This is my First Story, more fiction than fact, have always wanted to try writing my own. I will take all the comments into consideration. All Characters are over 18. Mind the grammar please.
It was just another normal day in the life of an ordinary 28-year-old Man life (Lets call him Derick). He did not know that this day would change his life forever. He had just woken up and after freshening up he made his way to the kitchen where he found his 46-year-old mother (Nikita) and 20-year-old sister (Tayla) sitting at the kitchen table having breakfast, He found his bowl of cereal waiting for him as his mother had become accustomed to his morning schedule.
He greeted them both and sat down to eat, his sister returned the gesture and continued to talk to their mother about the upcoming move, she was moving to college a few states away, the same college that Derick attended. Tayla told her mother Nikita that the upcoming weekend is the day that she will be going to tour the campus and get familiar with the surroundings.
Derick mentioned "oh shit it's this weekend."
Tayla Replied, "yes you idiot I told you weeks ago and you already agreed to come and show me around since you been there before."
Derick retorted "yes, yes I remember and stop calling me an idiot you half pint squirt."
Tayla just frowned and continued talking to their mum about the plans and what they were going to do on the trip since it was a family road trip and all three of them were going along.
The Weekend arrived and the family was getting ready for the trip. Derick packed the mini-SUV with all the belongings they needed for the trip, it was decided that the back seat for Tayla and himself since mum was driving and they needed some space to relax.
It was midday and Derick had just finished packing the car when he saw the ladies walking out of the house.
Tayla in her denim shorts and crop top and Nikita in a button-down knee length sundress
They jumped in the car and off they went on a long trip to Tayla's college at the end of the city. Derick was tired from packing the car, so he decided to get some rest, so he closed his eyes and fell asleep as soon as the car hit the interstate.
About halfway through the trip he awoke and noticed that it was already dark outside, he looked around rubbing his eyes, he saw his sister asleep next to him when her legs on the seat, he looked to the front, his mother was focused on the road with the music on high.