I like stories where a woman rides on her son's/brother's/daddy's lap, eventually causing an incestuous accident. Actually, I really loved the first I read. The other ones, even if well or better written, had pretty much all the same unfolding. So I tried to write my own by taking things as differently as I could, even if in the end, things happen pretty much as you could think they would.
Unfortunately, the situation I chose to put my characters in was forcing me to keep the whole thing short to make it seem as sudden as possible. In the end, it was just too short so I thought about making it part of a longer work.
So, here is the riding part plus a bit of story development, and if you don't like how things are evolving, well you can always stop reading me after this.
PS: About having someone proofreading my stories, I think it would be unwise to depend on that if I want to improve my skills. I hope you will bear with my selfishness and still be able to enjoy my work. Feel free to point out my mistakes if you want to, I'll welcome your help gladly.
PPS: Of course, they're all 18 or older.
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The bus was packed.
No free seat would have been alright, but there was practically no free air inside. It was full of people sweating and bumping each others at every street corner. The worst part was the driver who seemed totally devoid of logic, a thing that would've allowed him to figure that "crowded bus + speed" isn't such a good combination.
Standing in the middle of that giant oven, Sam and Jill were trying their best not to fall. It was easier for Sam since his back was pressed on a pole, but his sister was really starting to lose balance. Even if she could somewhat steady herself by grabbing her sibling's shirt, she was constantly bumped by the most big-butted woman she had ever seen. Jill guessed that, by the way the woman didn't even flinch each time her huge bottom collided with force on her poor back, she was totally oblivious to her situation. There wasn't much she could have done anyway with the way that moron was driving.
Speaking of the devil, he took another corner as if he was actually piloting a sports car (and he probably was, in his head) which resulted in a massive bump from the woman's butt. This was too much for Jill who started falling forward with a small yelp.
Sam, who was lost in his thoughts until then, got startled at the sight of his sister falling on him and tried to catch her the best he could. Unfortunately, the best he could was by getting a tight grip on her firm butt. Of course, since she had to wear a skirt on that hot day, Sam's hands were feeling the soft fabric of his sister's panties and, at the boy's horror, a good part of her ass cheeks. It didn't help that she exhaled loudly on his ear which made the whole situation all the more confusing.
A jolt ran through Jill's body when she felt her brother's hands on her butt, a sensation she had only experienced on a few nights. She couldn't repress a loud sigh when she recognized the feeling and it was too late when she realized that her mouth was right on Sam's ear.
The boy tried to quickly jerk his hands off his sister but the bus suddenly jumped, passing way too fast on a speed bump. Sam's reflexes got the best of him and he grabbed his sister's ass even tighter, even feeling the sides of her pussy with his forefingers.
When Jill felt her brother's fingers brushing her girlhood, she sighed once again in his ear, grabbing his shoulders to retrieve her balance. It had been a while since she had taken care of herself and she didn't know that it would feel so much stronger at someone else's touch.
That was too much for Sam who sensed his dick growing in his pants when he felt his sister's warm breath for the second time. He finally withdrew his hands from his sister's ass but it was already too late, his cock was now fully erect and it demanded attention.
Jill was too busy with her own body's sensations to notice the lump growing against her thigh. She tried to recollect herself while backing off her brother now that his hands weren't preventing her. Little did she know that the large woman, too happy to notice the free room behind her, had taken a few steps back. Jill bumped again on the large romp and fell once more on her brother. Only this time, she tried to regain her balance by spreading her legs.
The poor Sam didn't know what was worse, feeling his sister's chest pressed on his own or feeling her crotch landing right on his already hard dick. He quickly tried to push her off, which resulted in her being bounced back on him by the woman's bottom.