(Note to readers:
I was content to end this series with Chapter 5 and Becky's "I love you" as the end of the tale. However, several of you commented that it left you with a need for closure. Luckily I can easily add a chapter, so here it is. I had to work a little harder on this one, but I enjoyed it.
By the way, next time I write something, I intend to give the main character a name. Maybe this guy's name should have been Lucky, as one reader suggested.
One of you commented that there was no time in our history when we had both Viagra and legal drinking for 18 year olds. Oops, I guess I got a little carried away. But it was entertaining to see that you were paying attention.
I hope you like it,
Strawberry)
Chapter 6: A Final Visit from Jeannie
As long as Becky and I stayed in that bedroom, we could love each other and not have to deal with the outside world's complications. That feeling lasted only a short time. We got dressed and as we stepped into the living room we mistakenly thought that we would be the only ones in the house. Sitting on the sofa were Jeannie and Tom, drinking beer and watching television.
"What in the hell are you doing here?" I blurted out.
As Jeannie and Tom stood up, Jeannie was quick to respond, "You left us stranded, asshole. I didn't drive here; the kids just dropped me off on the way to the movie. And Will hasn't made it back yet. So that leaves just your car."
Jeannie and Tom were standing opposite from Becky and me as I said, "Well, neither of you shits is setting foot in my car! You can walk!"
Tom spoke up, "Fuck you, asshole!" And he gave his statement some body language by grabbing his crotch and lifting up on it, while he looked me in the face.
Then Jeannie chimed in, "Yeah. Fuck you asshole!" But instead of grabbing herself, she reached over with both hands for Tom's crotch and lifted up, with that evil grin on her face.
She had a sense of humor, even when she was being a bitch.
Before anyone else could say anything, we heard movement from outside the kitchen, and then the banging open of the kitchen door. I figured it must be Will getting back, but then I heard the cat hissing, and a strange male voice grumbled, "Fucking cat!"
"YEEOOOOW!!!" and the cat flew through the kitchen doorway into the living room, where it hit the floor and disappeared into the back of the house. All of a sudden, a very large guy was literally filling in the door frame, and my intuition told me that he was very pissed.
Jeannie exclaimed, "Eric!!"
Becky turned to me, wide-eyed, saying, "Elle was thinking about calling Jeannie's boyfriend!"
Wow, I hope I never get Elle angry at me. That girl has a mean streak.
Eric the giant looked over the two couples in the room, then turned his attention to Tom, "Jeannie told me about you! You've been coming on to my girl all summer, even though you knew she had a boyfriend. I've just driven two hours to teach you a lesson!"
Tom really should have put more energy into protecting himself, rather than looking and pointing at me with panic on his face. Eric wasn't in much of a mood for explanations as he covered the distance between them in two large steps, and cuffed Tom backwards over the couch.
Jeannie started screaming at Eric immediately, "You idiot! He didn't deserve that. Stop and let me talk to you!" But Eric proceeded to step up on the couch in pursuit of Tom. Jeannie jerked on him, and Eric stumbled backward to the floor level, but as his feet touched he turned to slap Jeannie hard, and she went sprawling onto the rug.
I was already moving forward as the thought was first occurring to my brain that I had to do something. I attempted to tackle Eric the Giant, and he might have gone down except that the couch propped him up. I was hanging on to his mid-section for all I was worth. Tom started to stand up behind the couch just as Eric spun around, attempting to get rid of me. My whole body flew out parallel with the ground, and my legs hit Tom in the face, sending him down again.
I was still hanging on, with my shoulder in Eric's side and my face buried in his back. I considered biting him, but even in this excitement I knew that it might just piss him off even more. And no one would forgive me for such an unmanly act.
I could see Jeannie coming toward us, and I got a glimpse of Becky holding a skillet. Eric was pummeling me in the ribcage as I yelled out to the girls, "Ya'll stand back!" The next time I could see them, Tom was standing there with the girls just watching. "Not you Tom, I need some help here!"
Eric stopped pounding on me and went for Tom, with the weight of my body slowing him down. Tom had the skillet now, and this time he was ready to dodge the swinging fist. Eric managed to land a glancing blow off Tom's shoulder, which put Tom off balance. But even off his back foot, Tom could deliver a blistering forehand. He smacked Eric right on the hip, just below where I was gripping. It must have sent lightning bolts down Eric's leg, because he went down like an oak tree.