This is just my third attempt at writing an erotic story and I would greatly appreciate comments or suggestions to improve.
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It was a hot balmy August day and I was home alone, which was not very usual in our busy household.
Let me explain I lived in this beautiful house with my mom and dad who were out visiting relatives and 3 brothers, Martin 18 years, Adam 20 years and the eldest Bobby 24years, a year older than me, who were all out doing their own thing leaving me at home to enjoy the peace and quiet. I had at least all afternoon to enjoy the solitude and relax after finishing my university degree.
Because it was such a beautiful day I decided to take advantage of our pool and private back garden so I changed out my skirt and blouse and put on my bikini so I could top up my suntan. I consider my self reasonably attractive I have long dark hair which today is up in a pony tail, with 34D tits a slim waist and long shapely legs. I keep myself fit swimming and playing in the university athletics team.
I settled myself down on the lounger with a cold glass of wine and a good book to spend a couple of hours relaxing and winding down after the last few months of hectic chaos of studying and exams and competing in the university athletic trials.
I poured some sun lotion into my hand and began to rub into all the exposed places on my body so I didn't get burnt by the hot sun. The lotion was cool to the touch and as I rubbed it across my flat belly and into my cleavage and around my firm breasts, my nipples reacted to my own touch and had hardened, (I wish someone was here to do it for me. I thought.) and then continued along my legs.
After being in the sun for a while reading and dozing I was aware of little rivulets of sweat trickling between my breasts and on my belly so decided to pop into the pool to cool off.
Ah the water was divine, so cooling and fresh. I swam and floated on my back for a while before I heard a noise at the side gate as if someone was trying to enter the back garden. Thinking it was just one of my brothers home earlier than expected I didn't take much notice and continued to float on my back with my eyes closed, enjoying the cool water and warm sun rays.
When I did open my eyes, standing there at the far edge near my lounger was Bobby, just looking at me, standing so still, at first I didn't register him being there at all because of the sun in my eyes. I waved and called out hello and swam towards him.
I reached the end of the pool and Bobby bent down to help pull me out but slipped on some of my sun tan lotion I had spilt and landed head first into the water. He came up spluttering at the unexpected ducking and grabbed my arm to try and duck me under to stop my laughter. Instead as we faced each other, just for a split second our eyes locked and bodies reacted unconsciously to the closeness and the fact I was only wearing a brief bikini while Bobby's thin T shirt and shorts had become almost see through in the water. I could see I had had an effect on him.
I had never really looked at my brother in any way except as an older brother and was quite shocked at my thoughts as I saw him with the definite hard on beneath his thin shorts. His muscles rippled as he moved and I was thankful we were in the water so he wouldn't see my juices had started to flow.
"This is crazy. This is so wrong. He's my brother!!" I said to myself.
Bobby must have felt the electricity between us as his hand moved from my arm to my breast,
"OMG Carrie, what are you doing to me? This is sooo not how we should be acting."
