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The Storm

The Storm

by The_ansan
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Author's note: I have enjoyed reading several of the works published here on Literotica, and wish to thank the many contributors for their creativeness and hard work. This story is my gesture of gratitude, a contribution to the community here, and is my first effort at writing in this genre. I hope you find it as enjoyable to read as I have enjoyed yours. It is a stand-alone work, but I envisioned it as the first installment of a three-part story, if there is interest.

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"Daydreaming?"

"What?" I asked. Mia's soft voice had broken several minutes of silence, shaking me from my thoughts.

"I asked if you were daydreaming, Daddy," she replied. "You seem like your mind is somewhere else."

In fact, it was, but it was not a place I could share with her. First, understand that Mia is not my daughter. Kelly is my daughter and only child. Mia is the daughter of our neighbors, Todd and Marie. Just Marie now, I suppose, Todd having died two years ago from an aneurism. Kelly and Mia were lifelong friends, being born only six days apart. They had grown up together and now were inseparable besties. Well, almost inseparable. Kelly was supposed to be with us on this excursion, but a fellow employee where she worked had an emergency appendectomy and Kelly had reluctantly agreed to work his shifts. This was to have been the first time Mia would come with us, and although I had thought to cancel, Kelly, Mia, and Marie had all ganged up on me to go ahead and go through with it.

I was married to the most amazing lady to have ever graced the Earth. Elizabeth and I married while I was still in the Army, not long before I was due to re-enlist for another hitch. I could not bear to be away from her for more than a few hours at a time and left the military for a more comfy, domestic life with the lady of my dreams. We bought the house next to Todd and Marie, and soon became close friends. Todd was retired Navy, and was thirty-seven when he met and fell in love with eighteen-year-old Marie during his final tour of duty in the Philippines. Despite their age difference, Marie was a gorgeous, busty Filipina who stole his heart at first sight. Or so Todd confessed at one of our Sunday BBQs. I had no reason to doubt him.

Marie and Elizabeth quickly became very close friends, much like our daughters had become, and our two homes had seemed like one big home with an air gap between them, where all four females moving freely from one house to the other. Todd had been an orphan, raised in the system and without any relatives, so when he and Marie asked Elizabeth and me to be Mia's godparents, we accepted without hesitation. Three-and-a-half years ago, while sitting at a red light, my beautiful Elizabeth was killed by a drunk driver. Since then, I've had no desire to date other women, content to focus on being the best father possible for my daughter. She is my main joy in life, and my greatest source of pride.

"I was thinking about a couple of birthday parties I attended last month." Okay, maybe that was a half-truth. It's where my daydream had started. Both girls were born in October, and both had turned eighteen this year. They had grown up so fast. Too fast. Kelly would finish up her final year of high school, we'd have the Summer together, and then she'd be off to college. I knew the empty nest was coming, but I dreaded it. Mia would be going to the same college, of course, and I knew her leaving was heavy on Marie's mind, also.

During Mia's eighteenth birthday party, I was struck by the realization that both of these girls were no longer girls. They were now, officially and irreversibly, women. It was an odd, somewhat unsettling new reality. It was the first time I had seen Mia as a woman and not just the neighbors' daughter.

"What about them?" Mia asked sweetly. "Did you forget to give me one of my presents, Daddy?"

I grinned. There was a present I would love to give her, but again, it wasn't something I could share at the moment.

"No, just remembering all the BBQs and birthday parties, and how you two have grown up to be such beautiful, remarkable young women." I confessed.

"Oh," she said with a trace of disappointment. "I thought maybe you were running away with me." Puzzled, I glanced over at her pouting, angelic face.

"What? Why'd you say something like that?"

"Because, Daddy," she said mischievously, leaning close toward me and playfully grabbing my arm, "you passed the exit for the lake about a mile back."

I looked around, realized she was right.

"Shit!"

We caught the next exit, went back, and arrived at the state park campground only ten minutes behind schedule. I pulled into the empty parking area and we grabbed our gear from the back of the Ram. Closing up the truck's shell and locking it, we headed for the camping spot I had taken Elizabeth and Kelly to many times, before. We chatted along the way and the two mile trek went by quickly. This was Mia's first time, so it was all new and exciting for her.

