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One day Raven was innocently walking down a posh street in Finchley, when all of a sudden, something hit her. She fell, hitting her head on the floor as she landed . When she woke up she was in a room full of rock posters, chains and guys stuff. There were three guys in the room. Two of them were leaning over her; the other was in the corner crying. Raven immediately recognised them. They were her favourite band Busted . She tried to sit up. Her head throbbed with pain and so did her wrist.
"No. Lie down. Just for now," James said .
"You really banged your head," Charlie said . Raven lay back down.
"What's wrong with Mattie?" Raven asked .
"He was the one who hit you, but I don't know why it's upset him," James whispered .
"Yeah, he's really beating himself up about it," Charlie said quietly, "You better get some sleep babe, we'll wake you when we're gonna eat,"
"Thanks Chase and you James. I'll talk to Mattie later," Raven said sleepily. She fell asleep.
She awoke with James gently shaking her.
"How's your head? Oh, and your wrist?" he asked .
"My head's fine," Raven said, "I just need some aspirin or something. My wrist still hurts but I'll live," Raven said with a smile. "Thank you so much for taking me in," Raven said as she gently took hold of James's shirt and pulled him closer. She kissed his lips gently as she curled her left leg around his waist. She kissed him harder. He slipped one had around her waist and the other found its way to her thigh at his waist. Raven moved her spare hand to the back of James's head . Raven's tongue snaked into James's mouth and started a battle with his own. She reached down and gently squeezed James's cock. James moaned softly into Raven's mouth. She gently ran her fingers through his hair then stepped back.
"We better get down for something to eat. They'll be wondering where we are," Raven said as she winked at James. They walked downstairs to where the others were. As soon as Mattie saw Raven he got up and ran to the back yard .
"Sorry about him," Charlie apologised .
"It's ok," Raven said, "I'll talk to him later. After all he is sleeping in the same room as me. I'll talk to him when we all go to bed,"
"Good point," James said disappointedly. James wished Raven was in his room. They sat down for something to eat and talked about anything that came to mind . After, Raven helped the guys clear away, then she went and sat in the lounge with James. Charlie went to the back yard to talk to Mattie.
"So James What type of movie's do you like?" Raven asked him.
"Mainly horror even though they scare the shit out of me. I usually end up cowering behind Mattie or Charlie," he said rather sheepishly.
"Well you can cower behind me if you want. I wouldn't mind at all," Raven said with a grin. She leaned over and kissed him hard .
Mattie was in the back yard sobbing when Charlie came up behind him.
"Don't tell me you're still upset over what you did?" Charlie asked
"Well how would you feel if you were me and you hit someone as beautiful and as amazing as Raven and knocked her unconscious!?" Mattie shouted back.
"Well I suppose I'd feel quite bad, probably terrible." Charlie replied .
"It's even worse when you're in love with the person you've hit," Mattie mumbled .
"What, sorry I didn’t hear what you said," Charlie asked .
"Nothing,"
"You said something. What did you say?"
"I said it's even worse when you're in love with the person you've hit," Mattie said louder.
"T rue true. But you gotta talk to her about it or wait until tonight coz that’s when she said she was gonna talk to you," Charlie said .
"She's mad at me for hitting her isn't she?" Mattie said sadly.
"No. She isn't. She loves you and I'm not just saying that to make you feel better. She really does like you a lot. She was really concerned when she saw you were upset." Said Charlie disappointed that Raven didn’t love him instead . "Talk to her tonight, but come in and watch a movie with us before you go to bed . We don't want you getting ill from staying out here all evening." Charlie said with a grin, "Come on up you get." Charlie said as he pulled Mattie to his feet and kissed him.
They both walked inside and sat down. Charlie sat in between Raven's legs against the couch and Mattie sat next to Raven on the couch with James on the other side.
The movie was 10 minutes in when Raven turned to Mattie and whispered,
"I'm not mad at you, I'm just glad you're ok and that you didn't fall as bad as I did,"
Mattie smiled and leaned his head on Raven's shoulder, Raven placed her left hand on Mattie's thigh. She did the same for James and she crossed her ankles over Charlie's chest which brought a smile to his face. Throughout the film Raven continued to move her hand further and further up Mattie's thigh until it reached the top, then she uncrossed her ankles from Charlie's chest and swung them over his head and placed them over Mattie's lap. She then wrapped her left arm around Mattie's waist and she put her right arm over his left shoulder. Slowly as the film went on she ran her fingers down his chest until they reached his jeans. The room was very dark, the only light was from the TV and that wasn't much. You could hardly see your own hand in front of your face if you looked . Raven undid the top button of Mattie's jeans and undid the zip.