This is only my second foray into writing erotica so please comment to let me know your thoughts. Enjoy!
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Thor smiled to himself as he paced the floor of his apartments, eagerly awaiting the arrival of his love. It had been several weeks since Loki had surprised him in his bath and begun something wonderful for both of them; he still hadn't recovered from the shock of discovering that the lithe young god felt as he did, so passionately and so freely.
Since their first intimacies in the bathing room they had tried to behave as if nothing had changed, spending no more or less time in one another's company than before. The hardest part, Thor found, was controlling his gaze. Whereas before he had looked at Loki to share a joke with him or to communicate with him in battle, now he found that he wanted to look almost constantly. He wanted to marvel at the way the sunlight reflected in Loki's raven hair; he wanted to gaze into those deep green eyes; most of all he wanted to admire the way Loki's tight clothing hugged his supple body and highlighted the toned muscles of his legs and buttocks.
Shaking himself from his reverie, Thor glanced around the room again. In order to keep their liasons a secret from the rest of the palace Loki had taken to appearing unannounced in his chambers using, Thor suspected, a combination of secret passageways and sorcery. He had promised to visit this afternoon when nobody was around and now the sun was beginning to set, casting a golden light about the chamber.
Loki stepped, smiling, from a shadow and paused to look his lover over. His eyes drank in the heavily muscled body of his paramour and he moved forwards into a warm embrace.
Thor kissed him deeply, winding his fingers into Loki's hair. Their kisses were always fiery and this was no exception, with Thor holding him tight and drawing him in. There was, however, a desperation in the kiss that was unusual. Something about the way that Thor bit at Loki's lower lip and his ragged breathing made the latter gasp and melt against him.