Heather And Michael

I published this story as two chapters, "Heather and Michael Ch. 01" on 7/19/13 and "Heather and Michael Ch. 02" on 7/23/13. This was the second piece of fiction I wrote in my life, the first being a bad Sci-Fi story in high school. Everything I have learned about writing fiction, I have learned on Literotica. I took this and all my other stories down in January 2023. I'm republishing the two chapters as one story unedited from their original publication so you can see how I've grown as an author.

The revised and expanded version of this story is

here

.

Chapter 01

Thanks to Gunter99 for his editing. He was very knowledgable about grammar and such and he made several excellent suggestions to improve the plot.

This is a slow story about twins drifting into a sexual relationship. Everyone is over 18 years of age.

"Hey, Maddie!" said Heather into her cell phone. "Did you have a good time this weekend?"

It was the Monday after Heather had graduated from high school. She had spent the weekend going to parties and had had a great time. Both she and Maddie had been invited to far more parties than they could attend. They had gone to the same parties Friday and Sunday night, but Saturday Maddie had gone to a party with the stars of the football team whereas Heather had gone to a pool party at a house that had a huge pool and an incredible view. They talked about the parties while Heather brushed her shoulder length strawberry blond hair. Maddie wasn't a great friend, but they got along well enough that Maddie was going to be Heather's roommate at college in the Fall.

Maddie changed the topic by asking, "Are you seeing anyone right now?"

"No, I haven't dated anyone since Drew broke up with me."

Drew had dumped her three months ago for a freshman girl that worshiped the ground he walked on. She hadn't felt like dating after that, but she was in the mood after the weekend; and she was definitely in the mood for fucking again.

"Are you doing anything Friday night?" asked Maddie.

"We are going on our annual family camping trip Saturday, but I can have everything packed before Friday night."

"I am planning a special party," said Maddie, "and you have to promise me two things if you want to attend. Number one is that you can't tell anyone about it, beforehand and afterward."

"Done."

"Number two is that you have to bring an unattached guy to the party. A good-looking guy who will be going to college in the Fall. A guy you wouldn't mind going out on a date with. And he can't tell anyone about the party beforehand and afterward."

Heather pondered what guy she could invite.

Maddie interrupted her thoughts with "Here are the other girls that are coming: Becky Henderson, Teagan Jackson, Brooke Perdue and Maria Hernandez."

All of those girls were good-looking and popular. Heather decided that it would be easy to get a guy to go to this party.

"Count me in."

"The idea behind the party," said Maddie, "is that we shouldn't be spending our summer before college without a guy, so we are going to be speed dating. Both you and your guy are to bring three $5 bills. Dress code for the party for both guys and girls is T-shirt and shorts. Be ready for some fun and action and hopefully you will have a boyfriend for the summer when the party is over."

After Heather finished talking with Maddie, she called Jared. Jared had been on the high school swim team with Heather and Maddie. He was a nice guy, good looking and would be going to college in the Fall. She verified that Jared was currently unattached. She then told Jared about the party and asked if he would like to go with her. He readily agreed.

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Heather could feel herself getting excited as she put on make up. It was past six and almost dinnertime. The party was to start at eight on the dot. Two guys had called this week and asked her out and she had told both that she didn't want to go out without anyone until after her week-long camping trip, but she had really passed on them because she was hoping to find someone special at the party.

She focused on putting on her base now and then would add the final make up in the car. She had on a T-shirt that hugged her C-cup breasts, but that didn't show her flat stomach. Heather wanted to look nice for the party, but not too obviously nice or her parents would ask questions. Heather hadn't told her parents about the party; instead had told them instead that she was going over to Maddie's house to visit. Maddie's parents didn't know about the party and the house had to be clean and empty by the time they got home at 11:30.

As she was finishing her make up, she got a call on her cell phone. It was Jared.

"Heather, I am sorry. I can't go tonight."

"What!"

"I am so sorry. I got in my fight with my little sister today, a very bad fight. We were yelling and screaming at each other so loud that we didn't hear my Mom come home. When she heard us fighting, she grounded both of us for a week."

