In response to some of the feedback for
Granny's Dirty Photographs
I cobbled the following together. I hope you enjoy the scene I describe below. In this scenario Robert's grandmother has a little surprise for him at her house. It all starts well but unfortunately there's a glitch, a bump in the road of their incestuous relationship that seems like it will knock the wheel off the cart.
Anyway, here it is, the follow-up; I've also left a postscript at the end of the piece that I couldn't include here in the preamble because it kinda gives the game away.
As usual, feedback is hugely appreciated. Feedback can be by PM, Public Comments below the scene itself, or by email. If you want a response to feedback, then email is best.
There might (very probably) be typos and the occasional blooper in the text. I did go over the piece a few times to spot any fuck-ups, but invariably I miss a couple or three things every time. I hope any errors that are contained herein don't detract from the overall enjoyment.
Merry Christmas.
GA -- Lankawi Island, Malaysia -- 25th of December 2012.
She wouldn't tell me the secret. No matter how many times I asked, or how much I whined, she refused to divulge the reason for exactly why she wanted me to visit her on Saturday night. I suspected it would be something sexual, that my grandmother had something dirty in mind for us, but try as I might, even when I asked her when my tongue and fingers had taken her to the brink of orgasm she didn't tell.
"Wait and see," she said, all mysterious and coy but with a definite glint in her eye. "I guarantee, Robert, that you'll love it."
Five days I waited, five days that passed with agonising slowness, and as the time dribbled by I imagined various scenarios, all lewd, all involving my beautiful, sexy grandmother.
We'd been fucking for two months by then. It all came about, the incestuous affair between me and my mother's mother, when I found a stash of nude photographs under gran's bed. She caught me out and, after a shaky start during her seduction -- she got cold feet for a moment -- we ended up romping all over those same photographs as they lay spread across her bed. The day I lost my virginity to my own grandmother she'd worn a pink corset -- her favourite colour -- stockings and heels, and I imagined that the surprise she said she had for me on the coming Saturday featured her in new lingerie.
Or perhaps, I mused, she wanted me to take some photos of her; or maybe even a video of us fucking!
As it turned out, when that Saturday evening eventually rolled around, let's just say that what lay in store had me speechless.
***
On the day itself the hours dragged by even more slowly. It felt to me like time was stuck in glue. When I looked at the clock, expecting half-an-hour to have past, I saw that it was only five minutes since I'd last checked. In the morning my guts were tight knots of apprehension, but as the day wore on that feeling gave way to liquid anxiety.
It didn't help matters when my grandmother phoned at ten in the morning and murmured filth down the line, a sewer-mouthed description in the most vivid terms of what she wanted me to do to her pussy -- and all with my mother standing scant yards away, blithely unaware of what a nasty, potty-mouth her mother had.
When my grandmother got going she really let rip, dropping the prim and proper schoolteacher act completely.
"I'm playing with my cunt right now, Robert," gran whispered down the phone. "You like it when I say that word, don't you, you dirty boy?" "I wish you were here right not to lick it. My pussy's growling for your cock, darling." She gasped and then chuckled. "Ooh, that felt good. My clit's so big, Robert. I'm fingering it and it feels so good. When I hang up the phone I'm going to play with myself, darling. You think about that; think about your granny with her legs spread wide ..." She paused, knowing the image would solidify in my mind. "Think about it, Robert; my cunt all swollen and hot for your tongue and lovely cock."
"Are you sure you don't want me to come round before seven, Gran?" I asked, my voice catching as desire swelled my cock. "I can come over any time you like."
Gran chuckled again, a rich, throaty, dirty sound. "You just want to come on my tits, Robert, you wicked boy." My fingers whitened as I gripped the phone more tightly when I heard the woman gasp and groan. "I'd love it if you could visit me sooner, Robert," my grandmother said. My heart leapt into my throat and my cock grew even stiffer when I thought she was inviting me over earlier than our planned rendezvous. However my excitement was short-lived. "But you can't, darling," my grandmother breathed, gasping again. "Your surprise won't be ... ready until seven. You'll just have to be patient. Now I'm going to go, Robert. See you at seven, not a second earlier. Do you understand? Not one second before seven or you might ruin everything."
"OK, Gran," I managed to say in a voice close to normal. "Seven. I got it."
"And no playing with yourself, or if you do, don't come. You've got to fuck like a machine tonight, darling."
And that's how she left me, the teasing bitch.
I nearly shit when my mother touched my shoulder, saying, "Are you all right?"
"Uh ... Yeah, Mum, I ... er ... I've just got a bit of a headache, that's all."
My mother looked at me, concern in her expression. "If you like," she began, "I'll go and stay with my mother tonight. If you're not well ...?"
Holy shit! No, that would fuck it up completely!
"It isn't that bad, Mum," I said hurriedly. "I'll take a couple of pills and be fine."
My mother frowned. "OK, Robert," she sighed, adding, "it's only my mother being a silly old woman anyway. I don't know why she's suddenly worried about being alone at nights. She's lived in that house on her own for years." My mother tutted and rolled her eyes. She fixed me with a tender smile, saying, "I think it's sweet of you to stay with her tonight. You're a good lad, a nice young man. I'm so proud."
"Thanks, Mum," I replied, walking away as my cheeks began to burn.
I wonder what my mother would say if she knew I'd be balls deep inside her mother in, hopefully, a little over nine hours time? Would she be so proud of me then?
***
Finally the hands on the clock crawled around to show the time at two minutes to seven. As torturous as it had been, remembering my grandmother's very specific warning about not arriving before seven o'clock, I'd left it late so that my arrival would be about five minutes after the hour.