After the last submission β Timmy's Step-mother gets Supersized β got such a pounding (and not in a good way!), I thought I'd put one up for the incest purists.
This one is a Daddy/daughter tale. The car breaks down close to Jonathon's destination. He walks the last mile to the cottage and finds his daughter nude in the garden.
Etc.
It's set in England, and I use English vernacular. Some phrases may be unfamiliar to other readers.
Without being condescending, a Hillman was a make of car way back when, a Foden is a truck, which I think I describe as a lorry at some point. I use 'twat' to describe female genitalia a couple of times. Pussy isn't a word an English girl would use back in the 70s β at least I don't think so. Plimsolls are a type of old-fashioned running shoe.
Anyway, I hope these points don't have too much of a negative impact on the flow for a reader.
Feedback is appreciated.
Apologies for any errors which may remain in the text.
I hope you enjoy the tale.
Thank you for reading.
GA β Da Nang, Vietnam β 25th of April 2016.
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1973
Jonathon pushes the Hillman as close as he can to the hedge, then walks the last mile to the cottage. It's Sunday, which means there are no heavy vehicles lumbering up and down the lane to the quarry. It's also a hot afternoon and, by the time Jonathon arrives at the blue gate, he's ready for a long drink of water β and a cold beer.
He's just reaching for the latch when he sees her on the lawn, the grass like green baize, the girl, youthful and lithe, laid on her front on a plaid blanket.
Jonathon is about to call out hello when he realises she's stark naked, no bikini strap across her back, no briefs protecting her modesty.
He pauses, throat working, his body responding to the sight of her bare form, the bucolic setting under the high summer sky setting the juices flowing within.
Jonathon gapes in confusion for several seconds, conflicting emotions rising inside him. His mind is cleaved in two, morality and decency suggesting he turn around and walk away. He should make his approach obvious to give the girl time to react, so she can get covered up before he sticks his head over the gate. But, way down deep in some dark and clandestine place, carnal urges compel him to stare at his daughter as she soaks up the sun. Jonathon knows he shouldn't be there this way. He knows it's sordid and wrong. Spying on his daughter as she lies there oblivious is a despicable act, but he can't quite bring himself to tear his attention away from what he thinks are the girl's exquisite curves.
She's just so lovely laid out as she is β natural and free with the sun warming her shoulders and the long sweep of her back, her bare buttocks so ripe and adorable...
The incongruous thought of
I hope you don't burn
pops into his head, with Amber choosing that very moment to turn over.
Jonathon feels the desire swell up from his core. He swallows again, gulping down on the urge to unzip his flies and haul out his length.
He remains perfectly still, gaping at the front of his daughter's body, his eyes going from her face to her breasts and down over her tummy. He boggles at what looks to be a wisp of light smoke decorating her mound, the girl's pubic bush so fair and delicate he can see the crease of her sex as she stands to throw a glance up to the sky, shielding her eyes with a salute as she checks the angle of the sun and her shadow laid out on the blanket.
Jonathon is fully aware movement attracts the eye, so he remains perfectly still, illicit desires curdling his guts as he continues to soak up the detail of his own daughter's nude body, guts churning with anxiety as he hopes she doesn't happen to throw a look in his direction.
To his immense relief, she settles down on her back, face directed up towards the sky, sighing as she closes her eyes.
He's reluctant to leave, but eventually does after a last lingering stare at the girl on the blanket.
Distracted, Jonathon walks back along the lane, getting as far as the chapel set in its glade some hundred yards from the road. He opens the old wrought-iron gate and moves along the path to sit in the shade of the lych-gate, his mind in turmoil at what he's just done.
He leaves it ten minutes before sighing and standing, brushing the dust from the seat of his jeans.
When he gets back to the cottage, he sees she's still laid out in all her naked glory, but at least he's prepared for the encounter this time.
"Bloody hell, Amber!" he cries, turning away from the gate to avert his eyes as she levers up onto her elbows and forearms. "Put some bloody clothes on, will you!"
1976
The shrill ring of the phone is insistent. "All right," he says before muttering a curse. "I'm bloody-well coming."
"Dad?" Jonathon hears when he holds the receiver up to his ear.
"Yes, sweetie, it's me," he replies. "How are you, darling?"
There's a pause before Amber says, "I ... I need to get away from here, daddy. I keep seeing him and it hurts when I do."
Jonathon feels the rise of anger inside him. "Is he bothering you...?"
"No," says his daughter. "He's kept his distance. I just keep on seeing him in all the old places. I was wondering ... Do you mind if I use the cottage for a few weeks? I've checked the diary, there aren't any bookings."
Jonathon's reply is immediate. "Of course not," he says. "It's yours as much as mine."
As he says it, Jonathon's mind takes him back to that time, back to when the damnable car had broken down and he'd been forced to walk along the lane. To when he saw Amber laid out on the lawn.
"I was thinking of going over myself," Jonathon adds, his voice cracking in response to his sudden erection.
There's a long silence before he hears Amber say, "That'd be nice, daddy. It's supposed to be warm at the weekend."
His Adam's apple bounces, anticipation gripping his stomach when his daughter says, "We could go walking over the hill. We could take a picnic up there."
There's another pause, with Jonathon's throat too constricted for him to make any reply.
"You know, like we did before..." his daughter ends on a whisper.
"That would be lovely," Jonathon says, the words coming up as a half-choked gurgle. He's reeling from the implications of what he says next. "I ... I could drive over on Saturday morning. When were you thinking of going?"
Amber tells him, "Tonight. I really do need to get away from this place."
The call ends a few moments later.
"See you on Saturday," Jonathon says to his daughter.
"All right. Love you, dad."
There's a click. She's gone. Jonathon replaces the handset into its cradle, then goes to his library where he pours a generous measure of whisky into a cut-glass tumbler.
"Oh God," Jonathon whispers to himself as he settles into the big leather chair. "Oh shit, oh fuck ... Amber..." he breathes.