"Jared, that is terrible! I have been looking forward to this party all week. There are going to be a bunch of cute guys and girls there. Is there any way you can sneak out?"

"God no! My Dad is getting home around nine and we are going to have a family council then."

Heather thought "Asshole! Asshole! Asshole!"

"OK, Jared. Talk to you later."

She had finished the call with Jared as quickly as she could. She hurriedly called Maddie right away to tell her about Jared.

"Heather, you have to find some other guy! You can't come by yourself and I have everything planned for six couples. Get on the phone and start calling!"

Heather ended the call and started looking at her contacts. She heard her Mom call, "Heather, time for dinner!"

She set down her phone and joined her Mom, Dad and twin brother Michael for dinner. Michael had also just graduated from high school. Both of them would be going to a college in the Fall, though Michael had gotten a full merit scholarship to a university that had rejected her.

Dinner was excruciating. Her Mom and Dad wanted to hear all about her and Michael's days. She kept her comments short, but Michael went on and on about the preparations he had done for the camping trip and how much he was looking forward to it. He had been in Boy Scouts and had gotten his Eagle. He loved to camp. This was one of the few times Heather wanted to strangle Michael.

In a break in the conversation, Heather asked Michael, "Could you please clear the table for me and load the dishwasher?"

"Sure. That will be four chores you will have to do for me when we get back." They had agreed long ago to never expect the other to do something for free. If Heather wanted to Michael to do a chore like clearing the table, she had to do two similar chores for him later. If Michael borrowed money from her, he paid it back with 10% interest. When she needed Michael to help her with some homework, she had to negotiate with him which of his chores she would do as payment.

Her Mom and Dad were now going over the final preparations for the trip. "May I go up to my room now?" asked Heather.

"No," said her Mom, "this involves you and we don't want to be yelling up to your room all evening."

It was 7:30 before Heather got up to her room. She started placing calls. Patrick didn't answer. David was out on a date. Evan was at a party. Heather was running out of time. It was time for her last resort.

She knocked on Michael's door. "Come in!" he called. She went and saw that Michael had been reading

The Count of Monte Cristo

. He had been reading that since graduation and hadn't gone to any parties. Heather told Michael about the party.

"Interesting," said Michael. "A party for the

crème de la crème

, eh?"

"Yes. Little Bro, will you please come with me to the party?" Heather was 17 minutes older than Michael and always referred to him as "Little Bro" when it was just the two of them. "I will do anything for you later. Please!"

Michael sighed, slowly closed his book and stood up. "OK, Sis. I will for you."

Heather told her parents that as Maddie wasn't dating anyone, she had invited Michael to tag alone to get to know her better. They said goodbye to her parents and headed out the door. Michael drove and when they arrived, Maddie greeted them at the door. Heather gave Maddie the six $5 bills. As Maddie escorted them back to the kitchen area, she whispered to Heather, "You brought your brother?"

"I couldn't find anyone else on such short notice," Heather whispered back. "Jared shafted me. It was Michael or not come."

The kitchen/dining area was where everyone was hanging out and talking. Maria was the only girl missing. Heather checked out the guys. There was Nathan Wilkerson, Connor Barnes, Zeke Archer and Eric Woolery. All were popular, good looking guys she knew from her classes. Heather would be happy going on a date with any of them. She heard a noise and Jason Lewis popped up from behind a counter with two cold beers. He gave them to Heather and Michael.

Jason - he was a total hunk. He was like the guy in the video for "You Belong With Me". He had been a starting wide receiver on the football team and had light brown hair and blue eyes. He was super cute and oh so cool. His parents had bought him a convertible sports car before his senior year. He had always been nice to Heather. He had been dating a cheerleader named Gina for a year and a half. He must have broken up with her recently.

Maria showed up a few minutes later with Ryan Hopkins. The twelve people mingled for a while, chatting about parties they had attended and their plans for the rest of the summer. Jason was definitely the center of the party. The girls all regularly drifted over to talk to him and he was never alone. When Heather talked to him, she could feel herself getting lost in his beautiful blue eyes.

When Heather was alone with Maddie, she asked, "When did Jason break up with Gina?"