This was a place I was familiar with since my childhood. Kelly had fallen in love with it, too, and my passion for rock climbing seemed to have likewise afflicted my daughter. Mia had never wanted to take part, as her thing was gymnastics. Her little five-one body was powerful for her size and she had excelled at it. Puberty had ended it for her, though, by blessing her with very full, D-cup breasts, almost as large as her mother's. Her thick, muscular thighs ended at hips where a large, round, well-muscled butt began. Her long black hair fell just below her shoulders, and her bangs accentuated a gorgeous face of caramel skin, captivating almond eyes, and the most luscious, kissable lips I'd ever seen. Built for sex, Mia was a stark contrast to my daughter. Kelly was a gorgeous young woman, as well, but at five-ten, she was a good deal taller than Mia. Where Mia's physique was born from years of gymnastic training, Kelly's body was lean and athletic, developed from her dedication to distance running and rock climbing, which never suffered when her C-cup boobs came in.

Mia and I arrived at the camp site, which was just over a mile from Little Flat Top. Mia had spent the last year practicing at a local indoor activity center that had a rock climbing wall. She was anxious to test her new skills on a real climb. Little Flat Top was a great exercise for beginners, with small vertical walls and frequent level spots to catch one's breath and prepare for the next step. On top, the reward was a stunning view of the lake and the mountains on the far side, and the hazy, distant mountains beyond those. The mini-mountain took less than an hour to scale, and the top was flat, running around sixty feet from North to South, and a bit over twenty feet from East to West. It was a perfect place to camp overnight in the Summer, looking westward across the lake. We were making this climb in mid-November, though, so we wouldn't be spending the night.

I dropped my pack and began pulling out what I needed to set up the camp. Mia shed her backpack, too, and stretched her tired back muscles. She looked toward the shoreline, puzzled.

"Is that ice?" she asked.

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"Yep," I returned, still focused on the task at hand.

"It doesn't seem that cold, does it?"

"Well, hon, it's low forties right now, but we're coming in after a really bad cold snap. Anomalous, I think they called it. Temps were down in the teens for nearly a week, here. I was going to call the trip off but then the weather broke yesterday. Forties aren't bad."

Mia mulled over what I had said. "I never heard of anonymous weather, before. What's it mean?"

Finishing with the big tent, I turned to her and grinned.

"Well," I started, "either that it's sneaky weather or it's weather that doesn't have a name."

She pierced me with those intoxicating eyes, suspicious. I cracked up and she slapped my arm surprisingly hard for one so tiny.

"Don't be mean, Daddy!" she scolded, pretending to be mad at me. I stepped in close and wrapped my arms around her, holding her tight, rocking her from side to side. Mia had begun to call me Daddy several months back, but only when seconding instances where Kelly had called me Daddy first, usually a "Please, Daddy!" when the girls wanted something. Apparently, it's harder for daddies to say no to two Please, Daddies than just one. Actually, it's not harder... it's impossible. For me, anyway. Not long after, I found out from Marie that Kelly had started parroting Mia's "Please, Mommy" with her. This day marked the first time Mia was calling me Daddy without following Kelly's lead. I thought it was adorable and didn't mention it.

I bent forward slightly and kissed the top of her head. She wrapped her arms around my waist and hugged me back. I didn't want the moment to end, but we did have a camp to set up.

"Need help with that pup tent?" I asked.

"Not really," she replied, pulling it from her pack. "It's little and just sorta pops up. I only need to stake the corners and it's good." I nodded and began to prep my pack for the climb.

"Mia, I think I can carry all the heavy stuff in my backpack, but I won't have room for a sleeping bag. Let's put everything from your pack into mine, and you just carry the sleeping bag. Take mine." I handed it to her. "It's a double-size bag for two, but it's pretty light."

Mia took it and started handing me the items in her pack.

"Do we even need a sleeping bag if we're not staying up there all night?"

"Absolutely," I assured her. "It's more for emergencies than for sleeping."

"Got it," she said, stuffing it in her pack. Her regular size sleeping bag went into her pup tent, while rope, plastic sheeting, four Sterno cans, four liters of water, and various other items went into my pack. Once we were both packed and ready, we started the final hike toward Little Flat Top. Nearly a mile North of our camp was a patch of water, now frozen over, that formed a kind of bowl, jutting in from the shoreline, about a hundred-plus feet across. An oddity, it was nearly thirty feet deep and made a marvelous swimming hole in Summer. We skirted it and a half-mile later we were standing at the base of our climb on its eastern face. Mia shifted her backpack, letting it settle into a more comfortable spot and grinned at me.

