This is a story of fiction. All characters are 18+.
Feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism greatly appreciated.
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Beth had just recently turned 18, but even still, her mind, her level of innocence made her seem younger still. When all of her friends, just at the beginning of their sexual awakening, were making out and feeling each other, some well on their way to sex, she was still blushing at the thought of holding hands. She just had no clue.
It was the weekend after her birthday, and since her family had been so busy the week of, and only had time for a quick get together, she allowed a little sleep over with a few of her close girlfriends. Beth and her friends, Jill and Jade, twins, spent most of the time in the pool. That was until Jill suggested a nice soak in the hot tub before they got ready for a movie and popcorn.
Beth didn't spend a lot of time in the hot tub, for she really enjoyed the fun of a swimming pool. So it had been a long time since she relaxed in the tub, but with her friends, it was rather enjoyable as they talked with hushed voices about the cuter boys at school.
Jill, the wilder of the bunch, was talking about her latest "hook up" with Keith, the school's bad boy. Jade was in absolute awe, and Beth was blushing from her cheeks to the tops of her bathing suit. The heat of the Jacuzzi only making it worse.
It was when she began talking about the stiffening of his penis as Jill rubbed the bulge in his lap that Beth started to feel funny. She knew the Jacuzzi was warm but this heat was different. It started in her belly and made her skin hum as she listened. She was curious and the more Jill talked the funnier she felt. Suddenly, her breath quickened and she started feeling a bit faint. So quickly, she got out of the hot tub and rushed for the cool air of the house. She could hear the girls giggling as she ran, they probably figured she was far too embarrassed or shy about what Jill was saying. But no, there was something very wrong.
As she stumbled into the house, her bother Aaron met her in the kitchen.
"Whoa, what's up with you, squirt?"
He always insisted on calling her squirt.. He may be 6 years older than her but that doesn't give him the right to treat her like a baby.
"I think I'm sick. My tummy is hot, my skin feels like its vibrating and I keep running out of breath.."
Aaron looked at her sideways and kind of turned this about in his head.
"Oookay, sit down for a second and talk to me, if it seems to be an emergency I'll call mom and dad back from their dinner. Now, first what we you guys doing?"
"We were just in the hot tub Aaron. We were, um, talking.."
"Well, are you sure it's not the heat of the water, you don't go in there often. Or maybe something you ate?"
"Maybe, but I really don't think so, it's different... Like.. it's scary but somehow I know nothing is wrong.. But I don't know what it is so, well, it's still scary!"
Aaron began to chuckle until he saw the look on his little sisters face. She looked terrified.
"Okay, okay. I think I know what's wrong, but before I know for sure, I need to ask you something... You said you girls were talking, what about?"
"Well that's rude Aaron. It was a private conversation.."