(I originally posted this story in August of 2014, but at the suggestion of several readers decided it was time to revisit the story and clean up many of the errors that I missed. This also meant sending it to my editor "larryinseattle" without whom I'd still be struggling to put more than two words together."
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Keith entered the cabin and stomped his feet to get the last of the snow off of his boots. The cabin was cold and bare just as he remembered it. It wasn't much; a large open area that was used as the living space with a large hand-made table, some chairs, and his old bed along the back wall. A stone fireplace dominated the wall on one end of the room while a storage room had been built at the opposite end. His dad and mom's room, actually nothing more than a loft with a large bed, was above. A second, smaller building was located about 15 feet outside the back door with a roof that connected the two buildings and removable walls. When he had asked his father why he built it that way, his father had looked at him with a knowing glance and explained, "By building it this way we can enclose the area between the two buildings in the Winter and use the outbuilding for storage and then we can remove the walls during the Summer to allow the breeze help cool the main cabin while we use the smaller one as a kitchen."
Keith smiled as he remembered his dad. Six-foot tall, broad shouldered, and jet black hair; he had built this cabin from scratch and equipped it with everything needed to make a life in the wilderness. He had spent hours teaching Keith about fishing, hunting, trapping, preparing the land, and planting a crop. And most of all, how to respect the land and live off what it had to offer. He once said, "There's nothing a man needs to live that he can't get or make from the land you see around you." To say he had been one of the original 'wilderness men' would have been the greatest compliment you could have given him.
His mom called him "tall and rugged" yet he was the most gentle, most patient and dedicated man Keith ever knew, especially when it came to him and his mom. This was why they had been so devastated when he suddenly disappeared the Summer that Keith turned 15 years old.
The local Sheriff and Search and Rescue unit spent weeks looking for him but finally had to give up when they couldn't find a trace. He and his mom spent the rest of the Fall in the cabin as they continued their own search, each day hoping that his dad would return but he never did. Finally they left and moved in with his mom's parents in town just before the first snow fell and all hope of finding his dad was gone.
Grandpa John and Grandma Elle had been great and did everything they could to make them both happy but Keith never outgrew his love of the outdoors and he frequently disappeared for days at a time. His mom, on the other hand, resigned herself to what was needed and found a job at the local post office.
It was while she was working there that she met Ned. He seemed like a nice guy and the two of them started dating. No one was surprised when 6 months later the two of them were married and Keith and his mom moved in with Ned on his farm just outside of town. Almost instantly, things changed. Ned became more and more demanding and frequently yelled at his mom for the things going wrong on the farm. Afterwards he would always say he was sorry but it quickly became a routine.
The final straw came just after Keith turned 18 years old. He had graduated from High School that Spring but no matter how hard he tried he couldn't find a job so he spent the Summer and Fall working on the farm. On the last night Keith spent on the farm, Ned started yelling and screaming, "That kid of yours is useless. He doesn't belong here. All he does is wander around the woods and talk about the cabin you and his father lived in when he was younger. If it was so great maybe he should get the fuck out and live up there. Maybe he can find his 'old man' up there and they can live happily ever after."
"Keith has been helping on the farm ever since he graduated, Ned, so I'm not sure how you can say he's useless," his mom had replied in his defense. But all that did was get Ned madder until he swung around and hit her in the face with the back of his hand.
Keith instantly jumped to his feet but his mother signaled for him to stay out of the argument.
"Shut the fuck up," Ned yelled. "This is my place and I decide who is and isn't useless. Do you understand that?"
Keith's mom nodded her head but didn't say another word so Ned stomped from the room pushing Keith out of the way as he did.
Keith instantly knelt next to his mom. "I'm sorry mom. I don't know what I did wrong."
"It's not you, baby," she replied. "Ned's just under a lot of stress right now because of the poor crop."
"That still doesn't give him the right to hit you," Keith sighed as he stood and helped her to her feet. "Dad would never have done that."
Leaning against him, she put a delicate finger on his lips. "Shhhhhhhhh, don't talk about your dad, it just gets Ned angrier," she whispered.
Instinctively, Keith wrapped his arms around her and held her close, the desire to protect and care for her overpowering him. Suddenly he became aware of how his mother felt against him; her breasts pressing against his chest, the touch of her hands on his back, the fragrance of her hair, the softness of her voice, and a more subtle aroma that was coming from her that was stirring a primal urge within him. Without another thought, he gently pulled away and placed a finger under her chin, lifting it as he lowered his lips to hers. Their first kiss was soft but quickly became more passionate until Keith suddenly pulled away, "I'm sor ... I mean I didn't mean ... I ahhhhh, SHIT!!!" Keith finished as he left the room leaving his mother standing there.
He spent the rest of the evening in his room with the door locked as he relived what had taken place between him and his mother. At some point she had come to the door and knocked saying, "Dinner is ready" but all he could do was reply, "I'm not hungry."
Finally, he came to a decision and packed everything he'd need into his backpack and duffle bag before writing a note to her.
Dear Mom,