This is a fictional story, none of it is true. This is my first story so I would like some feedback, any constructive criticism is appreciated. I might make a second story, depending on comments and whether or not I can be bothered; I'm a pretty lazy guy, though I already have some ideas. If I do create another one, it won't be up for a long time; this one took me ages to finish.
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Hello, my name's Tony Richards and this is the tale of my 18th birthday. I was quite handsome around this time, standing at 5'9 with a muscular build from going to the gym twice a week, so I had no problem with girls.
It was on the evening before my birthday, my mom had just told me about the party she had been planning with my dad. I didn't mind since I didn't have any other plans other than to try my luck with my uncooperative girlfriend, Emily, who decided we should wait for the right time, whatever that means. I had already agreed to see her that day so I figured I should invite her over.
"Is it alright if I invite Emily?" I asked my mother, praying to god that she would say yes.
"Hmm, I suppose, but only if you promise to behave yourself." She replied, almost sounding like she was talking to a young child.
"Oh I don't know about that" I said with a mischievous grin.
"Very funny, so it'll be dinner for five then" she calculated, the five being me, her, Emily, my dad and my older sister.
I began walking to my room with a big grin on my face, already thinking of ways to seduce Emily the next day. I masturbated while thinking about how great it would be to see her naked and even fuck her. Emily was a gorgeous girl standing at 5'6 with a figure most girls would kill for; she had flowing blonde hair which reached just below her shoulders and a pair of nice, big 38DD tits, which I knew from stealing one of her bras to masturbate to. She also had a slim waist, lovely long legs and a beautifully perky ass that anyone would love to give a good smack.
When I was finished I called Emily and told her about the party, she gladly accepted the invitation as she and my family got on very well and of course she was glad to be with me on my birthday. As soon as she hung up I drifted into a deep sleep, the last thing I noticed was that my door was slightly ajar, but I thought nothing of it as I was so tired.
It was already 11:00am by the time I woke up in the morning, so I quickly had a shower, got dressed and went downstairs. Once in the kitchen, hoping for a nice breakfast, I found my folks preparing for the party with music, preparing the table, a film just in case and even a few bottles of booze, which I could legally drink now. My dad was the first to greet me "Hi son, happy birthday."
Then my mom chimed in "Happy birthday Tony, so how does it feel being 18?"
"I don't feel much different than yesterday, really." I answered "Do you need a hand with anything?"
"No, I think we've got everything pretty much covered, why don't you watch TV, or play a game or something" his mother answered.
"Alright, I'll just make myself some breakfast." I said as I reached for a frying pan.
After I cracked an egg and put a couple of pieces of bacon on the pan my sister, Chloe walked in and snatched it from me, saying "Let me take care of that for you bro. You can just go and relax for today."
I get along quite well with my sister. We don't fight much and help each other out when we need to. I thanked my sister and went to the living room to watch some TV. After about 5 min's my sister brought me in my breakfast and I couldn't help but look down her top when she bent down to give me it. Now I had never looked at my sister as much other than that, but I was horny, looking forward to the night, and I noticed she was wearing some rather sexy clothing. She had on a low cut top, almost exposing her cleavage, a short, black mini-skirt which stopped quite high up her thighs and, as I had just learned, she wore a lacy black bra. All of which left little to the imagination.
Chloe was about 5'5, so a little shorter than Emily. Her hair was straight, black and about shoulder-length. She also had quite nice, shapely breasts, maybe a C cup, and a nice bronze tan from sun-bathing. She had the smoothest skin, which I knew from rubbing in lotion and a cute tiny ass that admittedly I would sometimes imagine while rubbing lotion on her lower back.
I think she noticed me looking down her top as she grinned and turned, walking slowly up the stairs. I'm lucky it was my birthday because otherwise she might have started shouting and calling me a pervert.
At around 5 o'clock my mom started work on the food; preparing sandwiches, making sausage rolls and other party foods. Soon after she started there was a knock on the door, "I'll get it!" I yelled as I went to answer the door. Sure enough, it was Emily standing there, wearing tight jeans and a small tank top; I was stunned when I saw her as she usually dressed more conservatively. "Come on in" was all I could muster as I stood gawking at her, not that she minded at all.
We both headed to the kitchen, making small talk as we went; nice weather, you look nice etc. When we reached the kitchen, mom was still working on the food.
"Would you like some help?" Emily asked my mother.
Mom smiled back and said "No dear, you two go and have fun. The food will be ready in a few minutes."
After watching some TV together we were all called to the table for dinner. I was sitting directly opposite my sister and Emily was next to me on my left. When I felt a foot rubbing around my left leg, I figured it was Emily and decided to play along, rubbing back around her foot. When she started getting rougher, I must have pulled a weird face, or something since my dad started asking what was wrong. Our game of footsie stopped when he asked and I assured him that it was nothing, getting back to my meal.
It was about 5:30 when everyone was finished and we decided that we would watch the film my parents had rented, no point wasting the money they paid for it. It was an action-adventure movie that lasted over 2? hours, I forgot what it was called but it was a fun movie to watch.