My Daughters Bleaching
First off all, let me thank Samantha Turner, a volunteer editor on this site, for her superb editing skills and encouragement. Without her support the story would have been clunky, littered with convoluted structures and poor grammar.
This story is loosely based on real events, how I found out my daughter was living out a secret life, and my secret fantasy, How she broke my heart, shamed me and how I nearly wanked myself into a coma. This blew up about ten years ago. It has been embellished for fun, but the rough story happened. If I continue, it will enter the fantasy zone more and more. All characters are above 18 and had a great horny consensual time.
I'm not a professional writer and this is my first story, so I hope you enjoy it. I also hope the grammar isn't too bad and the story has a flow you'll enjoy.
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It was late Sunday morning, I was in the garden, pruning the roses, cutting the grass, and cleaning up leaves. The July sun was warming my back as I therapeutically detoxed making sure my picture perfect world stayed picture perfect. The Mrs and the two younger kids were out doing kids sports and Kelly, my oldest, had turned nineteen. She worked the weekend night shifts at a warehouse in the centre of the city giving her extra money while at university. She didn't need it, but she was self reliant, and I was happy that she had shown the maturity and the independence to get a job and pay for her own lifestyle. She had a routine that when she finished her shifts she would go and sleep over with her friend Sara, a lovely Muslim girl who also worked at the same warehouse, they went to the same university and studied the same course. After the shift ended, they would watch some movies and chat, finally Kelly would come home tired, exhausted, and sleep.
While I was mowing the lawn, I noticed a dark green Jaguar slow down to a stop on the opposite side of the street, the driver was just past my sight I could see the back of the Jag, normally I wouldn't pay any attention to the car, but this one was impressive, I do like my cars, and a racing green Jag is a visual pleasure. I couldn't see the driver through the tint on the back window, but I could make out the broad shoulders and the back of his bald head.
I have a character flaw and one way it expresses itself is I am a car snob. I often check and compare my BMW and Mercedes to other peoples cars, checking the alpha status. You win some, you lose some. I looked at the Jag, I liked what I saw but I felt the pride of knowing mine were just a bit better. It's a bad trait, but one I have, I get the buzz of seeing a nice car, and knowing my penis extension is bigger so to say. I was curious to see who was in the car, and I was surprised to see Kelly getting out of the back, wearing her baggy sportswear, long dark shorts that stopped just above the knees, white socks and trainers, and a t-shirt I hadn't seen her wearing before. She got out without thanking the driver, she slowly walked over to me. The car growled and pulled away.
"Hi Dad."
"Who was that?"
"Oh, a corporate car,, the warehouse has a deal for night shift workers, I can use it for the ride home from Sara's."
"Oh nice, how was work?"
"Terrible, lots of jokers, lifting and carrying, I'm exhausted, and so tired, I feel my knees are going to break," I looked down and saw her grazed red knees.
"What happened?" I asked, indicating the slight red bruising.
"I had lots of lifting, up and down and on my knees all night it's very demanding. Dad, I've got a headache, I'm feeling tired, I didn't get much sleep. So I'm off to bed." She cut the conversation, leaned over, and kissed me on the cheek.
I cut in, "Is that a new T-shirt?" I asked, she was wearing a nice fitted T-shirt with a playing card of the Queens of Hearts printed on the front.
"Yeah, me and Sara saw these, and bought one each. Aren't they lovely?"
"Yes, sweetheart, they are. They make you look great," she smiled, pushed her glasses up her nose, and walked into the house, and straight to her bedroom.
Now, I'm not a prude, and I have the internet, and I am aware of White Men and Asian Female porn genres, I'm also aware of the Queen of Hearts symbol, but outside of that mental flash, I didn't jump to conclusions. It was a nice T-shirt and thankfully Kelly was finally expressing her style without picking dour or boring clothes.