English is not my native language, and this is my first story ever in which I didn't skip over the sex scenes. Constructive criticism is very welcome!
This story is a bit long, if you're looking for quick satisfaction you might want to read a different one.
The story is, of course, copyrighted. Do not republish it without my permission.
– EchoLaLia
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I have spent a large part of my life staring into Amnia's eyes. I'm only eighteen, and yet I think if you add up all the time I've spent like that it will be a few months. Her eyes are a deep dark green that I've never seen in anyone elses eyes, and so full of tiny details that I still haven't seen all. I never needed to leave my village to explore a world – I just went to see my friend and looked into her eyes. Amnia didn't mind, she always just sat there as if she were patiently waiting for something.
She really is special: as tall as a man, slim, strong, flawless both in looks and personality. I was sure she'd get married to a very rich man, so I spent all time I could find with her, enjoying her presence and company as much as possible until she would inevitable be taken far away from me.
Me? I'm just an average farmers' daughter, and I'm a bit on the heavy side and I don't watch my words. Like everyone here I have cinnamon coloured skin, brown eyes and straight black hair. The only positive thing to be said about me is that I can read and write well. Amnia often reminded me of that. "Sonma," she would say, "you talk and write like a city girl. I'm sure you'll go far." Such sweet nonsense, there are plenty of smart people in the city. No, I'm not bitter. Life is what Fate gives you.
I'm not sure why nobody ever teased us with my staring. Maybe it's because she was the daughter of the chief. Or maybe people figure we have a special bond because we were born on the same day. It doesn't matter anymore. Everything has changed. I can never return to my village.
The day after one of my people has celebrated his or her eighteenth birthday, he or she must go on a pilgrimage to a temple in Lemechte, the capital of our nation. After participating in rituals there, one becomes an adult, and allowed to marry. I always thought the pilgrimage was unfair to us in our village near the border, but it turns out all routes are equally long. People born in Lemechte have to leave the city, walk to a certain temple, and then return to Lemech's temple. One long straight trip seems better after all!
Amnia and I were born in early spring, and spring was late this year. The weather would make travelling difficult. To make things worse, I didn't want to become an adult. Marrying would mean I would have to spend much less time with Amnia, and that is if we would be so lucky to get married to men living near each other. She didn't seem happy to go either.
It was snowing when we climbed out of the valley, and it was still snowing when we reached the pass. Some wolves followed us for a while, but they didn't come close, and they left when Amnia threw a rock at them. The road down into the next valley was slippery, and when darkness fell I was sure I would break my neck on this first day. It stopped snowing after a while, and the full moon provided some light. We did make it to the next village, but there our luck got worse anyway. We walked into the inn, and before we even had a chance to say "hello" the owner grabbed us by our coats and threw us out. Nobody was willing to give us shelter. They'd open their door, have one look at Amnia, and slam it in our faces without a word.
Finally we found a haystack. It was much, much colder than the heated houses around us, but at least it was soft. The cold made me shiver like an earthquake, and made my arms and legs hurt. I was very surprised when Amnia started undressing herself, so I couldn't look away or close my eyes quickly enough to stop myself from seeing something forbidden. I sat there, head turned away, eyes closed, hands over my eyes, and then she started undressing me!
"Mmamnia. Mat are you doim? Mop mat." I mumbled. My lips were almost too cold to talk.
"I'm saving your life, silly."
She held me close against her, wrapped our clothes around us and piled some hay on top of us. Her skin was hot as if she had been walking in the sun on a summer day. Her small breasts and strong belly pressed against my back made my heart race. I was sure that what she was doing was forbidden! I tried to get out of her embrace, but her arms were too strong. After struggling for a minute I figured forbidden skin contact is better than a cold death. I relaxed and moments later I fell asleep.
We got dressed in the first light, carefully avoiding seeing each others bodies. We left the hostile village before sunrise.
"Sonma," Amnia said, "you have been a great friend."
"Thank you. So have you."
"You don't owe me anything."
"I am your friend."
"You don't owe me anything. I have to leave you now, please don't follow me but complete your pilgrimage."
"NO!" I shouted at her, "I will go wherever you go!" The words came out of my mouth as if they had been prepared long ago, even though I had no idea why I would make such a promise when she didn't want me with her in the first place.
"Sonma, I declare you don't owe me anything. You are free to go."
"As far as I know I don't owe you anything, but what does that have to do with leaving me? And why aren't you going to Lemechte? You will be a pariah if you don't."
Amnia sighed. "Sonma, your family has a blood debt to me."
"Don't be ridiculous. There is no such thing, and we've never harmed you anyway. Now tell me what's really going on."
Amnia shook her head. "You wouldn't believe me. But I will find a way. I have time, it seems I have no choice but to walk in the direction you have to go until I find out how to free you."
Amnia ended the discussion by walking away. The path was narrow, I had to walk behind her. I didn't mind, it had always been nice to observe her. She moved with an elegance that didn't seem to match her strength. Now I had been so close to her, the pleasure was more than aesthetic alone. I felt a kind of hunger, and it grew stronger with every movement of her hips I watched.
"Sonma."
I didn't hear her. I was too busy watching the dance of her body and her hair. Oh gods, her hair.
Amnia stopped and turned to me. "Sonma, why don't you tell me the story of Lemech and Mae'a?"