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The Dragon's Eye
The time when the Great War between the Orcs and the humans were raging in the Desert of Ilahi, I was sitting at my desk minding my own business, the major thought on my mind being whether I'd be able to afford to eat after the day after tomorrow.
Food was the issue, and realizing it was already past the middle of the day and I hadn't had a customer in a week, and wondering how hungry I'd have to get before I'd be walking the streets looking for odd jobs and manual labor. Then someone knocked on the door. I put the half-drained flask I had been nursing in a drawer and said, "Come in."
A woman entered my office. Tall and slender, much like whipcord lean. Her hair was green as her eyes, and flowed back passed her pointed ears. Her skin was the brown of healthy bark. Her face was marked high-cheek-boned face. Her green skin tone matched the patterns on her tunic and britches. Now I know most of you would have guessed it by now - she was an elf.
Now you may be asking how was an Elf coming into a city and asking help, that too from a 'human'. Well Elves are no more the nomads who only live in forest and rarely congregate with humans. A lot has changed since the last three centuries. Elves started living with humans since the Ancient War ended. Yeah you are right again - it was between Orcs and humans aswel. Due to the increasing threat of being run over by the Orcs, the humans requested the help of the elf's who in those days preferred living in the forest, incognito. I don't know how but the humans were able to form some sort of alliance and with their help stopped the Orcs and reinstated peace in the lands. After the war ended, many Elves started coming out from their isolation from the jungle and started to live with the humans. The humans were, by that time, used to seeing the Elves, as most of them fought with them side by side. So their reintroduction in their day to day lives was , let's say... went about without much resistance. Small conflicts between humans and Elves would pop up now and then but as years rolled by, the conflicts decreased. Now three hundred years since the Ancient war, most folks don't give a shit what you are - human or Elf, as long as you have enough money and not cause any problem with the authorities.
Now back to what I was saying. This elf woman came to my humble abode which served as both my office and home with a request "My husband has been kidnapped,"
Her husband had a large warehouse on the docks and a fleet of barges on the river. He hadn't come home the previous night. According to her, he had always come home before nine but did not come home on that night. A note had appeared under the door in the morning.
She passed it over to me.
Payment of 20,000 gold sheatles will cause the return of Fredrick Shumack. He is not hurt, yet search will cause death. More instructions will forth come.
The Dark Raven
"Huh," I said. The style was stilted, making me think of someone who was trying to sound educated without the benefit of actually having an education. On the other hand, the words were spelled right and the penmanship was neat. Still, I didn't have to look too closely to find the major unusual detail. The medium was a sheet of glistering iron, and the words had apparently been etched into it with fire.
"Do you have any idea who this Dark Raven is?" I asked.
"Certainly not, of course not," she said. "That is your job, isn't it?"
I made a noncommittal sort of hmm sound and let her start talking again. She had gone to the Palanchins, our very own police department. With the current political situation and the war going on, they weren't about to investigate anything, unless the order came as a command from the Guardians. So she'd gone to the Guardians. The Guardians were having too much fun enforcing martial law to worry about another kidnapping. The only kidnappings they were interested in were the ones they were doing themselves. I hoped for Shumack sake they weren't the ones who had picked him up. I wasn't about to fight the Guardians for him, even if she paid me a lot, and I didn't think anyone else would be prepared to either.
"Will you find him?" she asked.
"I'll do my best," I said, "under the circumstances. That's my job."
She made an unhappy face at me. Sometimes that was a good tactic - I'm a man, and like any 'good' man I'll turn gooey under the right circumstances - but it wasn't going to work on me this time. I already didn't like her. Yeah, even if she a pretty hot to look at.
"If I pay you good money and give you my trust," she said, "I would expect that you would at least be willing to guarantee -"
I had been leaning back in my chair. Now I let the chair fall forward so the two front legs hit the beam floor with a sharp 'thud', and pointed a finger at her for further emphasis. "Look, lady," I said. "Rantio Ovaran is a big city. There must be at least seventy thousand people living here. Any day of the week a bunch of them disappear and never get found. Now we're sitting with a dead Monarch, whose sons probably knocked him off is in charge, and mercenaries are running around the streets giving orders to the rest of the normal Guardians. You think the mess out there doesn't make the usual mess worse? Well, it does, lady, a lot worse. People are getting rounded up, people are getting executed, and people are getting kicked into the gallows for just being in the wrong place. Not criminals, not only political folks, just ordinary people like you and me, you understand that? In this kind of situation, a lot of old grudges find themselves getting settled, a lot of nastiness pops up. It's rough out there."
"But," she said, still pouting, "but what should I do, then?"
"If you hire me, I'll find your husband if he's findable. Are you hiring me?"
"Yes, yes, of course I am, even if -"
"Then get ready to pay this Raven person."
"But 20,000 sheatles! How could I -"
"I'll get you the money back if I can."
"But can't you bargain with -"
"You might reflect," I said, "on the fact that money can generally take more wear and tear than husbands can."
That shut her up. I asked questions, but none of the answers were helpful. She didn't know of any peeved employees. The list of business enemies was short; she said her husband had a reputation as a straight dealer. They had no children.
"Who gets everything if he dies?" I said.
"Why, I'm not sure. I really don't know."
I had yelled down for a envoy earlier, after the scent of work had floated in with her, and the messenger now returned with Gazi. Gazi was in more-or-less the same line of work as me, whatever that was, and we used each other as backup man when things were happening. He was glad to have something to do that might pay, at least as glad as me. As the wife was leaving in Gazi's custody she paused and looked back.
"Will you find him?" she repeated.
"Yeah, I'll find him," I said. I strapped on my sword and headed for the man's warehouse.