"A few days before graduation. I found out Saturday. He was the inspiration for this party. He won't be single for long and I thought that I or one of my friends should be the one to land him." Michael then joined them and they dropped the subject.

Heather saw that Michael was standing alone again. She walked over to him, grabbed his elbow and steered him over to Eric and Becky. It was the third time that she had had to rescue him from being alone and get him back into a group. Michael had always struggled to make small talk with people he didn't know well, which is why he hated parties.

Heather excused herself from Michael, Eric and Becky and started to look for Jason. Heather noticed Maddie giving her an evil look, like she had something wicked planned for Heather. She had seen that look on Maddie's face earlier in the evening. Heather knew Maddie could be pretty mean at times and it looked one of the those times was coming up. She hoped that Maddie wouldn't embarrass Michael.

Before she could reach Jason, Maria stopped her.

"Heather, you brought your brother?" said Maria with disappointment.

All the other girls at the party had asked her the same thing with the same tone. She told Maria about Jared backing out at the last minute. Heather was feeling frustrated with the other girls. Michael was good looking with auburn hair, pretty hazel eyes and long eyelashes for a guy. At 5'10", he was the shortest guy there where as Heather was one of the taller girls at 5'7". Yes, he wasn't popular and didn't go to parties, but he was cute and nice enough that Heather wouldn't mind going out with him if he wasn't her brother.

At nine, Maddie clapped her hands to get everyone's attention. "OK, time for the speed dating part. Every girl will have a particular location." Maddie directed each girl where to go in the kitchen/dining area. "Now each guy find a girl to talk to." Ryan moved to next to Heather. Heather looked and saw that Michael was with Becky and Jason was with Maddie. "Now talk for ten minutes, and then the guy moves to the next girl. I have a timer and will keep track of the time."

For the next hour, Heather talked to the guys in turn. She had a great time talking to Jason. They were both going to be English majors, though at different colleges. They talked about what writing projects they were going to do over the summer. When Michael came around, they talked about the party. He hadn't enjoyed the mingling but was enjoying this part. He had a very good time talking with Becky.

At 10, Maddie had everyone go to the living room and sit down. "For the next part, each girl and guy are going to kiss for thirty seconds. Here is everyone's big chance to try before they buy. The hottest kiss gets $30 for both the guy and the girl. Teagan and Zeke go first. Sit down here on the floor in the middle of everyone else."

Teagan and Zeke looked at each other and then moved to the living room floor. They started kissing and when Maddie's timer when off, they stopped. Maddie and Ryan went next. Maddie slipped Ryan some tongue as they kissed. Becky and Eric went next and their kiss was even hotter. As Maddie put couples together, Heather realized that her first kissing partner was going to be Michael.

After five couples had kissed, Maddie called Heather and Michael's names. That sat down on the floor like everyone else did. Maddie said, "Start" and Heather gave Michael a quick kiss on the lips and then sat back.

"No! No, No!" said Maddie. "A real kiss, like all the other couples were doing."

"But he is my brother!"

"Well," said Maddie with a smirk, "you should have brought someone else!"

The other people then started chanting, "Kiss him! Kiss him!"

Heather sighed. "Well," she thought, "if I am going to kiss my brother, I am going to make it a good one." She moved up to Michael and give him as passionate kiss as she could with lots of Frenching. Michael seemed to enjoy the kiss and kissed her eagerly back. While there were kissing, she heard Ryan say, "Man, this is so hot."

Maddie's timer went off and Heather and Michael went back to their seats. Maddie kept pairing up people. When the other girls kissed Michael, they did so much less enthusiastically than when they were kissing the other guys. That made Heather mad.

After every girl had kissed every guy, Maddie said, "Alright, nominations for the hottest kiss of that round!"

"Heather and Michael!" said Ryan

Maria and Jason plus Becky and Eric were also nominated. Maddie held a vote and Heather and Michael's kiss won. Maddie gave them each an envelope.

"OK girls," announced Maddie, "time for each of you to take off your bra. This time, the guy gets to feel your boobs while you are kissing. Guys, here is your chance to check out each girl's goods. Again, hottest kiss gets $30 for both the guy and the girl."

