This is my first attempt to write a story of any kind. I've always wanted to write, so recently I forced myself to make time to do it. Please, if you read the story, give me your honest opinion about it. I welcome constructive criticism as it can only serve to make me a better writer, and hopefully continue the story. Thanks.
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Hi. My name is Denise. I'm twenty-two and live at home with my mother and two younger brothers, eighteen and nineteen. I want to tell you about incidents which happened this past summer, incidents that would change all our lives forever, incidents that caused us to crossover into that taboo world from which we could never return.
We were always a close family, but since my father's untimely death five years ago, we have become a very loving family indeed. It all started last July, just after the 4th. I was working as a legal secretary in the law firm of Richards & Kuntz, which the employees jokingly referred to as "Dicks & Cunts," behind the partners' backs of course. At lunchtime we all sent out for burgers and fries as we usually did on Friday. Bobby, a high school senior who interned at the firm during the summer, would take our orders and make the lunch run, then everyone would eat in the large break room. That day as I prepared to eat, I unwrapped my burger and retrieved the catsup we always kept in the refrigerator. It was a brand new bottle of the thick stuff you have to shake, beat and bang to get flowing. After several shakings and beatings, I hit the bottom of the bottle and a big glob of catsup landed in my lap. I quickly jumped to my feet and while everyone else laughed, my face turned the same color as the catsup. Standing there in white slacks with catsup all over the crotch, I looked like I was ...well, let's not go there. Naturally I couldn't work in this predicament so I asked Mr. Richards if I could go home and change. Since we weren't very busy Mr. Richards told me to take the rest of the day off, so I left the office for home.
My mother was also working that day. She is the display coordinator for a local department store. My two younger brothers were probably out doing whatever boys do in the summer, playing baseball, chasing girls. Who knows?
I arrived home anticipating a few quiet hours alone, during which I would soak in a hot bath and submit to the mountains of relaxing bubbles. Entering the house, I headed straight for my room. I needed to get out of those clothes and wash them before the stain set. I quickly removed my slacks and blouse only to discover the stain had soaked through to my panties, so I slipped out of my panties, unhooked my bra, donned my nightgown, and headed for the washing machine with clothes in hand. Walking down the hall I thought I heard a noise coming from the boys' room at the other end. As I tiptoed toward the door, muffled moans and groans became louder. The door was about halfway open so I peeked in. I couldn't believe what my two younger brothers, both naked, were doing. Donnie, the older of the two, was lying across his bed on his back, while Ronnie, the younger, was on his knees beside the bed with Donnie's dick in his mouth.
My first reaction was to be really pissed at Donnie for making his younger brother do such a thing, but my anger quickly turned to intrigue as I observed that Ronnie didn't seem to mind. In fact he seemed to really be enjoying it. He was good at it too. He would hold his brother's dick at the base and lick it like an ice cream cone. Then he would wrap his lips around the head and slowly slide his mouth down the shaft. By the way his cheeks were working, I could tell he was sucking pretty hard. After the initial shock wore off I watched more intently and more objectively. I couldn't help but marvel at the size of Donnie's cock. It was perhaps ten inches long with a large, purple, circumcised head, and it was nearly as big around as my wrist. I was surprised Ronnie could get it in his mouth, yet he seemed to work the top four or five inches easily. Suddenly I heard Donnie moan loudly and clench the bed covers in his hands. I was sure he was about to cum. Ronnie backed off until only the head remained in his mouth. Donnie's body jerked a couple of times and I could see Ronnie's throat swallowing furiously, trying to keep pace with his brother's rapid fire release. Ronnie took it all, never losing a drop. Like I said, he was good.
After Ronnie had drained Donnie's balls, he let the slowly softening member pop out of his mouth. Both boys stood up and for the first time I got a full view of the younger cock. It was magnificent as well, maybe an inch shorter than his brother's, but just as big around. The two just stood there silent, a couple of feet apart, facing each other for a few seconds. This lull in the action made me realize that my left hand had unconsciously worked its way inside my nightie and was slowly rubbing my overlubricated pussy, while my right hand was pinching my hardened nipple through the cool nylon.
