OK, again disclaimers: Every character in these stories that has sex or is treated sexually is over eighteen years old.
If you are not over eighteen, go away. You should not be reading this stuff.
This is a work of fiction and as such has nothing to do with any real persons living or dead. This series of stories contains themes that may be offensive to some people, so be warned that it contains: graphic language and sexual content, incest, bisexuality, group sex, light domination and submission, and who knows what else by the time we're finished. etc. etc. etc.
This is the second installment in what I hope will become a multipart incest-harem serial. I have always enjoyed reading Literotica stories, but didn't know how much I would enjoy writing them until now.
This is the second chapter of my first attempt at writing fiction. The comments, encouragements, and criticisms I received for chapter one are overwhelming and much appreciated. Thank you, it is all very helpful.
So, any feedback is appreciated. Feel free to encourage, discourage, or offer editorial and future plot suggestions, or simply let me know if you do or don't like it.
Once again I have chosen to not enlist an editor. This will change soon, but I'm still interested in how much I can improve on my own.
I think the writing in this chapter is much improved over the first, but I'll let you be the judge.
I hope you enjoy yourself and thank you for reading.
Chapter 2
Jeannie is waiting for me to carry the cooler down to the beach. She has planned a day by the ocean for me, and her closest girlfriends Sarah, Shauna, and Taylor. Jeannie and her three confidants are all stunningly beautiful and sexy. I'll be spending today watching oiled young bodies and hiding my erections from four hot women.
No, I mean hiding my erections from three hot women. All four are hot, but after last night I'm sure Jeannie wouldn't mind another peek at my hard dick. She might be looking forward to it. And that's what's got me thinking.
I had sex with my sister Jeannie for the first time last night, and it was life changing. It was the best sex I've ever had, and I think she feels the same way about it. My little sister is a smart and lusty woman, who sucks and fuck like a hungry mink. I love her completely.
Unfortunately, some people take a pretty dim view of incest, and that's a problem if our little secret is ever revealed. Incest offends the 'decent' people, and if we're found out things will go sideways pretty fast. We'll be labeled as sexual deviants by everyone we know. Our parents, although I don't know their take on incest, may not accept our choices, or worse yet find them unforgivable. That would be hard for all of us, especially Jeannie.
She want's our taboo affair to continue, and frankly so do I. But, is it worth the risk? Do we go after what we both want so much? Or, do we bury our feelings, and take the path of conformity and safety?
My thoughts swirl as I walk over to meet Jeannie at the big house. All of this is new and different for me, so I'm uncertain about what I should say and how I should act. I'm a little nervous about us being alone together. Do I mention last night? Do I not mention it? I feel like the lanky fifteen-year-old I was ten years ago; awkward and afraid to talk to girls. I need to pull it together, and figure this out.
In my mind I imagine Gramps' voice. He's still teaching me, "Face your problems head on. The time to act is now. Fear is the mind killer." The catechisms of our childhood were part golden rule, part copy-book lines, and part old book quotes. Gramps always knew what to do and never hesitated. I've always wanted to be just like him; strong, self-assured, and in control.
I know what needs doing, but I've been pussy-footing around it all morning. I needed time to come to grips with my decision, but now it's clear. I know that what I'm about to do is sure to piss Jeannie off, but it's for the best.
Jeannie and I are going to have a serious talk.
"C'mon slow poke, move it. The girls are on their way and I want some alone time before they get here," Jeannie calls from the patio. The cooler is packed and she's ready to hit the beach.
Every time I see her my heart skips. Today she's wearing another gauzy cover-up and I can't wait to see what she's wearing (or barely wearing) underneath. Her wide brimmed hat, designer shades, and strappy sandals make my little sister look sleek and sophisticated.
"I'm ready, let's get down there," I say, and grab the cooler. I offer my free hand to Jeannie and we start down the long path to our private beach.
We walk hand-in-hand through the dunes toward the ocean. I know that what I'm about to say will surely ruin her happy mood, but I've made my decision and now is the moment of truth. It's time to say the most ominous words said in any relationship.
"Jeannie, we need to talk."
She knows what I'm about and her smile disappears. She stops, steps in front of me, and turns. I can sense her hackles rising. Like a spring she uncoils on me.
"Stop right there," she scolds, and moves in close to point her index finger just inches away from my stunned face.
I stop cold and she begins her tirade.
"I've been expecting you to have second thoughts. I've been waiting for this. Your petty misgivings. Your, your, 'I'm the big brother, and what we're doing is so...so wrong' crap," she says, holding in angry tears. "I'm ready for all of it. So you listen to me, and you listen good, big brother.
"Last night I made promises to you. Promises that I've thought about for a very long time, and that I intend to keep. You made promises to me too. Then you fucked me. You put your cock inside of me and filled my cunt with your cum.
"That sealed the deal.
"Now, we're bound together in a new way. A perfect way. You are the only man for me, and I am yours in every way that you can imagine."
I'm a little blown away by this and stand there speechless.
With a deep breath she goes on, "I get it. This is all totally new for you. You need time to take it all in, to think about it, to absorb it. Well, I've been thinking, absorbing, and fantasizing about this for a long time. I'm used to the idea, I've thought it through, and I know what we need to do.
"I have a plan that will help you get accustomed to our new relationship while I teach you about what will make me happy, and why," Her voice calms as she continues. "I need time to make this happen, Jackie. Only you can do this for me. Give me a chance, and I'll make you happier than you can ever imagine."
She moves in and rests her forehead on my collarbone, and my worries start to fade away.
She speaks more softly, "I love you, and I know that you love me. So, lighten up big brother, and let me show you how wonderful our lives can be. Please Jackie, please give me this one chance. I'm begging you, baby."
Her face melts into a cute little girl's pout as she looks up and I know that she's right. I pull her closer. We might be seen from the house, so I kiss her forehead instead of her lips and softly say, "you're right squirt, I'm sorry. We'll figure this out together. Follow your plan, and show me how I can make you happy."