This is my first story. I welcome constructive criticism and I hope you enjoy. Let me know of if you like me to write more.
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She stood in the parking lot next to her car feeling like a slut. Wearing the clothes he had picked the night before she couldn't help it. The skirt was way too short and there was nothing underneath to keep the breeze off of her. The shirt was tight and she didn't have a bra on. Her nipples were saying hi to every stranger that drove by, all of them staring a second too long. There was nothing she wouldn't do to hear him say "good girl".
She thought she saw him driving up, she got a warm feeling inside.
He saw her from across the parking lot standing there like he knew she would be, she rarely disobeyed him. She looked delicious. The men driving by couldn't keep their eyes off of her. He knew she liked it. As he pulled up she waited patiently by the door as he got out grabbed her bag and helped her in. He didn't allow her to open doors when they were together. As they drove off he found it hard to keep his eyes on the road.
She didn't know where they were going, it was going to be a surprise. The thought of it made her moist, she wanted to touch herself. It was an urge she had a lot lately. As if he knew what she was thinking he told her to pull up her skirt.
When they got to the hotel she was soaking wet. He could see the lust in her eyes. She was in for a treat today. He got out of the truck, went around, and opened her door. She started to get out and he pushed her back, he had to taste her.
As he pushed her back and pinned her down she felt his tongue start kissing and licking her thighs. There was little talk to this point but so much had been said. She felt him find her clit and she nearly exploded. She was trying not to let go yet. She grabbed his head hard and wrapped her legs around him, it was all that she could take. As she bucked furiously his grip on her tightened.