"This doesn't look so tough," she said.

"It's not," I returned, "just takes a bit to get to the top."

When I asked if she needed a minute to catch her breath, she laughed and started up the mountain, telling me that only old men needed to stop and catch their breath. Mia's time at the activity center had paid off. She went up the mountain like she'd been doing it her whole life, but I still followed her closely, just in case. In truth, I also wanted to be as close to her round, meaty ass as possible. It was unbelievably enticing, making me want to reach out and grab a handful.

When Mia reached the summit, I heard her gasp. She moved forward onto the tiny mesa-like top and I climbed up and stood beside her. The view was extraordinary. We still had two hours of sunlight left, but it had been overtaken by great banks of storm clouds in the West, just past the mountains on the far shore. It was a spectacular panorama of blues and layered greys, with an unseen sun still managing to cast sparkles on the wind-whipped waters of the lake.

I dropped my pack and quickly retrieved my camera. I had to capture the scene. As I did so, Mia stood next to me, enchanted, taking deep breaths of the chilly air. When I had taken enough photos to be satisfied, I lowered my Nikon and gazed at it all with my goddaughter. I wished that Kelly had been there to enjoy the moment with us. I felt Mia take my arm in hers and give it a squeeze. She then pulled me down and burned a kiss onto my cheek, making my insides feel like they had instantly turned into a quivering sack of gelatin.

Once Mia had released her hold on me, I repacked the camera and turned to face her. I tried to hide the concern that was probably all over my face, but I'm not sure how effective I was. She looked up at me, still grinning wide.

"What?" she beamed.

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"Sweetie, we need to start back down, now," I explained.

"Why? We just got here!" I saw her eyes narrow, just a bit. "Please, Daddy, just a little longer?" She had a serious two-handed grip on my heartstrings.

"Mia," I began, "I would love to stay up here longer with you, but we can't. Those clouds over there," I pointed, "are snow clouds. Big time snow clouds. The weather guys said that front was supposed to be fifty miles North of where they are now, heading away from us to the northeast."

"How far are they?"

"Twenty miles West of here, maybe less. And they're heading straight at us, best I can tell. We need to get to camp, quickly."

Mia seemed to grasp the gravity of the situation and she started back down the way we came up. Several times, I had to tell her to slow down and be cautious. Half way down, snow began to blow over the top of the mountain, falling lightly on us at first but getting heavier by the minute. The last hundred feet found us struggling in a blizzard, with snow creating a near whiteout condition. At the bottom, Mia began to run in the direction of our camp, shielding her face and eyes as best she could from the wind-driven snow. With the snow came another wave of frigid air, causing the temperature to plummet to the low twenties or less.

I chased Mia through the biting tempest, weaving a path through the trees that bordered the lake. She had a lead on me of fifty feet or so, but even that close it was getting difficult to see her. I called to her to slow down for a minute, but she either couldn't hear me over the roar of the storm or was too scared to slow her pace. Then it happened. One moment I could make out the shape of her running body, and in the next moment she was gone!

For a brief second, I was confused. Glancing around, I knew what had just happened and my heart leaped to my throat. Then, I was running with everything I had, dropping my backpack as I raced toward the last place I had seen her. Mia had emerged from the treeline and was running across a flat, open space covered with snow. Not realizing where she was, Mia had tried to run across the frozen swimming hole and had broken through into the icy water. Twenty feet from the shoreline, I saw her head and backpack emerge. She tried to scream but couldn't. I leaped from the edge, crashing through the ice not far behind her. The force of my impact took me under but I was no stranger to cold water, or the million freezing needles it always seemed to jab me with. We Rangers love that stuff, right?

A couple fast paddles and kicks and I broke the surface right behind her. Mia had never been submerged in ice water, and its effect on her was debilitating. I held on to her down vest and tore away the water-laden backpack. Fiercely, I swam back the way we had come, Mia in tow, until coming to the end of the broken ice. With one hand on her vest and the other between her legs, I hurled her from the water like a hundred pound shot put. The throw put me back under water for a couple seconds, but as I made my way out of the water I saw that Mia had slid all the way back to the shore.

