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Anna just stared at the approaching cars. People come to the park all the time she thought. Emmanuel just wanted to scare her and cop a feel. Although a part of her screamed for him to seduce her again... She didn't want things to go too far.
Emmanuel stood in front of Anna, he fished his hunting knife out if his pocket. "Fix your shirt." he ordered.
"Fuck you jerk you ripped it!" Anna yelled. She tried to pull the rip together, but... It wasn't working.
John was 6'2. 20 Years Old. Broad shoulders and very strong. He has slick black hair that was cut short. He walked up to the two teenagers with a smile on his face, along with his three extra men. The other four waited in the car. "Emmanuel! You brought company. I was expecting your Russian friend... Nickolai." his hard stare found Anna he winked as she made eye contact. She turned away. "I like her more than him."
Emmanuel held his knife towards John. "Fuck off. She's got nothing to do with this man. She is innocent!"
"Mmmm.." John smiled signaling one of his men to grab the sexy woman. "Just how i like my meat.. Rare."
Anna backed away from the approaching Latino that was stomping his way towards her. She backed into another one of johns men. He grabbed her arms roughly and licked her neck. She let out a gasp in extacy before stomping on his foot. He yelled and punched her head. She blacked out.
Emmanuel was so lost in trying to kill John, he hardly noticed what happened to Anna. He turned around and saw the man lift her up. "What the fuck man? What do you want?"
"I want you to suffer. I knew you had a weakness... Now I know it's the girl. She looks like a good fun old fashioned fuck!"
Nickolai approached the scene in his usual torn jeans and nice button up shirt. He was 6'4 and 260lbs. He was strong. His thick blonde hair was messed up from his usual 10pm fuck he always got. His Russian accent was thick as he spoke "Whats going on?"
Emmanuel said something to Nickolai in Russian and then turned to John. "My life for hers."
"Fuck that!" Nickolai growled. "We can cut a nicer deal. No?"
John laughed "Death would be to easy. Too simple. I have a better idea." he licked his lips. "I want her fucked. Brutally and viciously. Tonight. Either I give her a good fuck, then my boys do too. Or Nickolai fucks her."
Emmanuel's face went red. "No." he knew her worst fear he couldnt let this happen.
"So we all get to fuck her then kill her." John smiled.