This is a rewrite of the first chapter of What Happens in Vegas. The biggest change is the beginning where I added a few fun scenes. I think the overall style of it is a little better than the original.
I ended up doing a bunch of edits and changes through out all of the chapters, but this is the only one with significant enough changes to post. I hope you like it! All characters are over 18 and totally fictitious. Thanks for reading!
April 2023
Aaron tapped Fred's score into the app on his phone as he swore tossing his club towards the golf cart. Mark danced out of the way of the club as it skittered along the grass.
"Fuck, Fred!" Mark shouted. "If it's not fun, let's just stop."
Fred swore again and stalked toward them to pick up his club.
"It is fucking fun," he said. He swiped a hand over his forehead. "It's just so fucking hot here, what the fuck?"
Aaron pulled a beer from the cooler they had stashed in the cart and handed it to Fred. He twisted off the cap and took a long swig. The three men had been playing golf all afternoon and drinking the whole time. Aaron's head was pleasantly buzzy as he did his best to keep score on his phone.
"Are you sure it's fun? Cause you seem pissed," Mark said readjusting his golf gloves for the hundredth time.
"Yeah, just got frustrated," Fred said. "Stupid fucking ball."
"Is it the ball or the swing?" Mark asked, swigging from his own beer.
"Fuck you, man," Fred said with a grin. "I don't see you doing any better, huh Aaron?"
Aaron glanced up from his phone.
"Oh, actually you guys are really close," Aaron said. "Mark is winning by just a few strokes."
"Well," Mark said, smiling and crossing his arms.
"Probably Kate's witchcraft, she cast some shit to make my swing suffer," Fred grumbled.
He took another hefty swig from his bottle. Mark feigned surprise and horror.
"I'm shocked you would question my integrity that way? Is it so hard to believe I just have natural talent?" Mark asked.
He shoved his empty beer bottle into the cooler and slid his club back into his bag.
"It is actually!" Fred shouted. "You were way behind me last time we played at home, so obviously, witchcraft."
"It's probably the heat Fred," Aaron said. "And the fact that we're drinking beer and no water."
"Speak for yourself," Mark said, pulling a water bottle from his golf bag and taking a hearty gulp of water. "I've been balancing out my beer consumption with water. But now I've gotta pee like crazy."
Aaron's head spun as he tipped back the rest of his beer.
"Good thing we're on the last hole," he said.
Mark slid behind the wheel of the cart, while Aaron and Fred settled on the passenger seats. He zoomed off down the cart path, while Fred searched for his wayward ball.
"Stop! I see it!" Fred shouted.
Mark stopped the cart and Fred slid out of the seat a little clumsily. He chuckled as he selected a club.
It was so damn hot; he could feel sweat trickling down his neck under his collar making his polo shirt stick to his skin. He twisted a bit, trying to get it unstuck and positioned himself for his next shot.
Aaron watched his friend get ready for his shot and noticed how his shirt pulled across his broad shoulders. His eyes wandered down to Fred's ass as he leaned forward to take his shot. As he twisted Aaron felt a rush of heat in his stomach. It coiled through him nestling low in abdomen. He bit the corner of his lip as he watched Fred closely.
The sleeves of his shirt hugged around his biceps. Aaron's eyes were glued to those arms as he swung the club. He sucked in a little breath as his cock twitched, thickening slightly.
He shot a quick glance at Mark, blushing a bit hoping his arousal wasn't obvious. Mark was staring down at his phone with a smile, texting quickly with both thumbs. So, talking to Kate again, he didn't notice Aaron's reaction to one of their lifelong friends. He adjusted in his seat slightly trying to tuck back his cock, that seemed to thicken more, each time he looked at Fred.
"Yeah! That's fucking better!" Fred shouted.
He turned quickly biting his lower lip savagely pumping his arm, kicking out one leg. Aaron watched his little celebration, his mouth open slightly and his cock going harder in his pants. It would be difficult to hide in a minute. He cleared his throat and tried to look away from Fred but couldn't drag his eyes away.
What the fuck is happening here? Aaron thought to himself. His forehead was misted with sweat unrelated to the scorching desert sunshine. He wanted to groan and grab himself. Or grab Fred and grind his hips...
He shook his head quickly as Fred approached the cart.
"Mark, come on you dick," Fred spat. "Be in the moment."
"I am!" Mark said, sliding his phone back in his pocket. Fred rolled his eyes and then looked at Aaron.
"Oh shit," Fred said. "Are you OK Aaron?"
"What? Yeah! I'm fine," Aaron sputtered.
"Holy shit you looked really flushed," Mark commented. He held out his water bottle. "Here, drink some water."
"Damn man," Fred said, as he pulled a towel from his golf bag and handed it Aaron. "You're sweating like crazy. Maybe we shouldn't finish."