[Author's Note: I'm torn on this one. First, the video I described in Chapter One exists, and my thought was to see what would happen if "Mommy" actually delivered her "special snack." But Curvy Sharon does remind me of my mother, and, well, I
was
a motherfucker for the last five years of her life, so it became pretty autobiographical. No, I never ate a double handful of her shit, but analingus was a regular part of our lovemaking, and, well, accidents do happen. So, in a way, Chapter One was autobiographical although when Mom and I were a couple the internet wasn't even a dream and any pornographic videos around were black and white, 8mm things that had no sound. I took the poetic license and moved the scene to a more recent world.
But here's why I'm torn. This story has a very low reader ranking, a 2.69 the last time I looked. But it also has a high number of "favorite" indications. So I can't decide if I should continue it or not.
I'll say this. Chapter One was probably (I won't say certainly because, like any other storyteller, I'm not really sure how David and his mother's relationship will progress) the most riddled with scat. There may be other surprises, indeed, probably will be.
Anyway, I know how it worked out in the real world of the 1960s, but I'm hoping for a better outcome for this beautiful couple. Damn, my mind does wander early in the morning, doesn't it. Let me start that again.
I'll say this. Chapter One was probably the most graphic in terms of scat. Oh, I enjoy the human body, especially the female human body, in all of its shapes and functions. But elimination shouldn't be the focus of a love story although that particular video does get to me, every time I watch it.
And don't worry, like all of my stories, it will continue to be graphic. We read stories in Literotica for the sex after all. And I think I do a pretty good job of writing clear descriptions of physical love in all of its forms. And, yes, it was my mother who taught me that phrase you've seen often in my work - - Good sex is almost always messy but never dirty.
So take a few seconds, when you finish Chapter Two, and let me know what you think. Should I continue this (mostly) autobiography or should I drop it?
And now, Gentle Reader, let's see how David and his mother handle the proverbial morning after, shall we?]
I woke, and the memory was there, full-blown, in detail. I didn't have to open my eyes to see her, bent over, holding her cheeks spread, her turd slowly emerging. I could remember the earthy scent and that odd, almost tasteless taste. My jaws worked, slowly, almost involuntarily, as I remembered the feel of Mom's special snack in my mouth as I chewed and swallowed. The image of the salty, slightly bitter taste of her hot piss was so clear I could almost taste it again.
I smiled at the memory.
As I came fully awake, the now took over from my memories. I felt her warmth beside me. I heard her soft snoring. And I smelled her, the light scent of her sweat and the faint underscent from what we had done last night.
I smiled then, as I realized I wasn't hungry, well, I wasn't the ravenously hungry I usually felt when I woke. And then the thought hit me and I wondered if I would have trouble digesting Mommy's special snack.
Something about the realization, thinking about it, tipped me over the edge. I ran for the bathroom and started throwing up about halfway there. I slipped and fell and started laughing hysterically. Then Mom was there and she was laughing too even as she started wiping my face with a wet handtowel.
"Maybe," she started and then broke into more howls of laughter. It was contagious and I joined her, laughing and puking and gagging and laughing until I couldn't breathe anymore.
"Maybe," she started again when we had ourselves under control. She was still washing my face with that wet towel and I realized I was sweating. "Maybe Mommy's Special Snack isn't such a good idea."
And I felt one of those little rushes in my belly as my adrenal glands squeezed.
"Mom," I said, holding her eyes, "we both enjoyed it. But maybe as a special treat, not a regular thing."
"Only if I can have a special snack too," she said.
"Are you sure?" I asked.
She grinned then, that crazy-eye grin that told me she was being as serious as she ever was.
"I can't wait," she said and giggled.
She helped me up, got me into the bathroom, and helped me sit. I couldn't miss the interesting little brown semicircles on her ass as she left me there.
I sat and peed and pooped, my head hanging and my belly aching. When I was done I stood, flushed, and found Mom on her hands and knees, a bucket and a towel there as she cleaned up my mess.
I watched, fascinated, as she performed that domestic chore.
She smiled up at me and wiggled her stained ass.
"A quick game of Dealer's Choice?" she asked.
I smiled.
"As tempting as that is, Mom," I said, "I'm desperate for a shower and breakfast."
When she grinned I laughed and added, "Not one of Mom's Special Snacks. Maybe an omelet?"
"Pussy," she said, giggling, and accepted my hand and stood.
We showered together, it didn't turn sexual as it often does but it was, as always, sensual.
I scrubbed her face, cleaned the smeared residue from last night, and then shampooed her hair. I always enjoyed doing that. Her hair is thick and coarse and when it's wet it's like I'm running my fingers through a bunch of ropes.
"What would you think if I went blonde?" she asked.
"I'm not sure I'd recognize you," I said, laughing.
"Welllllll," she said, drawing out the
alvolar lateral
"L" sound, "Sharon is blonde."
That stopped me.
"Mom," I said, serious now, holding her eyes with mine, "I enjoy Sharon's videos because she reminds me of you. I don't want you because you remind me of her."
She smiled at that and said, "I know, honey, but I think I'm due for a new look."
I laughed and said, "You're crazy."
She gave me an odd look and said, "That, my love, is beyond dispute."
"But a good crazy," I added, kissing her and using that opportunity to start on her back with the soap.
We did each other's bodies then, washing thoroughly, giggling a lot as we found well-explored ticklish and sensitive places.
To finish I covered the faucet with the bell-shaped adapter I had made, set the water flowing through the douche syringe making sure all eight of the holes streamed freely, and slipped the syringe into her until I felt it bottom out. She shivered and smiled and kissed me.