny of his pious family.
In his room, the sanctuary of his private, inner thoughts, Samuel let his guard down. The single bed with its starched white sheets was a stark reminder of his purity, untouched by the hands of another. There was no mirror, Pawpaw didn't believe in the vanity of mirrors. The walls were adorned with verses and pictures of Jesus, eyes that seemed to follow him, judging his every move. Samuel sank into the chair by the window, his gaze lingering on the faded football poster. It was a relic from a time before faith swallowed him whole, a time when his dreams had been filled with touchdowns and cheerleaders instead of guilt and forced prayers. A battered old tin under the bed contained his entire life savings of almost fifty dollars. Samuel collected the folding money and coins and pushed everything down into a pocket.
The town clock struck three PM, a casual reminder of the time he'd wasted. He was a skinny eighteen year old now, a man by the world's standards but in Pawpaw's eyes he was still a child in need of protection. Samuel's allowance was meager, a strategic move to keep the boy from temptation's grasp although the temptations of the flesh grew stronger with each testosterone filled dream, a secret call that became more alluring with every stifled moan of the breeze through the open window. It was time for Samuel to seek what he truly desired, to break free from the chains of his upbringing and embrace the carnality that called to him.
He'd heard whispers, the hushed conversations of the town's more worldly inhabitants. They spoke of a place where his kind gathered, a place where his soul could relax a little in the shadows of Louisville or the town after that. The thought of such a place sent a shiver of excitement and fear down his spine. It was a place where his deepest, most secret yearnings could be satiated but also a place that could bring about his downfall. The allure of sin was undeniable, a siren's song that grew louder with each strike of the clock.
Samuel's hand trembled as he reached into his pocket, his fingertips brushing against the crumpled paper with a scrawled address. It was time to take the first step into the unknown and find that location, to shed the last vestiges of his innocence. Samuel knew the path ahead would be fraught with peril but the promise of release was too great to ignore. With a silent prayer for guidance, he pushed open the bedroom door and descended the stairs. His canvas shoes lay by the front door and he slipped them on before stepping out into the sun-drenched world.
Samuel trudged from Pawpaw's home wearing only a t-shirt and sports shorts, taking other clothes would have been too obvious. The backroad to Louisville was an asphalt ribbon of hope that unfurled in front of him, a promise of escape. Samuel stood by the side of the road ready to stick his thumb out in a self conscious sort of way, his heart hammering in his chest. The air was thick with the scent of heat, dust and the faint tang of gasoline, the only sounds the distant hum of a tractor and the occasional chirp of a cricket. The first car to pass was an ancient pickup, the kind that seemed to have grown out of the red dirt of the South, its engine coughing a greeting as it rumbled by without slowing. The driver was an ancient guy wearing a battered straw hat with thick spectacles. Samuel's stomach twisted with a mix of anticipation and fear, his eyes never leaving the horizon where salvation might appear on four wheels.
A cloud of dust heralded the arrival of the second car, a sleek 1972 Ford Galaxie that slithered down the road like a serpent seeking shade. The windows were tinted, the rumble of its engine a seductive murmur. The vehicle approached with the style of a predator and as it grew closer Samuel's heart skipped a beat. Samuel could feel the eyes within watching him, sizing him up. The car pulled over, the dust settling around it like a shroud and the driver side window rolled down with an electric whisper. A hand, tanned and strong, beckoned him closer.
Samuel stepped towards the car, his legs feeling like they might give out beneath him. The older man behind the wheel of the spacious sedan was a study in contrasts, his face was a roadmap of hard living with a hint of something hard behind the eyes. A cigarette dangled from his lips and the scent of cheap bourbon clung to him like a second skin. The driver looked Samuel up and down, his gaze lingering for some reason on the sweat-soaked patches of Samuel's t-shirt.
"Where ya headed, son?" he drawled, the words as thick as molasses.