Forward from the author -
Here we are, the awaited second chapter of what I initially thought was going to be a simple tale.
I already had a rough outline going in, but it grew and grew beyond my wildest expectations as I started putting words down.
Dialog is hard. And I knew I wanted this chapter to be almost full of it. It took a lot of writing and rewriting to get the characters to where I envisioned them. But I think, and hope, that the end result will be worth it.
Writing this chapter has been immensely rewarding as a fledgling author. Writer's block was a real problem, trying to find ways to seamlessly transition from moment to moment for the characters as they were. But people talk of "shower thoughts", and as I was writing this, I was getting 3-5 of them per day. I'd run myself into a corner, only for a beautiful solution to emerge hours later, and have me rushing back to the keyboard to make sure to get it all down, and puzzle pieces started to come together, as if by magic.
So that's enough of my story for this session.
This chapter's a bit of a slow burn, with a decidedly different and singular focus than my first chapter, but please bear with it, as I attempt to build this story's backbone that will be immensely important for future chapters.
Without further ado, enjoy!
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An awkward silence had descended over the room.
Benson's jaw hung slack, failing to articulate his voice. His right arm was held limply outstretched, index finger partially extended, caught somewhere between an orative gesture and an emphatic pointing. His hand wavered in the air with nervous uncertainty as fingers twitched, as if blindly grasping for the invisible pull-cord that would drop the curtain to end this uncomfortable scene.
The girl merely stood silently, still regarding him with an open, gentle smile. Sensing his intent, she ever-so politely gave Benson the space to speak his mind uninterrupted. She was unable to mask her own anxiety, though. As she stood patiently at attention, her full, luscious thighs rubbed together as her hips wriggled with nervous energy.
Internally, Benson was horrified. An entire week's worth of listlessness, and then anticipation, and then excitement had brought him here, to this place once again. For the past three days, the things he would say, the questions he would ask, had consumed his every waking thought. But for all the strangeness he had already experienced in this place, he somehow hadn't expected the curve ball that the ravishing young woman before him had just thrown his way. At that very revelation, his entire script had been blown to the wind.
Existential terror gripped him, rooting him in place. Not because of what his eyes were seeing, however. But because of the strange, out-of-body experience he was feeling, utterly helpless as his body gawped at the air idiotically, like a beached flounder.
It was only as the girl's bright smile faded into something more like a nervous grin that Benson regained his senses, suddenly feeling guilty for the obvious discomfort he must have been causing her.
Benson's shoulders relaxed, and he buried his forehead against his palm and shook his head in embarrassment.
Screw the script.
"S-sorry about that," he finally spoke, still somewhat unsure of himself, a silly, sheepish grin now plastered to his face. "I, uh, just came back to return this." He reached into his pocket to fish out the dark metal key.
Liar. That was the
last
thing on your mind. Whatever. Just play it casual
. The ice had finally been broken.
With solemnity, she approached him to receive the object. She took hold of the key, grasping it firmly, and held it tightly to her chest as if it were precious. Puzzling at first, she silently reached into one of her sleeves to produce a second, identical key. Still befuddling was her next action, which was to suddenly thrust out both arms, so as to hold the heads of both keys to his face, at eye level. Her brow was furrowed, her jaw clenched.
Benson had to suppress laughter because she wore the expression of someone trying
too
hard to appear deathly serious, and her delicate feminine features simply didn't wear it well. Obliging her, though, he turned his attention to the objects held forth. He had to squint because it was hard to discern the details on the black iron keys under the low, ambient room lighting. At his left was the original key he had returned, embossed with ornate numerals reading "346". On his right, he instead made out a very similar "364".
"I don't understand," he said, with a befuddled tone to his voice, a finger waggling and pointing dumbly in the air towards the two keys.
She hesitantly withdrew her right arm, that held his original key, leaving only the second for his further inspection. She dropped her gaze towards the floor, as she finally opened her mouth to speak, sighing audibly in the process. "
This
was the key I meant to give you," she spoke softly. Eyes flicked repeatedly in his direction, but struggled to make contact.
This time, Benson laughed aloud. Just a single "ha!", but it was loud, and boisterous. Enough to shake the girl from her sullen, withdrawn state. Instead, she recoiled, with an intense look of worry on her face, as if she had sensed that he had somehow cracked.
"Seriously? You practically
forced
me into that room in the first place. Then you wake me up, scare me half to death, and chase me out? All that mess because you mixed up the room number?" Benson scoffed loudly. He was afraid he had actually oversold the mock indignation, but he wanted to gauge her reaction.
Her response was immediate, dropping her arms to her sides, and bowing deeply for him. "I really must apologize, sir! I was simply really afraid that Syl--" There was that name again. He actually
really
wanted to hear what she had to say on that subject, but he intentionally cut her off with a dismissive wave, leaving only a look of bewilderment on her face. There would be time for more of that talk later, he hoped.
"Really, don't sweat it," he said, shifting to a more casual tone, as he waved her off again sensing she wanted to launch into another apologetic spiel. "Say, do you think we could, y'know, just chat? Just clear the air a bit."
A thought crossed his mind as he looked back at the concierge desk that had been so abruptly vacated. "Wait, I'm sorry. I haven't kept you from your job, have I? You've got your key back now. If there's nothing else you need from me, just say the word and I'll get out of your hair."
She reached out and grabbed delicately at his sleeve, as if afraid he were actually about to leave, and shook her head fervently.
"No, it's fine. Let's talk. I'd really like that," she shyly admitted. She turned toward the depths of the hall and gestured broadly. "Perhaps the lounge area would be more to your liking." Her professional manner started to show through again.
He spotted the seating just around the corner. Somehow, he'd missed the space entirely on his first visit here. He chalked it up to that night's many distractions. "That sounds great! Honestly, probably would've just stayed standing here for hours if you did nothing to stop me, but my legs would've hated me after."
"Shall we, then?" She wore a gentle smile, but her eyes seemed more conflicted.
They walked together. Rather than the excitable, bouncy rhythm with which he had previously only known her for, this was a leisurely affair. He noted that rather than lead the way, she chose to keep pace aside him. As they made their way across the room, she gradually seemed to lean in closer and closer, until she nearly stood with her shoulder against him. He couldn't help but watch in fascination as the thin, whip-like tail that protruded from her backside also seemed to perk up. Throughout the awkward, tense parts of their interaction, it had hung limply between her legs. But as they walked side-by-side, it started to swish around with its own sort of personality. It reminded him of a dog's tail, with how transparently it betrayed its owner's emotions. Benson immediately rushed to expunge that last thought from his mind, because it felt somehow disrespectful the moment it had formed.
His curiosity got the better of him, as he could no longer keep himself from addressing the elephant in the room.
Another bad animal metaphor. Those words had better not pass your lips, idiot
.