Maddie changed the order so that Heather kissed Jason, Connor and Zeke before kissing Michael. Again, the other girls weren't showing much enthusiasm when kissing Michael. When it was Heather's turn to kiss Michael, she threw herself into it. She shook her breasts at Michael and made sure he got a great feel. Heather thought, "That will show the other girls how they should be kissing my brother."

After the 36 kisses were done, Maddie took nominations for best kiss and Heather and Michael won again.

"Last round!" said Maddie. "Guys, take off your shorts. This time, the girls get to feel your junk while you are kissing. Girls, know his size before you decide!"

Heather started with Zeke this time. As they kissed and she fondled his hard dick, Heather's found herself getting super horny. She badly missed sex with Drew, even if he was a jerk. When the timer went off, Heather sighed in disappointment.

Michael was the second guy for Heather this round. When they kissed this time, it was tender instead of passionate. Heather followed the rules and rubbed Michael's dick as she had Zeke's. Heather had never thought of Michael having a dick before; she had never thought of him in that way before. He was dick was rock hard like Zeke's and felt just as great as she ran her hand up and down its length.

The girls and guys continued to pair up and then split apart. When it was time for Becky to kiss Eric, Becky climbed on top of Eric and practically dry humped him. Becky and Eric won the last two envelopes.

"Time to start cleaning up!" Maddie told everyone. "My parents will be home in thirty minutes. Be sure to remove all evidence that a party happened. And be damn sure that all of those beer bottles are out of here."

Everyone moved back to the kitchen. Heather started clearing empty cups and plates. Eric was talking to Nathan, who had brought Becky. Eric asked if Nathan would be willing to take Maria home so he could take home Becky. Maddie had a print out of everyone's phone numbers on the dining room table that some people were picking up. No one talked to Michael and he was the first one to leave, heading out the door without Heather.

As Heather was finishing up cleaning, Jason came up to her and asked, "Are you doing anything tomorrow night?"

"I have a family camping vacation this week."

"Oh, that's right." Jason started to move away dejected.

"How about next Saturday? We could hang at the mall for a while and then catch a movie?"

"That would be great! Call me when you get back."

Heather thought about asking Jason for a ride home. However, she wanted to talk to Michael. She hoped he wasn't too mad after how the other girls treated him. She thanked Maddie for the great party and then walked to the car. Heather felt on Cloud Nine - Jason freaking Lewis had asked her out.

Michael was waiting in the car. He started the car as she opened the door and she waited until he was driving down the street to ask, "Did you have a good time?"

"Thanks, Sis, for the best night of my life. Kissing six hot girls, feeling their tits and having them feel my package. That was awesome. If I could tell any of my friends, none of them would believe me. Thanks so much for inviting me."

Heather relaxed. She was glad he had had a great time. She told him about Jason asking her out. "Congrats, Sis! All the girls seemed to be swooning over him. I am glad the party worked out for you."

Heather knew that it was wrong for her to kiss her brother as she had, to have let him feel her breasts and to have felt his hard dick. But it was also wrong to let all the other guys feel her breasts and to have felt their hard dicks. Heather thought, "It was a one time thing. Michael and I will go back to how we have always been."

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Heather and the rest of her family got up at six the next morning and started the final packing. Then they made the three hour drive to the parking lot for their camping trip. They put on their backpacks and started the hike up the trail.

They had done this every year since Heather was six. They would hike for several hours until they reached their usual spot and set up camp. They would spend the week camping there. They had brought inner tubes and they would use them to float down the creek near their camp site. On Saturday, they would break camp and hike out.

Heather and Michael hiked up the trail, leaving their parents behind. Their Mom worked out regularly and was in good shape, but she was only 5'2" and struggled to keep up with everyone else because of her short legs. Their Dad was the tallest in the family at 6'1". This was the one time all year when he exercised and he had a good-sized spare tire. So Heather and Michael hiked at a pace they found comfortable for a half-hour and then waited for their parents to catch up to them huffing and puffing, then Heather and Michael would leave them behind again.