My attention returned to the boys and for the first time I noticed what truly marvelous specimens of manhood they were. Donnie was six feet tall, his brother a half-inch shorter. Both had blue eyes and blond hair with similar muscular builds suggesting correctly that they were both athletes. Donnie was a defensive back on the football team, but had plans to attend Vanderbilt University on an academic scholarship. Ronnie played baseball. An all-state shortstop, he had offers from several colleges and more than a few pro teams were scouting him. Both boys were popular with the girls, adding to my bewilderment over what I was witnessing.
As they stood there, I wondered if the show was over or if Donnie would return the favor for his younger brother. Obligingly Donnie spit into his right hand and wrapped it around Ronnie's hard cock. He stroked it a few times and I could see Donnie's saliva glistening on the younger engorged member. Suddenly Donnie released the dick in his hand and with his feet on the floor, turned around to bend over the edge of the bed, his ass pointed toward Ronnie.
I had heard of anal sex before, but had never done it. Once I tried sticking my vibrator in my ass, but the pain was such I didn't even get the head inside before I decided it wasn't for me. Conversely I had given several guys blow jobs before, but I had never had as big a dick as either one of these in my mouth. I actually like the taste of cum, sort of sweet and salty and bitter all at once. What I really like, though, is the feeling of the hot cum shooting in my mouth and trying to see if I can swallow it as fast as it shoots. Right now I wanted to see if an ass could really take such a huge cock.
Ronnie grasped his dick and stepped forward to greet the prize offered him. He teased his moistened dick up and down between the cheeks of Donnie's ass. Donnie responded by reaching his hands around to grab his cheeks and spread them wide. I could clearly see Donnie's slightly open brown hole as it eagerly invited the welcome guest inside. Ronnie gently lay the swollen purple head between the puckered ass lips and slowly pushed forward. The hole, though anxious, instinctively resisted the oversized intruder until the hole finally snapped around the penetrating cock. The head was in. Donnie's body flinched with a protesting grunt as the head broke through the initial boundary. Ronnie froze, allowing his brother's ass to become accustomed to the onslaught. After a few seconds, Donnie relayed his acceptance by pushing his ass back to invite more of the familiar invader to enter him. Ronnie accepted the invitation by advancing and retreating, a little at first, then with ever increasing strokes until his entire manhood was buried inside his older brother's willing ass.
Donnie said, "Fuck me, Ronnie," almost under his breath.
Ronnie, as if on cue, began sliding the length of his monster cock in and out of his brother. A few minutes later as Ronnie's rhythm became faster and faster, it was apparent that he was about to reach his peak.
Donnie said excitedly but not too loudly, "Cum in my ass. Shoot your hot cum up my ass."
Ronnie made one last thrust and threw his head back as he held tightly to Donnie's pushing hips.
"Here it comes, Brother," Ronnie warned, "Take all my cum."
"Yes," Cooed Donnie. "I feel it. I can feel the cum shooting inside me. Give me all the cum you've got."
I couldn't tell who was enjoying this more, Donnie or Ronnie. It was hard enough to believe Donnie could even take such a big cock up his ass, much less enjoy it as he obviously did.
I could have watched this spectacle for hours playing with myself, but the show was over and I wanted to make a hasty retreat before they saw me. I tiptoed to the laundry room and making as much noise as possible, put the soiled clothes in the washing machine. As they heard my activity, I could hear them scrambling to get dressed.
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Watching TV that night, I couldn't pay attention to the program. Instead I was thinking about the erotic images of my two brothers that were now burned indelibly into my brain. After everyone retired to bed, I walked to my mother's bedroom door and softly knocked.
"Mom, You awake?" I asked.
"Yes, Honey," She answered, "Come on in."
I entered, leaving the door slightly ajar, and walked over to her bed. "Mom, Can I ask you something?
"Sure, Baby. What is it?"
