I liked the original concept of this story, but thought it needed more depth, so I played with it a bit as I practiced improving character dialog, for this and future stories. This is a preview of a story that is "in progress" it will change as the story builds and characters evolve.
It is a Fictional Fantasy based story. That means it's not even close to real life. It's just arranged words for entertainment purposes to hopefully get you excited about reading, and anything else you might consider doing with your free hand in the process.
Please keep in mind. I am not even an amateur writer. I don't have an editor or proof reader and I average approximately 3 un-located typos per 10,000 words, which doesn't seem excessive, especially when compared to modern, professionally written, for profit news stories.
I don't expect everyone to get all the subtle dry humor, music and movie references, spanning decades that end up in my stories. Major bonus points if you do notice and get the humor. If you are looking for something that is based on science accurate medical journals and proper nomenclature, you might want to click the back button. There may even be some fictional spelling at some point in the story (two lip flower), and there will definitely be fictional technology and possibly a bit of fictional biology as well.
While visiting with friends, one beautiful sunny California morning, I noticed Brian's sister Vickie had a really cute friend with her. I later discovered her name is Erin and she's pouting, because her boyfriend decided to go skiing with friends, deserting her on Valentine's Day.
At the end of my visit that afternoon, I was getting ready to head home. As I was saying goodbye to Brian and Vickie, I noticed Erin looking sad. I caught her eye, offering a suggestion
"Why don't you let me take you out to dinner, after, we can go for a scenic drive to cheer you up."
Erin's frown slowly changed to a cute little shy smile, as she came over giving me a great big hug, with a little kiss on the cheek. I took her hand in mine as we walked to the car, being a gentleman. I opened her door for her.
Erin is one of the most beautiful, sexy, petite women I have ever had the pleasure of meeting. Green eyes, silky bright red hair, cut in what I guess is called a "bob" style, leaving her sexy smooth neck exposed and vulnerable to sensual kisses.
At 20 years old, she is tiny in stature but big on personality, at only 4'9", she looks like the textbook gymnast at a glance. Unlike most gymnasts, Erin has amazing curves that thankfully, keep her from looking like a little girl, making it very obvious that she is, a curvy, sexy fun size lady.
Erin has incredible, sensual, baby making hips, strong smooth thighs, a tight sweet little apple bottom, rounding out her lower half. She has amazing perky breasts, with delightfully thick raspberry nipples that are delightfully prominent, balancing out the upper half of her sweet little package. She is also very smart, witty with a great sense of humor and quite the teasing little flirt.
I about gave myself whiplash earlier in the day, when I noticed Erin out of the corner of my eye, while in deep discussion with Brian, bending over, legs straight. The thigh gap she flashed was of pure, epic, artistic quality, heart shaped and inspirational at stimulating my desire to ponder, the endless joys that would come from precise and prolonged exploration of Erin's most sacred and exquisite places, second only to her naughty mind.
We had a wonderful dinner, with great conversation. Erin told me she was disappointed because she had planned on giving up her virginity on Valentine's Day, but her boyfriend chose to spend time with friends. The waitress seated us in a nice private booth and by the time we were done ordering, Erin was sitting so close I could smell her perfume and feel her warm thigh touching mine.
When the waitress brought the food to the table I felt Erin place her petite hand on my thigh, redirecting my attention from the waitress, back to Erin's beautiful deep green eyes and sexy smile. Throughout dinner she would only take her hand off my thigh for a moment when she needed both hands, giving me a little squeeze each time her hand returned.
Twice while returning her hand to my thigh, she placed it on my shaft and gave it a gentle squeeze as she turned to look me in the eyes with a sly smile. When we were finished with our meal the waitress came over to ask if we wanted desert, before dropping off the bill. I saw her glance down at Erin's hand on my cock and smile, Erin noticed too.
I watched Erin lean back, giving the waitress a clear view of her hand on my cock, as she slid her fingernail up the shaft, making it buck and jump from her touch. It caused the waitress to giggle and blush, as Erin said.
"We were curious what type of sweet treats you recommend?"
The waitress blushed as she bit her bottom lip, listening to Erin flirt and watching my shaft dance under Erin's petite fingers, before she looked around making sure no one was listening, as she leaned in close and softly said.
"I've heard it can be quite filling, so I'm really looking forward to experiencing a fresh creampie, hot, gooey and deep. The combination of deeply throbbing textures and flavors make it one of the most satisfying treats I could imagine sharing with someone I trust."
When the waitress leaned in to lay the check on the table, she leaned close to Erin, drawing in a deep breath before she whispered.
"I can smell it on you. You're ovulating. It looks like you two are going to have fun tonight, so much potential risk and excitement. My number is on the receipt."
The waitress took one more long look at Erin's hand on my erection, before she winked, walking off with a huge smile and a sexy little wiggle of her hips. I noticed Erin didn't hesitate to put the receipt in her purse as she held eye contact with me, leaning in for a quick kiss.
After our amazing dinner, we walked out to the car and again, I opened her door. Before she got in, she looked up into my eyes with a sexy little smirk as she pressed her breasts against me, giving me the hottest kiss. The kiss was dripping with passion and when I felt her tongue slip between my lips seeking out mine, I felt my cock swell. I'm sure she did too.
Erin broke the kiss, flashing a sly smile as she slid gracefully into the car. I looked down and noticed her short skirt had slid up, exposing her silky pink panties. Erin saw the smile on my face, lowering her eyes to see what I was looking at. She turned back smiling when she notices, she's flashing her panty covered pussy.
With Erin sitting in the passenger seat, it put my growing erection at eye level. As Erin starts to look up, I see her eyes scan past the bulge in my pants and do a double take. Her smile was priceless as she looked up at me and said.
"Are you going to take me, on the scenic ride you promised earlier?"
I looked down again to see her silky pink panties stretched tightly over her cute little camel toe, my eyes devouring her delicious body as I worked my way north. I noticed she was now braless, figuring she must have removed it when she went to the ladies room at the restaurant.