Rushing to her, I snatched her up and threw her over my shoulder like a caveman, grabbed up my pack, and raced off around the snow-blanketed swimming hole toward our camp. It probably only took six or seven minutes to get there, but it felt like twice that. My body burned off the last traces of adrenalin as I set Mia down beside the tents. I dropped my pack and pulled two towels from inside as the wind screamed in at us from across the lake.

I grabbed Mia and forced her to look at me. She shook uncontrollably and panic filled her teary eyes.

"Listen, Mia!" I yelled over the storm. "We have to get your core temperature up quickly! You have to get out of these wet clothes, dry off with these towels, and get in your sleeping bag!" She nodded her understanding but her shaking hands could only fumble ineffectively with her clothing. Seeing her helplessness, I knew she was already hypothermic. I hastily began removing her icy clothes. For all my desire to see Mia naked, this was not how I wanted it to happen.

I pulled off her panties last, she was too far in a hypothermic hell to even notice. I wrapped her torso with one of the towels and her semi-frozen hair with the other.

"Get in the sleeping bag, Mia!" I shouted, pushing her trembling body inside the little tent. Unable to lower the bag's zipper on her own, I leaned in, opened it for her and got her positioned inside. I zipped it up and withdrew from the pup tent. I spent the next ten minutes arranging both of our wet clothes inside the big tent, hanging the wet fabric using paracord above Sterno cans, propping it all open with sticks I collected outside beneath the snow. Naked and close to collapsing, I grabbed two pairs of socks, two bottles of water, and several granola and energy bars from my pack before crawling inside Mia's tent.

The minutes she had spent in the sleeping bag were not enough to quell her shaking. I was shaking uncontrollably, as well, teeth chattering. I held up a pair of the socks for her to see.

"Hon, I need to put these on your feet to help get your temperature up, okay?" She nodded and I unzipped the bag, drawing a scared whimper from her.

"You're going to be okay, sweetheart. I promise." Mia nodded and I flipped open the sleeping bag. Even in the failing light, she made my heart flutter. It might have been the hypothermia, but I doubt it. Her poor body was still an amazing sight to behold. I reached down and took hold of her right ankle, pulled her foot toward me. I quickly placed the sock on her foot, then pulled her left foot toward me to repeat the process. This time, it caused her legs to spread, giving me an unobstructed view of her pussy. Again, I nearly experienced heart failure.

I hastily put the other pair of socks on myself and looked at Mia, still lying there and trying to cover her phenomenal tits from my view. I shifted her onto her left side, close to the zipper, and moved over and behind her. Nestled in, I draped the top of the bag over us and zipped it shut. Mia tried to say something but still couldn't manage the words. Spooning with her, I pressed my half-frozen body against hers, putting my right arm over and around her. I had been worried about my body being too cold for her, but she had warmed very little since first entering the sleeping bag.

Mia pulled her right arm out from beneath mine, placed it on top and pressed my forearm tightly against her breasts, holding me there as we both continued to tremble. Her round, inviting ass was pressed firmly against my pelvis, and I was terrified that I would get hard. After what seemed like a half-hour or more, the shaking began to subside, with only an occasional twitch. It was Mia who broke the silence.

"Thank you," she said, her voice almost a whisper in the now darkened tent. She leaned her head forward and kissed my hand. I reciprocated the gesture by kissing the top of her shoulder and going in for a cheek-to-cheek nuzzle.

"For what, hon? For dragging you along on the worst campout of your life?" Mia shook her head.

"No, Daddy." Her delicate voice was now officially a faint, tiny whisper. "For saving my life." I kissed her neck and squeezed her close, trailing soft kisses down her neck and across to her shoulder.

"It was my pleasure, baby-girl." Her trembling began again, but I believe it was due more to emotion than the cold. For the next half-hour, I rubbed Mia's cold skin and massaging her tense muscles, trying to improve the circulation so warmth could flow into it. I was worried. She should have recovered by now, I thought. I told her what I needed to do and she nodded in agreement. All that touching was necessary, but several times I felt my cock begin to swell, most noticeably when I was rubbing or massaging her incredible ass. I certainly wasn't having any issues with my own circulation, well, other than in the arm I had been lying on for the past hour.

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