This was more of an experiment based on an interesting "movie" I recently watched. It's my first attempt at writing (erotic or otherwise) so there's that.
In the experiment I tried to play with different personal tense. What I ended up with may be a little inconsistent. I tried using it to mark a change in the tension. If people can't stand this I'll go back and change it.
Anyway, I hope you all enjoy and look forward to your feedback!
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"Burrr!" The tall woman shivering aloud was my mother. "Thanks for driving me. You aren't embarrassed taking me are you?" "Of course not!" I responded quickly. After my parents divorced, my mother and I had been working through the pain at our gym.
She was taller than most women with an average build that had begun to take shape over the last month of our visits. Her shorter legs were made longer with the athletic leggings and tank top, not nearly warm enough for the weather.
My own skin was rigid, frozen beneath blue gym shorts and a black t-shirt. Inside the massive brick building was much warmer. "Thank you again for driving me." She said shivering. "These roads are too icy for me!" And everyone else, I thought to myself. The gym was mostly empty today.
Our cardio routine quickly came to an end, leaving our hearts elevated and muscles tired. "Rinse up, today is perfect for the sauna!" Mother said before heading into the shower. She wasn't wrong either. I showered in cold water then dried off, dressing in only boxers and my towel tied at the waste.
Mom was already in the sauna. Her blond hair was darker and damp with water, hanging loosely in a hair tie. She wore a towel around her mid section covering anything that may be seen.
Immediately I thought of Amber, my girlfriend. She'd love it here and there was no policy against nudity either! The thought of her bronze skin glistening with sweat was a little too intimate to be thinking while wearing little more than a towel! The weight of my genitals suddenly became apparent.
It had been a long time since I had any sort of release. I shifted awkwardly, trying to prevent an erection. Not in front of my mom! Suddenly the ground began to shake. At first I thought I was dizzy but she saw it too!
"That was strange." She said calmly, but her fierce blue eyes were wide and worried. "Earthqua-"Before I could finish the aftershock hit! The wooden benches rocked and a loud crack sounded from somewhere outside, the sound of stone crashing to the ground.
The pyramid of wooden beams holding the roof to the sauna snapped with a screech falling below! I pulled her away without thinking but slipped pulling my mother down on top of me.
Six more beams fell followed by what sounded like one of the walls! After a moment the dust began to set but we were pinned beneath the heavy wooden beams!
"Are.." Her back had covered most of the dust but debris choked out my voice and blinded me. "Mom, are you okay?" I managed to cough out. Her body pinned me to the slick wooden flooring.
"Are you okay? I can't see anything!" "Y-yes!" She coughed. "You saved me!" Her weight was slowly becoming uncomfortable and her arms were pinning my own, I could barely reach to clear the dust from my eyes.
I scanned the small cramp space. It was too dark to see much. "Oh god!" I shouted. "Mom, your towel... it..." The towel had come undone and was lost somewhere near our feet. Her full breasts hung exposed on my naked chest!
"I'm so sorry!" She shouted pulling away instinctively. Her back caught the fallen wood paneling. "I'm stuck!" My mother's naked body wiggled hopelessly over my own. Her heavy breasts bounced and jiggled against my skin!
"Engh! I can't get up, it's too heavy!" Her sweat glazed chest heaved up and down with her panicked breathing, brushing my bare chest with her nipples. I was furious, but more than anything I was disgusted! My mother had amazing tits!
I felt the mound between my legs grow but it was lying against something warm and poked out of my boxers. "What is that Eric?" She looked confused. I grunted struggling not to look at my mother's bare chest. "I'm so-so sorry!" I pleaded.
Her eyes widened and it became clear to her. "Oh...! Oh no..." She gasped. "I mean its okay!" She corrected. "You aren't helping!" I shouted. Even closing my eyes I could see my mother's natural breasts jiggling on my bare chest.
"Will it help If I..." She lowered herself on top of me, hiding her tits on my skin. Her nipples felt strange. Were they getting hard?! My dick throbbed in response brushing against her ass it slid into the crack. I could feel the warmth of her folds behind a thin pair of underwear.
"No!" I warned. "That's not working!" "Hang on I think I can get out. Just lift up a bit and..." She wiggled forward, sliding upward on my legs. My dick fell down her crack poking into her panties!
"Don't... move!" I warned her. "Look what I did! I'm so sorry!" "No!" I gasped, struggling to adjust it without touching anymore. "It's not you I swear!" She exhaled; her light skin was becoming more and more flushed. I could feel the warmth of my mother's opening on the tip of my erection!
"It's okay don't be embarrassed. That was very exciting and your body is just responding the way it knows." Her moist breathing caused our skin to swell together while she tried to keep herself up.
"We just need to wait here till help arrives." Her sore muscles shook under stress and she let out weak groans of pain. "Are you sure you're alright mom?"
"Yes!" She said unsure. "I mean no-I can't hold myself up for long." She warned. "Is your- is it down?" My penis throbbed against her soft fabric. "No!"
I choked at the thought of penetrating my own mother. There was no way of telling what she was thinking.
I was stuck underneath, inches away from being inside my mom. Her arms quivered, shaking her sweaty breasts in my face!
"I'm so sorry baby!" Her voice whimpered. I couldn't stand seeing her in so much pain, but the alternative was dreadful!
"Mom...there's nothing we can do. Just... go slow and maybe it won't go in?" "Maybe?" She gasped unable to resist any longer.
She lowered from a pushup stance I could feel myself pushing into my mother's panties. My throbbing tip pushed hard onto what had to be her clit stopping in her thin fabric. Her full weight returned her tits to my chest.
She chewed at her full pink lips, her face seemingly in pain. "What's wrong, are you okay?" "Yeah, she gasped. Your just poking me really hard, it hurts."
"Yeah it's been a long time, I'm sorry." "I understand. It's okay." My dick felt numb and my balls were sore beyond belief!
Minutes passed with no sign of help. She was still in pain, and my erection wouldn't go away! "Let me try something. I think we can adjust it." She wiggled her arms but they were unable to go around my own. She adjusted her hips and I felt my dick move.
"Wait, don't!" I warned. The thin fabric protecting her vagina slipped aside and my penis slid in nearly a quarter of the way!
