After reading and answering most of the comments made on my first attempt I did some editing. This is a revised edition of my first attempt of writhing Chapter 20 of Justin Thyme.
This is a continuation of the story Justin Thyme created by Callicious you should read his stories of which there are 19, before you read mine. Who passed in October 2014at the age of 60. I was given permission from the family under these terms.
"As long as you acknowledge what Dad wrote as his, and what you write as yours I have no problem with it. I would ask, and this is the sticky point from Dad's viewpoint, that the sex remain supportive to the story line, and not the other way around. Dad was very emphatic with me that he hated the stories that started out mild and then got more extreme. He also was totally against any parental incest. Is that too much to ask?"
To which I happily agreed.
I first said I would have a continuation posted around the first of February. I am sorry I just couldn't wait that long. I hope you all like my first attempt at continuing another Writers story. I have done my best to keep true to his characters and true to his story line. I hope everyone enjoys what I have written.
Comments and suggestions are welcome, though I believe if you want to commit you should do it under your account name and not anonymously, Thank You. REGG60
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Michael had a rough night, and didn't get much sleep due to the pain from his broken nose and pressure in his sinuses. Susie stayed with him throughout the night, sitting in a chair next to his bed. The first time Michael woke up and to see her there "Little one what are you doing here, you should be in bed."
"Mikey, I am watching over you like you do for me and you need to get used to it, this ring says we will be looking out for each other for a long time."
"Little one, that ring isn't the one that means that that is just the prelude to the one that does." he smiles
She sticks her tongue out at him, "Mikey the ring doesn't matter to me, as far as I am concerned the moment you proposed in my mind I was your wife. I know your belief's don't agree, but in my mind that is how it is." She smiles "is there anything you need right now, something to drink a new ice bag, one of the pills the doctor gave you?"
"All the above except make it half a pill, please and little one in everything except sex I consider myself your husband as well, the sex will have to wait till after our vows on our wedding day."
Susie bends over him, gives him a hug and a gentle kiss on the lips, and in a low voice that only he can hear says "Mikey, I love you so much, I am the luckiest girl in the world."
"No little one I am the lucky one, I had given up on meeting a girl, till I met and got to know you, no matter how unfortunate our meeting was, I am lucky to have found someone I could love that loved me for who I am and not who my parents are or what they could get from me for their own selfish reasons."
"Who could not love you for yourself, I will be right back with what you need to make you feel better."
"I already feel better my love, those other things will just help ease the pain, you are the one that makes me feel better." He smiles at her
Susie gives him a quick kiss and leaves the room. A few minutes later she comes back and sees Michael has fallen into a fitful slumber so she sets the water, ice bag and half a pill on the night stand and settles down in her chair until he awakens once more. Later that night Michael wakes, to see Susie asleep in the chair, smiles, spotting the items on the night stand, he takes the pill with a drink of water and lays back with the ice bag on his face.
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I wake up early my mind reeling with ideas for the house and questions that need answers that need to be written down before they slip my mind. I am is the first one up the house is quiet, as much as I missed the company of the girls last night with my parents home there wasn't a chance. I grab my robe and rush to the bathroom alone to quickly get ready for the day. Returning to my room I get dressed in cargo shorts and T-shirt. Grabbing a pad of paper and a pen on my way to the kitchen, to start a pot of coffee. While the coffee is brewing I start writing down my ideas. Grabbing a cup of coffee and back to writing. I flip the page and do a rough drawing of the house, coach house and pool showing ideas for the exterior.
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Mom smiles and gives me a hug, "Thanks for making coffee. How long have you been up? And why?" as she gets a cup and sits down.
"I woke up with my head spinning with ideas for the house and had to write them down and things I need to talk to you, Dad and Rosemary about." tearing off the first two sheets of the pad I hand them to my mom.
As mom drinks her coffee, she smiles and reviews what I have handed her.
"Mom, I have also been thinking of what you and dad said a few weeks back about wishing you could retire and have more time to do things, I think you should both give that idea more consideration now that Thyme & Thyme Again Properties, is going to have around $400 million in its account or soon will have. I think that you and dad's share should be enough to retire on." I smile at her and laugh.
Mom says, "That would be nice, but it isn't that easy."
"Mom, why isn't it, it can't be about the money now. If you need something to keep you active, both of you could do something you enjoyed. You could open a small Real Estate office of your own and just look for properties for Thyme & Thyme Again Properties, LLC to invest in. Dad could find something he wants to. No bosses for either of you work as you want, travel as you want. Talk it over with him."
Mom with a little annoyance states, "Your father and I will talk it over more seriously now that it is possible."
"We have the house in Scottsdale and have been working on getting it ready, have you checked on what's required for licensing, it's not a single family home anymore."
Mom says, "I see that is one of the items on this list, I'll have to call the city and check as to what kind of license we need to get a license. We should have checked all of that first and need to get started on that before we go any further. Not that I foresee much of a problem, but dealing with the city they can make problems if they feel like it."
As mom and I are talking dad comes in getting a coffee and joins us.
Dad smiling, "Morning you two, why up so early."
Mom explains, "Justin was up before I came in, he had coffee ready when I came in. He handed me this and has been asking me all kinds of question that we need to find the answers to. " Mom gets up to get another cup of coffee and starts making breakfast."